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boyshchrm6

My friend

He comes to me when I feel low.
He looks and senses that somehow.
He gives me reassurance when I feel alone.
He never angers and never moans.

He's been my friend and confidente,
For 15 years and not been paid a cent.
I value him above all my friends.
We don't fight so no need for amends.

He loves me unconditionally,
And I love him as he loves me.
No other has so consistently
Seen me thru troubles and adversity.

When I am blue he knows that too.
He keeps me company just we two.
When I am feeling tired or sick
He comes to me and shares a lick.

If I'm restless and in bed cold
He marches in oh so very bold.
He wraps around my feet and toes
And I really think he truly knows.

He never goes and he never strays.
I'll hold him dear til his final days.
He doesn't have any bad habits,
Unless you consider chasing rabbits.

If you wonder who would be so loyal
Tis my cat that treats me royal.
He is now old and getting thin
But a true and tried friend he's been.

Occassionally complains, seems to talk,
Only because I forget to clean his litterbox.
l'll love him fiercely 'til he's passed away.
And will grieve untold in my own way.
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Posted: Dec 2009
About this poem:
Pet theme
This is why we love our pets
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Unknown

Lie To Me

Lie to me,
Help me in illusion,
Lie to me,
Let me get delusion.
Lie, softly whisper in my ear...
I know truth...
I need it not to hear.
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Posted: Sep 2009
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trurorob

Infidelity

I shall take a pinch
Of betrayal
A portion of despair
And a slice of heartbreak
Blend it with a large
Dose of grief
And mix it all
In your coffee
So you may experience
Exactly
How I feel
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Posted: Jan 2019
About this poem:
Well I enjoyed writing it
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godsprincess

SIR HOPE

She started out young with hope in her heart
Of a forever love that would never part
Spinning dreams of a great white Knight
Riding in to her rescue making everything alright

He was perfect in every way
Gallantly granting her wishes everyday
Thus they would live happily ever after
In that Golden Dream World forever

But then one by one the years went by
With her dreams slowly vaporizing with a sigh
Her dreams took on a different view
As the real world started intruding through

Her great White Knight slowly faded away
To be replaced with the realities of the day
Her Knight may not come to rescue her today
But her hopes for the dream of forever do not sway

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Posted: Aug 2015
About this poem:
Like every little girl I dreamed of my Knight in shining armor would come and sweep me off my feet.
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godsprincess

Moonbeams and Dreams

Walking hand and hand on the beach
Eyes sparkling with a lover’s speech
It was a beautiful moonlit night
Everything in their world was more than alright

The sand shone a brilliant white
In the background a bird hollered in mid-flight
All alone in their lover’s world
As the ocean’s waves twirled and swirled

Looking deep with wonder in each others eyes
The depth of their feelings seemed a surprise
The rest of the world slowly faded away
Their shining faces lit by the moon’s bright rays

The moonbeam shining thru the tree touched their face
The tree leaves shading the light like lace
Leaning towards each other just before their lips met
She woke from her dream no longer part of a duet

Missing her loved one with feelings so deep
She tried and tried to go back to sleep
Wanting to go back to reunite with her love again
To escape the feeling of great loss with such pain

She started slowly slipping back to sleep
So she and her beloved could again meet
Seeing his face appear shining in the moonbeam
She wanted to live forever in this beautiful dream

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Posted: Aug 2015
About this poem:
Just dreaming
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trurorob

Boxes of Life

My life arrived today
Four cardboard boxes
Battered by sadness
Torn with heartache
Stained with spilt emotions
And tied with sorrow
They had travelled this land
Nearly as far as I
And seen so much more
Than most hearts could bear
They looked as if grief
Was not a choice
But always mandatory
I cut the string
Hope opened the covers
They were empty
Except for a small
Piece of notepaper
That was as desolate
As I
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Posted: Oct 2015
About this poem:
I originally wrote this over four years ago, liked the concept but never the content, so recently rewritten.
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Mizzy4

< Raw Meet >

The scent of her warm flesh teased my nose,
Her exotic beauty made my heart swell,
She stood before me in elegant pose,
Irresistible her pungent smell.
 
The taste of ruby wine off her tongue,
Her lipstick how it smeared my face,
Oh! We were wild, so sexy and young,
Our touching now at frantic pace.
 
The candlelight flickered on her long raven mane,
Her hypnotic shadow danced on the wall,
She teased and taunted me insane,
Her frenzied dancing - did stall.
 
Her parted lips begged with pleading moan!
Her hunger growing at desperate speed,
The throb in my loins caused me to groan,
Eager to please her yearning need.
 
Bodies meet, begging for release,
Eager for sweet consummation,
In times oldest dance, whose joys never cease,
Came endless euphoric elation.

Then together we lay there gasping for air,
Our Love bed in a tangled heap,
Inseparable now soft kisses we share,
As we drift off to blissful sleep.
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Posted: Aug 2014
About this poem:
This poem was conjointly written
by Lady Odette and myself.
May I say it was just pure Heaven
to work with such an eminent
Poeress and such a sexy Lady also.
It is my wish that Christina receives
all the plaudits for this one.

Thanks again dear, being your
Poet friend has enriched my life !

Kindest regards Mick. xxx
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Girlygirl196349

I Love You

To the man that I love
Together we fit like a glove
It's so nice to be in love
You flood me with so much love
I thank God from up above
For sending you
The man that I love
You have the most beautiful
Soulful brown eyes
They Tell me no lies
Your lips ever so soft
If I had it my way
I would kiss them all day
The dimple on your chin
Sets my head a spin
Your height just right
Your arms so long and strong
In between them is where I belong
Tonight will be making love the whole night through
I can't wait to be with you
Sending all my love
To the man that I love!
XX
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Posted: Sep 2014
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darkhorse555

Snow White

Oh darling
you have become an angel
floating into dreams
so beautiful they sing

Pure petal wings flutter
dressed in the color of snow
They dance inside warm love melts
shining a faraway star
winking in the night sky

Whom embraces the outer body sweetly
I open four chambers to you
holding all keys out
My queen warmly holds the soul

One kiss from you
smitten I would say smiling
I will always smile in loves grace
Wishing that I was holding you right now

Wow what a dream baby
out off this world
you're so beautiful in these eyes
dazzling mirror reflections blinding
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Posted: Dec 2014
About this poem:
mirror mirror
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candykid

The Birth of Our Savior

It's quite interesting how we mortals are limited by time...
Blind with false notions, blind in our minds...
I can clearly recall that day in the spirit world...
The kindness of Angels....the kind that shines fine...

Armies of Angels with soft-spoken words...
Flying with golden silk feathers like birds...
Ready to witness the most important event in all of eternity...
The birth of Our Savior, my eyes were then blurred...

I knelt before Angels....I listened and heard...
I felt I should speak, but there were no words...
It was in Your infinite wisdom to not let me see...
The birth of Our Savior....Ruler of worlds...

You did not withhold all from me however...
Through feathers of Angels, I probably never...
Have seen such cries from such heavenly skies...
As liquid stars dripped from Your heavenly eyes...

For You knew the importance of what had just taken place...
And had orchestrated this concert through time and through space...
It indeed was for me and all of the inhabitants of the earth...
The birth of Our Savior...Oh Sweet Child's Birth......
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Posted: Dec 2014
About this poem:
I truly wish each and every one of you blessings this holiday season.
Please forgive the modern spelling of 'Savior' over the probably much preferred traditional spelling 'Saviour'....
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