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thesunandthesea

How do you feel when you steal the other works?

Well..... this is my hibernation season... actually I didn't wanna come up here until I've done something. BUT last few days I accidentally read some poems on HERE and I found out that 'HE' is a FAKE one, 'HE' ain't a writer...


HE has deleted SOME of the poems HE POSTED here already. BUT IT is NOT ENOUGH for me... HE should DELETE more as there are some more poems that he STOLE from the others! I remembered all of those poems cus some of them are belong to someone I know! SOMEONE's VERY CLOSE to me!!!!! HE SHOULD be in JAIL!!!! For stealing the other works!!!!


One of his comments said, "my mother was a poet, so I think it's because of genes or something, and that I wrote this blah blah blah ...." This poem and comment are deleted already cus it's ILLEGAL!!! I feel sorry for HIS mother, she should be so PROUD of HIM, if only HE wrote poems by himself!


Another one that he said he dedicated for someone he falls for in here, or "love on CS", ! that was a sweet lovely poem which has been written for more than five years!!!! I was surprised to see it here! I even left a comment, said "WOWW--- very lovely poem!" I wanna know how he would reply me... Shame!! the poem is deleted again in the morning! At least , He felt guilty, well I'm appreciated!


(( damn, he even flirts one of my lovely sister!!! )))


For someone who loves to steal the others works. You KNOW WHO!!! He is A MAN! I will not mention his name this time, I'll try to be calm and cool. You are lucky that I am so KIND! cus if I am not kind, you would NEVER EVER stay on this poety board since the first time I read your COPIED poems!!!


DELETE ALL OF THOSE POEMS YOU COPIED!! WRITE ONLY YOUR POEMS! DO NOT COPY THE OTHERS! BE HONEST! IF YOU WANT TO FOOL AROUND, JUST FOOL YOURSELF!(



^_^ With love and care, hope you have a nightmare!

SaS


P.S.

Don't dare to write me or anything!!!
NOoo not that because I fear you!
I have no fear but you are so disgusting
that I can't force myself talking to you


Your mind is dark as same as a nightmare
Your brain is empty, you stole poems! how dare!
My 6-year old nephew's never copied anyone homework
cus he knows if he did, he would be called as a JERK
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Posted: Mar 2011
About this poem:
'you' KNOW I MEAN "who"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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thesunandthesea

Think Of U

I wanna lay down on your chest
Whenever I wanna take some rest
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I wanna lay down into your arms
Whenever I wanna forget some times
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I wanna lay down on your lap
Whenever I wanna take a nap
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I wanna lay down on your shoulder
Whenever I need someone older
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I wanna lay down in your heart
Whenever we are far apart
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I MISS YOU!
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Posted: Jul 2011
About this poem:
THINK OF YOU...
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trurorob

Infidelity

I shall take a pinch
Of betrayal
A portion of despair
And a slice of heartbreak
Blend it with a large
Dose of grief
And mix it all
In your coffee
So you may experience
Exactly
How I feel
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Posted: Jan 2019
About this poem:
Well I enjoyed writing it
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godsprincessonline today!

SIR HOPE

She started out young with hope in her heart
Of a forever love that would never part
Spinning dreams of a great white Knight
Riding in to her rescue making everything alright

He was perfect in every way
Gallantly granting her wishes everyday
Thus they would live happily ever after
In that Golden Dream World forever

But then one by one the years went by
With her dreams slowly vaporizing with a sigh
Her dreams took on a different view
As the real world started intruding through

Her great White Knight slowly faded away
To be replaced with the realities of the day
Her Knight may not come to rescue her today
But her hopes for the dream of forever do not sway

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Posted: Aug 2015
About this poem:
Like every little girl I dreamed of my Knight in shining armor would come and sweep me off my feet.
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godsprincessonline today!

Moonbeams and Dreams

Walking hand and hand on the beach
Eyes sparkling with a lover’s speech
It was a beautiful moonlit night
Everything in their world was more than alright

The sand shone a brilliant white
In the background a bird hollered in mid-flight
All alone in their lover’s world
As the ocean’s waves twirled and swirled

Looking deep with wonder in each others eyes
The depth of their feelings seemed a surprise
The rest of the world slowly faded away
Their shining faces lit by the moon’s bright rays

The moonbeam shining thru the tree touched their face
The tree leaves shading the light like lace
Leaning towards each other just before their lips met
She woke from her dream no longer part of a duet

Missing her loved one with feelings so deep
She tried and tried to go back to sleep
Wanting to go back to reunite with her love again
To escape the feeling of great loss with such pain

She started slowly slipping back to sleep
So she and her beloved could again meet
Seeing his face appear shining in the moonbeam
She wanted to live forever in this beautiful dream

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Posted: Aug 2015
About this poem:
Just dreaming
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trurorob

Boxes of Life

My life arrived today
Four cardboard boxes
Battered by sadness
Torn with heartache
Stained with spilt emotions
And tied with sorrow
They had travelled this land
Nearly as far as I
And seen so much more
Than most hearts could bear
They looked as if grief
Was not a choice
But always mandatory
I cut the string
Hope opened the covers
They were empty
Except for a small
Piece of notepaper
That was as desolate
As I
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Posted: Oct 2015
About this poem:
I originally wrote this over four years ago, liked the concept but never the content, so recently rewritten.
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darkhorse555

lighthouse of time

love you're
the first
lighthouse
with a bright beacon
that shines across
this ocean

carved into foundations
chiseled within emotions
plastered covered feelings
etched in stone
climbing each step
a winding staircase
one skyscraper
heading towards
the Heaven's

a lofty
tower built
standing tallest
rising from
out of the ground
one kingdom
white stone faced
marble blocks
cemented with
lead mortar
bonded together

upon the Cupola
a great
fire burns
lighting across,
the ocean
warmly carrying
for miles
one curved
mirrored soul
searching waters

lights into
a hot beam
setting this ship
on passions fire
desire in this ocean
swimming remains
the wonder
of you

a torso
of one woman
living in
the heart
beating drums
within this deep
blue sea
trembles hotly
ablaze on fire

loving until
the end
of time
sealed with
800 hundred
gold kisses
a wonderful treasure
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Posted: Jan 2014
About this poem:
one wonder drawn from the lighthouse of Alexander
800 TALENTS equal to 3 million in today's money to build
cupola is where the light burned
stories were told that the light could burn approaching ships
first lighthouse a skyscraper
Ptolemy 11 carved his inscription into the foundations then covered it with plaster
built with marble stone faced blocks bedded in lead plaster
a large curved mirror of polished bronze projected the fires light into a beam also said to be a weapon when concentrated with the sun setting ships ablaze some distance away
could also be used as a mirror that magnified images in the distance
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darkhorse555

christmas light

Before midnight
on Christmas eve
i put
a lighted candle
upon the window sill
to say love
of baby Jesus
welcome
to my home

This door
of the heart
is open with prayer
welcoming his holiness
to receive
the Lord's blessing
on his birthday

i sing
a song
with praise
kneeling a lamb
of God
happy birthday
lord and master
thanking you
for the gift
of love
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Posted: Dec 2013
About this poem:
a welcoming candle on his birthday
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lindsyjones

my first haiku

singing in the rain
sun shines brilliantly
and the flowers bloom...


my heart loved you
together forever
she appeared, and love died...

I was walking alone
a car pulled over
we landed in Paris with laughter
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Posted: Mar 2014
About this poem:
I hope it works...
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Mizzy4

"Love so Fragile"

Oh! Love, a most soft and gentle thing,
Like silent falls of white Winter snows,
Or a dandelion stalk in a little girls hand,
As her wishes to the wind she blows.

Those who surrender their hearts to Love,
Will enter the warmest place,
Of cosy hugs and gentle caress,
And soft kisses upon their face.

Love is not possessive, or jealous, it's true,
Love's hurt to the bone can go,
It only thrives on caring compassion,
And needs plenty of space to grow.

Have you ever held a Robin in the cusp of your hands ?
A place so safe and warm,
Just strong enough not to let it fly away,
Yet gentle enough to cause no harm.

Did you feel it's little heart beating so strong,
Like a heart that has fallen in Love,
When a tiny spark is fanned to flame,
By the fluttering wings of a Dove.

Now to those in Love, the same rules apply,
Invite your partner for a close cuddly dance,
Hold them real easy as you waltz around Love's floor,
Steal a kiss as if per chance.

For it's the simplest things that make Love grow,
And keep it as strong as ever,
Show much respect and give it every chance,
This one might just last forever !
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Posted: Mar 2014
About this poem:
I'm dedicating this to Laura, for having the courage to post
her first poem and for always being a lady....

This is for you and Tom, Laura.
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