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jazzy75

peach

your smell,
your juice,

drip down my chin,

I swirl my tongue,

capturing,
licking,

dewy drops,

off

the crease of lips,

savoring nectar’s
sweet taste,

I close my eyes,
in reverence,

planting
the seed,

deep,

deep
within
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Posted: Aug 2010
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trurorob

Epitaph

Do not weep, do not sigh
For I have been granted
All my wishes
On the day you were born
I once said
That to catch a rainbow
You must grasp
All the colours
Of life
The fish never swam upstream
Without a tale to tell
The tiger did not roar
For meaningless purpose
I as one person still left life’s imprints
On the track that
Had been worn down by
So many that had passed
This way before
And so I left, my purpose fulfilled
Allowing you to greet the new dawn
So smile at your grief’s shedding
For I wore your hearts on my sleeve
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Posted: Jul 2010
About this poem:
for my children!
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thesunandthesea

ARE YOU A FLIRT? LOL no I'm not!!!

I am just a girl
Living in a big big world

I love 'LadyBee'
I want her to be LADY of ME :")

I love 'FELLSMAN’
I want him to FILL ME

I love 'ANDREW'
I will change my name to AND YOU
Now we will be ANDREW AND YOU
(which it means Andrew & ME)

^_*

Oh-O I love ‘Macduff’
Would you be my MC Love?

Oh that’s ‘Boyshchrm’
Does he know he make my heart alarm?

ahh Whatta sexy ‘Grandad’
If he is not mine that would be sad!!!

hey wassup 'Mike'
Would you mind being my Knight?

^0^

Hello, 'hedistuff'
A smile from you is not enough
May I also have your heart?

I also love ‘Marikia’
I want her to be near

Awww That’s sweet ‘Niah!’
I fear I can’t live without her

My princess ‘SWAN’
I miss you from night until dawn

^_^

I can’t choose who’s the best
But I’m afraid to lose ‘Pilgrim”

Oh that’s ‘Moonontide’
Would you be my moon this night?

Come over here ‘Jazzy’
My arms long to hug you badly

NOoooo don’t smile at me 'byfaith'
It makes me think you are “my faith"

^___^

Nice to meet you 'Jihadmeathello'
you know you had me at HELLO >_</

oh o that ‘Trurorob’
If you were a cop
I would be a robber
Now you and me will be COP & ROB (ber)

^_*

Excuse me ‘Stillframe’
Haven’t we met?
May I have your name?

Oh-O 'SCatlyn'
I meet you I need aspirin
Cus you make my heart SPIN!!!

^_*

Mr. 'Mitch' Excuse me?
Are you free tonight?

Oh that ‘Serpico’
May I know is your heart available?

awwww hi there 'GNJ4u’
If you let me kiss you
That’d be so cool

'I am who I am you see'
Here’s my heart for you, you see?

ahh—My sweet lady 'Readerofsouls'
Can you read my soul sweeties?
It’s keep calling ROS ROS
Instead of SOS
^_*

Wait a minute ‘lonewolf’
Please come stay in my heart
you’ re approved.

Hello ‘earlgreytea’
I long for you come over me

Hi ‘a good guy to have’
Are you really a good guy to have?
If so, May I have you?

Howdy ‘Bentlee’
Can you come and sit next to me?

^0^

Mr. ‘magykmir’ please wait
Look at me and tell, do you believe in soul mate?

Excuse meeee, Mr. 'mcradloff'
Is there an airport nearby??
or is that my heart taking off?

OH-OOO Mr. ‘Swade’
I see Swade I scare
I scare to love you


LOL I’m so funny
Whom should I pick to be my hunny???!!!!
this Valentine’s Day!!!
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh
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Posted: Feb 2011
About this poem:
LOL I am happy to write it and you MUST enjoy reading it!!!! My COMMAND))) LOL I'M SORRY I'M KIDDING))) >_</// I just love FEBRUARY))))) AND I LOVE YOU ALL)))) ^_______________^
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boyshchrm6

Valentine

Be mine............................................................V'lntine
Please be mine.............................................A Crimson stein
Wont you be my Valentine.................... I don't want a Frankenstein
I will ask until I'm finally blind............thoughts of you within my mind
Wont you be my main Squeeze..Wont you if I ask you double please
You know I dont want a tease. Ill even give you some pink cheese
Won't you kiss me now geez. I wont give you a deadly disease
I promise that it will please me at least if you don't sneeze
Won't you be my Idle Vine, a kind of strawberry wine
If you would that would be so possitively fine
I'll even give to you an elegant dine
Flowers as my constant sign
Be my Crimson Baby
Yes not maybe
Won't you
Huh!




Won't you be my Idle Vine
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Posted: Feb 2011
About this poem:
Be my Valentine and bring some Idle Vine
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Bentlee

~of CENTRE attention~

ME ME ME ME ME ME ME, it's ALL bout Me, DON'T care bout you, it's all bout Me, MY DAY was good, NOT askin bout your's! ME ME ME is all bout Me, I'M feelin fine, don't care bout you, ME ME ME an I'M doin great, don't care bout you. . . WHY YOU want ME to ask such things! it's all bout ME an not bout you. . . really I'M selfish, don't you dare point it out! ME ME ME, oh poor pitty ME, the ME ME ME'S from a hardened heart I CAN'T SEE, oh poor pitty ME, I give to others when I'M too blind to see..~
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Posted: Sep 2009
About this poem:
Hmmm, whats life brought to your table to share?
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cafetwo2010

Ireland on my mind

Celtic women..
Pubs and rolling
Mountains plush green
The tension between time
And space is more than I
Can bare
She knows what I know
We know it together
If we sigh it is with the
Eternal breath of hope..
If ever the sea yields to
Her this body of passion
If my hands ever touch the
Cheek of her longing
My whispers shall heal her
Of paradise lost
And we shall make love beneath
The tree of life.

Cafe
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Posted: Jul 2015
About this poem:
A poem about rapturecapture..
Cafe
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Mizzy4

The Keys to Lasting Love.

The thorny path to love is ne'er smooth,
As blinded so many dare ramble,
With many inflicted scars to sooth,
Entangled in its briars and bramble.

Respect and equality are high on the list,
None seeking control of the other,
Take nothing for granted and always persist
To share hugs, but don't try to smother.

Don't live in your shadows, take time on your own,
Each person entitled to this,
Demands and shortcomings are best left alone,
Avoid falling in bitter abyss.

Be there for your lover like strong back bone,
Make Love ! ... for its Gods special gift,
And when you're apart you won't feel alone,
Contentment your hearts will lift.

It's better to listen than it is to talk,
Have fun ! ...it helps stop the rust,
Share things together if only a walk,
Positivity will strengthen your trust.

And lastly forgiveness in love is huge,
The word that turns misery to bliss,
Bring these keys with you to seek refuge,
And trade them all in for a kiss.
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Posted: Aug 2015
About this poem:
Re-release for Valentines.
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godsprincess

Dream Catcher

Dream Catcher blowing gently above
Weave me a Dream of my true love
Passing through your delicate web
Nothing but good dreams doth reach my bed

Dreaming a beautiful dream in my mind
Caught in a different world and time
A dream of gentle ocean breezes
Sounds and smells to my mind pleases

Sounds of water from a mountain stream flowing
Speeding along to the ocean a going
Soothing my spirit like a smooth stone
Meandering and always forever on the roam

The sound of a wolf howling on the wind
Touching my soul as though we are kin
A full moon and bright stars shining at night
Like hung candles flickering their lights

Let me dream of my true love tonight
Let me see them in the moonlight
And I pray when light doth come at daybreak
They will still be there when I awake

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Posted: Apr 2016
About this poem:
Inspired by reading the Legend of the Dream Catcher to write a poem.
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Girlygirl196349

FRIEND

You never let me down
You're always around
Whether I'm up or down
You can always be found
You keep me in line
Even keep my time
No matter what look
Comes across my face
You always keep
Me at pace
You make me wet
From sweat
You make my heart beat fast
Sometimes your're a blast
My breathing gets heavy
My legs are on fire
I feel so tired
Aaa ,my time has expired !
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Posted: May 2014
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AN HOUR ON TNE TREADMILL,, :-)
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fjamesj9701

In A Blink Of An Eye

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Beneath the low muffles
Pedestrians shuffle
An average city day
Of hustle and bustle
A lovely days stroll
With no place to go
Still the worlds moving fast
But I'll remain slow
Because theres no movement
Unless I stand still
To give my heart a chance
To understand what it feels
The brilliance of designs
Engineered by our minds
And yet we lack passion
To save our own lives
Surveying the pavement
To the edge of concrete
When I became overwhelmed
By this vision I'd seen
It was for a brief moment
Yet I was surprised
When I saw her blue eyes
Staring back into mine
Butterflies came to life
It was love at first sight
Our approach became closer
And once again were her eyes
I felt a connection
Free from suggestions
Connected like dots
Lost in translation
But what I seen was a world
For this boy and that girl
Behind a white picket fence
And all this from a curb
Could she be the one
As the cat held my tongue
I brought the words to my lips
But my voice became numb
Them damn butterflies
They took me for a ride
I may be made of steel
But Im like butter inside
So without knowing her name
The light color changed
Then they all crossed the street
Moving on in their haste
She disappeared in a blur
Blending in with the world
And there I was standing
All alone on the curb
But with a smile I left
Without chance of regret
Or what if I spoke
The words my heart said
Still overjoyed with delight
It just wasn't our time
And she was gone from my life
In a blink of an eye

~ JJF ~
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Posted: Jul 2014
About this poem:
A thing of beauty is a joy forever: its loveliness increases; it will never pass into nothingness
~ John Keats ~
What we have here ladies and gentlemen is simply a failure to communicate … Cheers cheers
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