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candykid

Spring Time

The Spring brings things which the Winter witch stole...
Flowers soon bloom, bright colors unfold...
Trees resist breeze, and bring forth their fruit...
For your lovely lips to partake of...

The sounds of your heart are so doubly-sweet...
Natures heartbeat timed in constant repeat...
Recalling the days when you were so near...
Rhythmically wanting you here....
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Posted: May 2014
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Spartacus2012

Fading into you

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I need to feel your breath
upon my skin
to be the pillow on which you sleep
to hear your words of passion
you ask if I'm in love with you
I confess freely that I do
reaching and fading into you




If tonight your stars
doesn't shine on my bed
and all I see are passing cars
I'm still wrapped in the cocoon of you
tossing and turning in search of you
your footprints deep in my mind
slowly fading into you.


Clutching my pillow
sending you my love in the wind
fading into you like a shadow
seeking eyes that burn like embers
I watch the sunrise from my window
past the deep blue sea horizon
falling deeper in love
fading into you...
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Posted: May 2014
About this poem:
Someone I wish to spend the rest of my life with soon..A keeper!
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darkhorse555

scar

to let
a whole world
of great beauty
slip away
not catching
the outstretched hand
makes no sense
inside this mind

how dreams
meant so little
became tainted
outside normal reality
power inside love
will tear down
great mountains

rolling a carpet
of breath
laying it
down in front
weak within soft
tender touching emotions

hate exerts
itself powerful
over the meek
within love
throwing poison
into words
slicing the soul
creates a wound
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Posted: May 2014
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andrew149

THE WRECKERS LIGHT

Aye,
Thar was ghostly goin’s on,
That first anniversary night, just off the beach,
Twas wondrous to be-hold,
Yet, twas evil too, that rendered impossible, all my speech.
The ghostly lantern was blowin’ in the wind,
Thar on the great rock twas pinned,
Main light, half mile yonder had bin put out,
You could ‘ear the man on the bow shout,
Thinkin’, ….’E had depth,
Tho, the inky waters was hidin’ rocky death,
Hah….Wreckers Delight!
Fifty marines, soon to be in one ‘ell of a plight,
For twas a cargo lugger,
Not this poor bugger,
That was due this night,
That should have followed that wicked light,
Twas not seen,
This transport of fifty of the Kings Marine.
And, only heard on this ‘ere beach,
The splintrin of wood, the screams…..As they died,
As all that sailed, was armoured full,
Them fifty marines.
Couldn’t 'ave swum if they tried.
An so evry year on this damned night,
I look yonder, on the great rock shines the ghostly light,
I hear the splintrin of wood,
An the screams,
As again…..The water claims the great an’ good,
An’ I kneel an’ pray for the soul of my Da’
An’ them other forty nine marines..
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Posted: Oct 2010
About this poem:
Batten down the hatches Mister Christian....thar's a storm approachin'......lol.....Andrew......xxx
Da' Means father...
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Unknown

Love me

Love me in the morning,at the break of each new day..
kiss me oh so softly,hold me close to you I pray.

Love me at the noontime hour,call, to say you care..
I'll whisper things I'll do to you,come home early if you dare.

Love me in the evening,at the setting of the sun..
we'll laugh, and kiss ,and carry on, as if we;dd just begun.

Late at night please love me,let your heart beat next to mine,
let me feel how much you need me dear, just one more precious time.

Look me so intently, in these eyes that long for you..
Read them, and you will know,my heart it is so true.

All these things you've done all day,they mean so very much..
as my loving hands seach for yours,you know I crave your touch.

Thank you for your love for me,that dreams are all made of..
Two hearts in one accord,a gift from God above...
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Posted: Jul 2010
About this poem:
Just dreaming of a love I wish to find..thats all.
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thesunandthesea

MY only GUY..at night..:")

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When I first met him, I loved him,
I couldn’t take my eyes off of him,
He got me by his entire look,
His superb body, I got hook,
He didn’t smile, maybe he was just shy,
But I know he is the one, my guy.

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Time will tell, and days go by,
When I'm with him, I want him to be mine,
His soft skins I can't deny,
He warms me, he makes me smile,
If he left me, I could die,
If I lost him, I could never survive,
I’m so deeply in love, my guy.

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I am who I am when I’m with him,
He stays with me when everything turns dim,
I can do load things, I please,
I can fart and I can sneeze,
I can belch, I can snore,
He never said, ‘No, not anymore’.

=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=

I swear no matter what come may,
I will think of him every day,
I will date him every night,
I will touch him, I will hug him tight,
He will be the one, my only knight,
‘Mr. Pillow’ you have my plight.

=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=+=

LOL
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Posted: Feb 2011
About this poem:
I'm so in love , I'm soooooo in loooove with you...Mr. Pillo---w lol
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QuietStormF

Quiet ~Storm

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Gentle as the breeze that blows
And sends the fields of daffodils
off to bow their weary heads
like fallen soldiers in the wind..

As subtle as the cloudy sky
That gently raises the home made kite
And blows ever so softly giving way,
Allowing it to take flight,

As calming as the setting sun.,
We sit and watch when the day is done..
As peaceful as the summer rain..
As it falls from a pale grey, sky.

As welcoming as the the Springtime is ,
Signalling that all life shall again begin,
And when you drink in all these things,
Then comes the Quiet storm.

And there may be lightening, and assuredly
There will be rain..
And sometimes the wind will howl and moan,
And just as suddenly all will be calm again..

And the next day when you awaken,
In the very early morn..
Drink in the sunny vibrant hues of red, yellow and blue,
That is the beauty of the Quiet Storm.
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Posted: Apr 2011
About this poem:
I love a storm.and then the rainbow, after the storm..
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boyshchrm6

Love Recipe

Take one pretty kind hearted girl
Add compassion to her soul
Take a man that loves her so
With loyal sauce simmer slow

Stuff passion into his heart
Add seasoning to make him tart
A sprinkle of hot sauce to
Will make him fiery for you

Darling help me with this recipe
Mixed together and you will see
You with me and me with you
We'll become one not just we two
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Posted: Apr 2010
About this poem:
Fun poem. Spring
in the air...lol.
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Scher

Love..For all to see

You said
My Beloved is mine & I am his

and my reply

She is mine

How sublime,
Wonderful words my dear.
I shall etch them in that secret
chamber of my heart.
from where they’ll ne’er depart

I would love to tattoo them in the sky,
for all to see,
My response to your love for me

We searched true love to find
A flower
A Card
Ignore, discard
We viewed, we thought
How could it be, so many miles across
The sea

But God knows best
He spoke to us, we cast aside
The inhibitions,from any side

We have mailed and mailed
35 pages of history
Our communication, No mystery!
IM’d every day for 3 or more
Hours
And every 24
Exchanged a Flower
And more
There’s been E-cards by the score
A growing Love, and at our ages
I checked just now, Our chat Ive saved
To Over one hundred A4 pages

It was February seven
I sent you a flower
We had made contact
However the truth and fact
While on holiday, I had the time
Your love to pursue
We’ve talked, we’ve text’d
We’ve phoned
And love has blossomed
And enthroned

We walk on air, as if in first love
Tis a Gift from God above
Who has guided our lives
This far
In Him we trust
His guidance is a must

With Him for us
Then whom do we fear
Our love declared
For all to see
It is no longer
Just between you and me
A love that’s shared is all the stronger!
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Posted: May 2010
About this poem:
Blossoming love
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Unknown

Forget.......

Forget his name, forget his face. Forget his kiss and warm embrace.
Forget the life that you once knew;remember now theres someone new.
Forget the life that you once shared; Forget the fact that he once cared.
Forget the times you were together;Remember now, he's gone forever.
Forget him when they played our song; Forget you cried the whole night long.
Forget how close you two once were;remember now he's close to her.
Forget you memorized his walk;Forget the way we used to talk.
Forget the times when you were mad; remember now he's glad,not sad
Forget the times he used to phone;Forget the times you were alone.
Forget the time he was your whole world;remember now there's another girl.
Forget him in his teasing ways;Forget you saw him everyday.
Forget the things you used to do; remember now, she loves him too.
Forget the thrill when he walked by;Forget the times he made you cry
Forget the times you spoke his nam;Remember now,he's not the same.
Forget he used to hold your hand;forget the sweet things,if you can.
Forget he said he'dd leave you never; Remember now,he's gone forever.
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Posted: Sep 2009
About this poem:
Like i said in my first poem. This comes from losing my first love,and the emotional pain associatede with it. I was between the ages of 15and16
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