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gnj4u

Ocean Views

Waves come in, bringing more sand
Then take it right back out again
Building up here, breaking down there
Maintaining the balance of nature’s design
Crashing-wave bubbles, frothy and white,
Some bursting in their glory, under the sunlight
Others rejoining the water source for
Another ride on life’s wave.

As I walk, my feet sink into the sand
Level, even-spaced impressions left behind
Oh so briefly before the next waves come and
Obliterate my having been, leaving no trace.
It is as it should be, leave no trace behind.
If I am to remain longer, it will have
To be within your heart and mind
While sandpipers dart back and forth

My footprints follow their own path
Close to the water’s edge as it
Laces its way across the beach
Lapping at my toes and jumping
Up to greet me with a warm
Southern drawl, caressing my thighs
Waiting for the moment when I give in
And submerge myself in its salty depth.
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Posted: Oct 2010
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Unknown

Heed the Call of Love!

Heed the call of Love!

Do you not hear love’s bell striking

Playing it’s tunes of wonder in your heart

Let the warmness of it’s melody

awaken love’s passionate start

Hear the tinkling of love’s romantic call

Hold her close to your heart and kiss her upturned lips

Caress her lips with yours and prove yourself a man

Return her awaiting love, you know she wants it

and you know you can

Feel the sensations of her pulsating breasts against

your manly chest

Place your head upon her opulent cleavage

No longer dream of heaven as you nest

Place her fingers gently within yours

Explore together ~ touch sensuous virginal places

of enchantment

Ignite them with tender fiery touches of love

Place your hand upon her cheek and whisper in her

awaiting ear, of your needy, undying love

Snuggle and cuddle, you know you want too!

Tell her of your love & win her as a loving prize!

she wants & needs you ~ as you want her

She listens hearing the tinkling
of future wedding bells

The Romantic Poet
JimEee
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Posted: Nov 2016
About this poem:
~ Dedicated to a very Special person ~
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lindsyjones

Justice is served

Wailing losers you are
liars, users and blind
you fail to recognize
you have no place in this land

Trump is the president
all he does for the people
is serving with purpose to
quash you all

You that are deplorable

Now KAVNAUGH is confirmed
your drama is done
you should all go to hell
and should all be burned

Pelosi, Feinstein
and all the stupid, blind democrats
resign.
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Posted: Oct 2018
About this poem:
we won
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Abby1963online today!

Thoughts of you

[]As I lay in my bed
Music fills in my head
Memories, of you,
Leaves me feeling blue,
As I toss and turn
I, yearn for you
when am I, going to learn
I, need to wait my turn
Today, I saw pictures
Of you and me,
On ,our wedding day
The love, in our eyes
Could, not be disguised
So much love
Can never die
Now, you're with God, above
I hear you singing,
I see your tears,
No, other love compares
to the love, we share
Our thirty-fourth anniversary
Is a short time away
In my head, we dance and sway
Our, son is a mirror image
I see, you in, his eyes
I see ,you in, his smiles
I hear , you, in his laughter
I thank, God for the little piece
Of you, he's given to me
I'm, gonna close my eyes,
go to sleep
Dream, of me, and you,
and the memories
I have to keep.
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Posted: Jul 2019
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Happychatty1

Love Is

Love
is
Much more
than a warm cosy feeling
More than physical attraction,
or
A chemical reaction
that without rhyme or reason
can strike fast, and hit hard.

Love
is
Perfect imperfection,
unconditional affection.

Love
is
Peace in your mind and spirit
It is where ones heart and soul
contently reside
Without the need or desire
to search for more or
to roam

Love
Means to never feel alone

Love
Is a gift to cherish

Love
to me is
home
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Posted: Nov 2017
About this poem:
My thoughts on love
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cafetwo2010

If he would only call

So many days have come and
gone, still no word from him..
She wrapped her pink blanket
tightly around her and rocked
back and forth
'Where is he, she sobbed?'I need
him so much.'
She had marked X's on her calendar
for all those lost and lonely days,a
wrenching eighteen months without
his hugs and the way he'd twirl her
around the room..
She picked up pen and paper and
drew picture after picture of all those sunny
days and fun walks in the park
The days dragged on which turned
into more months
Not even a letter! 'Did something
happen to him she gasped?'
It's not like him to stay away for
so long..'
Overcome with grief, she just decided
to take a long walk in the rain
She put on her boots and twirled her little
red umbrella kicking through puddles as
she went
Just then the town bus slowed
to a stop and amidst the pouring
rain a man emerged from the bus
with a cane and limp
She stood there in total
disbelief
It was him!
It was daddy home from
the war!
He dropped his cane holding
his arms wide and his little nine
year old girl squealed with joy
'I was hurt and in the hospital
darling and my strength to poor
to write
He pulled a stack of his
little girls letters from his
nap sack and said, 'You
kept me alive my precious..
Let's go home..'
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Posted: May 2014
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Girlygirl196349

EMPTY EYES

As you look into my eyes
You're no longer gonna
See the sunrise
My eyes are annoyed
And now void
I'm no longer your toy
You're just a boy
No longer Bring joy
To these empty eyes
When living in a house of lies
Time seems to fly
While eyes die
It's no surprise
Your never gonna see these eyes cry
For now all I have are empty eyes
I wanna fly high into the sky
Where only the eagles fly
I'm gonna look you
Straight in the eye
Wave
Bye- Bye
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Posted: Jun 2014
About this poem:
What happens when all the trust is gone From an old relationship
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Joseph1112

A Fairy Tale

Before this moment;
Seconds felt like minutes,
Minutes like hours,
Hours like days,
Days like weeks,
Weeks like months,
Months like years,
And I waited for what
Seemed like an eternity for
This moment.

It is here this moment
And I am beside myself,
Never in my life have I been,
So overwhelmed with emotion,
Never more uncertain, never more sure,
This is fear undone, hope unbound,
Joy unspeakable and love unparalleled,
At long last I am yours and you are mine,
And I have loved you but never more than at,
This moment

After this moment;
when years seem like months,
Months like weeks,
Weeks like days,
Days like hours,
Hours like minutes,
And minutes like seconds,
We will reflect on how quickly time passes,
And how we would give anything to relive,
This moment.
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Posted: May 2014
About this poem:
Blessed union! No matter how it ends, this day this moment is for some the happiest ever...
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Joseph1112

Safe

It's what you need most of all,
if you stay here in my arms, you'll be safe,
from all attempts to do you harm,
a promise I owe God, you are safe,
when you're weak I'll be strong,
stay here where you belong, you'll be safe,
until all threats are gone,
until the night turns to dawn, you are safe,
from all troubles in this world,
let all you guard come unfurled, you'll be safe
from all discomfort and ill,
now your heart can be still, you are safe,
till I see comfort in your eyes,
and there is peace when you lie, you'll be safe,
no, I won't ever neglect you,
I swear I will protect you, you are safe!
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Posted: May 2014
About this poem:
I just wanna keep u....
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123whisper

Bells to all Love

Tonight I can write the saddest poem,
while thoughts of my passed away father keeps me awake at night,
I am silently praying for his soul to rest in peace,
putting candle light
which moving reflection on the wall playfully dances...
and like a fly in the spider net
Memories of childhood awaken to be chew piece by piece;
the very first thought dance of Vienna Waltz with my father,
and smile to happy time and tears of loss
mixes all up in one spirit mingles...
Opening the door for the soul of memories to float,
while wind moves curtens making small and big wave -swell.
One suppress life is hidden in my garden branches
which scratching swings on the window glass cries
and shakes door of my tearful soul
waving with white handkerchief to memories of my father.

Thoughts of past and present
like cold birds tightens up to each other
and under brown blanket dreaming awake
of rowing boat with my father,
Thrown net, court fishes...
and last time seeing hes face in tears
wishing me luck in last fare well,
dreaming of lost daughter in the white world;
hes whispers in the wind,
calling me back...
and I am whispering back to the wind;
Forgive me father,
Your seeds of fruit spread fare from you ...
I am whole Me only in joined parts of old and new world.

The bells of universe,I am ringing with you,
Bells of seances,and chaos deafen,
In me all is rolling.In me all is shaken;
senses,and consciousness,half dreams and half awaken,
Death ringing,
Love in me ringing to dreams of anchor in man soul,
But man falls like star in abyss....
where rope of anchor slides true the wounded hands,
that can not hold on to rope from abyss.

In me all is ringing...
Bells of tenderness;like a little tear.
Bells of innocence and regrets;
from mercy and from enlightening.
Bells of soul,bells for kind heart
that writes you with loving and compassionate line of pen,
Bells to all Life
and loss...
Bells to all Love,dreams and ideals;
Found
and Lost...
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Posted: Jul 2014
About this poem:
The sudden news of my father death brings lot's of thoughts of Death and Life,past and present of life joint together ...
On this subject I like to share meaningful quote;"Never part without loving words to think of during your absence.It may be that you will not meet again in this life." -Jean Paul Richter
Thank you for reading long poem.
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