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DRIFTING LOVE
Drifting hearts of heartaches n false starts everything seems to b commin together swell then ur sweetheart falls apart apparently graspin glorious illustrated illusions a soft touch of a hand on ur face n body warmth so close u hope the moments last forever passion's pleasure a lure of lust love or lonesomeness cold uncomfortable sleep sleep talk or talking in ur dreams about Lovers lives it feels so real seeing in dreamer eyes beneath the blindfolds an old tale told described details of determined loved like Romeo & Juliet one of Shakespeare's best various visualization of public hatred just to die in love no need of a Savior heart flaming fireworks last for a million lifetimes poetry of loves lifelines loves poison permanently possessing constant reconstruction of loving one another some loves consist of anonymous lovers diggin deeper holes of fossilized lies time n time again repeatin loves poisonous ways your heart hears ur screams but u look away aware of the wrong but as long as love is lastin nothing can stop the notebook of passions poison
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Posted: Mar 2012
About this poem:
Tittle says it all PLEASE. OMMENT & HMU IF U LIKE MY POETRY
---Soul nieghbour---
sleep easy my soul nieghbour
im here to take you to the death chamber,
be free when you meet me
it wont be long till you become me,
get ready for your final step
im here for you last and only breath,
i wont take it from your heart
i was just here from the start,
be ready with your light shade
im here for the death raid,
come out when i call your name
im ready for your final shame,
see me in the lightning
im here with the death king,
im sorry now its time to go
get ready for the final show...
im here to take you to the death chamber,
be free when you meet me
it wont be long till you become me,
get ready for your final step
im here for you last and only breath,
i wont take it from your heart
i was just here from the start,
be ready with your light shade
im here for the death raid,
come out when i call your name
im ready for your final shame,
see me in the lightning
im here with the death king,
im sorry now its time to go
get ready for the final show...
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Posted: Apr 2012
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The Delirious, The Betrayed (song)
*verse1*
Boom Boom Boom
There goes the chaos swarming again.
Boom Boom Boom
The longer it’s held in, it gets stronger.
Boom Boom Boom
You wanna let it all out in the open,
But no!
Freedom’s hard to gain
And!
It’s never easy
To!
Come clean and say it loud!
*chorus*
Boom Boom Boom!
The emotions are wellin’ up
Moving closer to the breaking point!
Boom Boom Boom!
How sickening the feeling
Of drowning your true self in the shadows of your fear!
Boom Boom Boom!
But it’s never that easy
To get all the words out there
To get all your heart out there
I am trapped in the limbo
Of confusion and conflict!
Boom Boom Boom!!
*verse2*
Boom Boom Boom
The feeling consumes without mercy.
Boom Boom Boom
The longer it’s held back, it grows more dangerous.
Boom Boom Boom
I wanna let it all out in the open,
But no!
Freedom’s hard to gain
And!
It’s never easy
To!
Come clean and free yourself!
*chorus*
Boom Boom Boom!
The emotions are wellin’ up
Moving closer to the breaking point!
Boom Boom Boom!
How sickening the feeling
Of drowning your true self in the shadows of your fear!
Boom Boom Boom!
But it’s never that easy
To get all the words out there
To get all your heart out there
I am trapped in the limbo
Of confusion and conflict!
Boom Boom Boom!!
*bridge*
(LET IT OUT)
This heart of mine
(FREE YOURSELF)
I can’t help but wonder
(SAY IT NOW)
If it has just been
(SAVE YOURSELF)
Lying all this time
(LET IT OUT)
This heart of mine
(FREE YOURSELF)
I can’t help but wonder
(SAY IT NOW)
If it’s really just been
(SAVE YOURSELF)
Lying all this time…
Come out and declare yourself!
*chorus*
Boom Boom Boom!
The emotions are wellin’ up
Moving closer to the breaking point!
Boom Boom Boom!
How sickening the feeling
Of drowning your true self in the shadows of your fear!
Boom Boom Boom!
But it’s never that easy
To get all the words out there
To get all your heart out there
I am trapped in the limbo
Of confusion and conflict!
Boom Boom Boom!!
Come out, there’s nothin’ to fear!
Boom Boom Boom
There goes the chaos swarming again.
Boom Boom Boom
The longer it’s held in, it gets stronger.
Boom Boom Boom
You wanna let it all out in the open,
But no!
Freedom’s hard to gain
And!
It’s never easy
To!
Come clean and say it loud!
*chorus*
Boom Boom Boom!
The emotions are wellin’ up
Moving closer to the breaking point!
Boom Boom Boom!
How sickening the feeling
Of drowning your true self in the shadows of your fear!
Boom Boom Boom!
But it’s never that easy
To get all the words out there
To get all your heart out there
I am trapped in the limbo
Of confusion and conflict!
Boom Boom Boom!!
*verse2*
Boom Boom Boom
The feeling consumes without mercy.
Boom Boom Boom
The longer it’s held back, it grows more dangerous.
Boom Boom Boom
I wanna let it all out in the open,
But no!
Freedom’s hard to gain
And!
It’s never easy
To!
Come clean and free yourself!
*chorus*
Boom Boom Boom!
The emotions are wellin’ up
Moving closer to the breaking point!
Boom Boom Boom!
How sickening the feeling
Of drowning your true self in the shadows of your fear!
Boom Boom Boom!
But it’s never that easy
To get all the words out there
To get all your heart out there
I am trapped in the limbo
Of confusion and conflict!
Boom Boom Boom!!
*bridge*
(LET IT OUT)
This heart of mine
(FREE YOURSELF)
I can’t help but wonder
(SAY IT NOW)
If it has just been
(SAVE YOURSELF)
Lying all this time
(LET IT OUT)
This heart of mine
(FREE YOURSELF)
I can’t help but wonder
(SAY IT NOW)
If it’s really just been
(SAVE YOURSELF)
Lying all this time…
Come out and declare yourself!
*chorus*
Boom Boom Boom!
The emotions are wellin’ up
Moving closer to the breaking point!
Boom Boom Boom!
How sickening the feeling
Of drowning your true self in the shadows of your fear!
Boom Boom Boom!
But it’s never that easy
To get all the words out there
To get all your heart out there
I am trapped in the limbo
Of confusion and conflict!
Boom Boom Boom!!
Come out, there’s nothin’ to fear!
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Posted: Apr 2012
About this poem:
Questioning one's sexuality is a painful, confusing experience, especially if you realize you aren't what you thought you'd be. Every time I thought "could I be a lesbian?", I'd get this tightness in my chest and feel like I might pass out due to the stress of it. (the "boom boom boom" parts kinda represent the quickening of a heartbeat during an anxiety attack) But I finally came out about all this, and it was liberating (hence the last line). That "sick" feeling almost completely went away, and for the first time in months, I felt at peace with myself.This is the most recent song of mine. Hope you guys like! (I'll post a link to a MIDI of the melody soon)
Your Hand
Baby can’t you see the love that's in my eyes
I would do anything for you
You’re my one and only the only one
the only one that will do
Sometimes we get into a argument
that's just something that people do
it doesn’t mean my hearts,in the wrong way
cause I’m crazy over you
Your hand is a mountain,that I don't have to climb
your hand gives me all,I need to get me by
Your hand is a fortress,that surrounds me
you fulfill me with your love
you let me be me.
© 2012 Marcus Goodman
I would do anything for you
You’re my one and only the only one
the only one that will do
Sometimes we get into a argument
that's just something that people do
it doesn’t mean my hearts,in the wrong way
cause I’m crazy over you
Your hand is a mountain,that I don't have to climb
your hand gives me all,I need to get me by
Your hand is a fortress,that surrounds me
you fulfill me with your love
you let me be me.
© 2012 Marcus Goodman
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Posted: Jan 2012
Post CommentThese Walls Are Closing In
These wall are closing....as I lie alone here in our bed.
With the sad memories of you running through my head.
And I try not to cry,but I just can't take the pain.
When these walls start closing in I softly call your name.
Yesterday is gone and so are all our dreams.
The silence in this empty house,makes me wanna scream.
Read the letter that you left, but you gave no reason why.
When these walls start closing in I feel like I could die.
And I don't know if i'll ever get over you,but I know,I will
get by.
And I don't think,I could ever stop loving you,no I couldn't,
even if I tried.
'Cause when these walls start closing in,think i'll drink myself to sleep.
And as I softly call your name,pray the lord your soul to keep.
I see all our old friends they ask me how i'm doing.
I tell em ok but who am I fooling.
I feel just like a fool drowning in my misery.
When these walls start closing in your ghost won't set me free
And I don't know if i'll ever get over you,but I know,I will
get by.
And I don't think I could ever stop loving you,no I couldn't,
even if I tried.
So when these walls start closing in,think i'll drink myself to
sleep.
And as I softly call your name,pray the lord your soul to keep.
It's been a long time,so much has changed.
Sometimes I wake up in the night,calling out your name.
Never in my life have I ever felt so alone.
When these walls start closing in this house just ain't a home.
And I don't know if i'll ever get over you,but I know,I will
get by.
And I don't think I could ever stop loving you,no I couldn't,
even if I tried.
So when these walls start closing in,think i'll drink myself to
sleep.
And as I softly call your name,pray the lord your soul to keep.
With the sad memories of you running through my head.
And I try not to cry,but I just can't take the pain.
When these walls start closing in I softly call your name.
Yesterday is gone and so are all our dreams.
The silence in this empty house,makes me wanna scream.
Read the letter that you left, but you gave no reason why.
When these walls start closing in I feel like I could die.
And I don't know if i'll ever get over you,but I know,I will
get by.
And I don't think,I could ever stop loving you,no I couldn't,
even if I tried.
'Cause when these walls start closing in,think i'll drink myself to sleep.
And as I softly call your name,pray the lord your soul to keep.
I see all our old friends they ask me how i'm doing.
I tell em ok but who am I fooling.
I feel just like a fool drowning in my misery.
When these walls start closing in your ghost won't set me free
And I don't know if i'll ever get over you,but I know,I will
get by.
And I don't think I could ever stop loving you,no I couldn't,
even if I tried.
So when these walls start closing in,think i'll drink myself to
sleep.
And as I softly call your name,pray the lord your soul to keep.
It's been a long time,so much has changed.
Sometimes I wake up in the night,calling out your name.
Never in my life have I ever felt so alone.
When these walls start closing in this house just ain't a home.
And I don't know if i'll ever get over you,but I know,I will
get by.
And I don't think I could ever stop loving you,no I couldn't,
even if I tried.
So when these walls start closing in,think i'll drink myself to
sleep.
And as I softly call your name,pray the lord your soul to keep.
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Posted: Feb 2011
About this poem:
I wrote this song in 2007, a few months after my Mom passed away from cancer.I always let the melody of what i'm playing and the emotion I feel from it lead me into the song that i'm writing.I hardly ever write lyrics down and 95% of what I write just flows out of me.For this song I tried to imagine how my Dad felt after losing his wife and best friend of 36 years.As I Make My Way
I see a change a comin' in the weather
I sense a change comin' over me
Will I fall and break to pieces
Or will I soar flying so free
I close my eyes but for a moment
Kaleidoscope colors nothings the same
Here I go into the unknown
I'm not scared and I feel no pain
As I make my way
As I make my way
So amazing are all the wonders
And all the beauty i'd never seen before
I never realized I was lost
Until I opened up thr door
I wish this journey could last forever
There's so much more I wanna see
But everything that I have learned
Will always be a part of me
I sense a change comin' over me
Will I fall and break to pieces
Or will I soar flying so free
I close my eyes but for a moment
Kaleidoscope colors nothings the same
Here I go into the unknown
I'm not scared and I feel no pain
As I make my way
As I make my way
So amazing are all the wonders
And all the beauty i'd never seen before
I never realized I was lost
Until I opened up thr door
I wish this journey could last forever
There's so much more I wanna see
But everything that I have learned
Will always be a part of me
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Posted: Mar 2011
About this poem:
This song is about taking "the journey".If you have then "you know".If you haven't then you'll never understand.
C'mon
Hey lil momma you look so fine c'mon
I can tell by the look in your eyes your daddy aint home c'mon
Yeah you know it's gonna feel alright c'mon
Let's open all the shades an turn on all the lights c'mon
Just like a wildcat she tore me apart
She broke my back and then she broke my heart c'mon,c'mon
I love the way you smile when your lookin' up at me c'mon
And all the things that you do that bring me to my knees c'mon
Lord!you make me tremble when you start to shake c'mon
I can tell that your almost there an I just can't wait c'mon
Just like a wildcat she tore me apart
She broke my back and then she broke my heart c'mon,c'mon
Your lyin' in a pool of cold sweat an your still burnin up c'mon
Like the sayin' goes baby once is never enough c'mon
We can leave it in the bed, we can take it to the floor,
we can put it on the wall, I see your ready for more!
So c'mon!c'mon!c'mon!c'mon!
Just like a wildcat she tore me apart
She broke my back and then she broke my heart c'mon,c'mon,c'mon,
c'mon,(spoken: I gotta go fo' your daddy get home)c'mon,c'mon..........
I can tell by the look in your eyes your daddy aint home c'mon
Yeah you know it's gonna feel alright c'mon
Let's open all the shades an turn on all the lights c'mon
Just like a wildcat she tore me apart
She broke my back and then she broke my heart c'mon,c'mon
I love the way you smile when your lookin' up at me c'mon
And all the things that you do that bring me to my knees c'mon
Lord!you make me tremble when you start to shake c'mon
I can tell that your almost there an I just can't wait c'mon
Just like a wildcat she tore me apart
She broke my back and then she broke my heart c'mon,c'mon
Your lyin' in a pool of cold sweat an your still burnin up c'mon
Like the sayin' goes baby once is never enough c'mon
We can leave it in the bed, we can take it to the floor,
we can put it on the wall, I see your ready for more!
So c'mon!c'mon!c'mon!c'mon!
Just like a wildcat she tore me apart
She broke my back and then she broke my heart c'mon,c'mon,c'mon,
c'mon,(spoken: I gotta go fo' your daddy get home)c'mon,c'mon..........
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Posted: Mar 2011
About this poem:
Aint nuthin like some dirty blues!At the WAKE
At the Wake
All dressed in black
dawned
Ayin Dandive is fiddlin
Up sa daisy.
up a shinny daisy.
your Upsin a shinny daisy
Ayin dandive is fiddlin
their bendin down to up sa daisy
Ups a shinny daisy.
And thats not what thier not supposed to doom.
Abbalicious Xanadu Skywalker
the people stomp their feet
Up the shinny daisy
Ayin dandive is fiddlin Iris Versicolrs.
Sajda to their mission paidir
their not not to have been caught sajdah to their mission
upsin A daisy
Upsa shinny daisy
daisy be sured
daisy be secured
Ups the daisy
That’s not not what their not to have been caught dooming
Their tapping their feet
snappin thier fingers
clapin thier hands
and bobbin their heads
Because that’s the sort of obstacles Ayin hath tau of going through.
At the Wake
Ayin, Remington Crown, Nicholas of Cologne, Hypnos
and On yur Chozun Fitz Patrick
All dressed in black
dawned
Ayin Dandive is fiddlin
Up sa daisy.
up a shinny daisy.
your Upsin a shinny daisy
Ayin dandive is fiddlin
their bendin down to up sa daisy
Ups a shinny daisy.
And thats not what thier not supposed to doom.
Abbalicious Xanadu Skywalker
the people stomp their feet
Up the shinny daisy
Ayin dandive is fiddlin Iris Versicolrs.
Sajda to their mission paidir
their not not to have been caught sajdah to their mission
upsin A daisy
Upsa shinny daisy
daisy be sured
daisy be secured
Ups the daisy
That’s not not what their not to have been caught dooming
Their tapping their feet
snappin thier fingers
clapin thier hands
and bobbin their heads
Because that’s the sort of obstacles Ayin hath tau of going through.
At the Wake
Ayin, Remington Crown, Nicholas of Cologne, Hypnos
and On yur Chozun Fitz Patrick
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Posted: Apr 2011
About this poem:
This is not the final producta sketch
Let me love you
I wanna Love U that's what I need to do ,, I got to Love U that's what I am here for.
Loving U makes me go crazy ,, Lack of Love makes me go lazy.
Honey come to me let me LOVE U ,, Sweetie crawl to me let me spoon U.
Loving U makes me go crazy ,, Lack of Love makes me go lazy.
Honey come to me let me LOVE U ,, Sweetie crawl to me let me spoon U.
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Posted: Apr 2011
About this poem:
I felt LOVE that is why I wrote this Poem just now.Mr Sinister
I'm a self-destructive piece of shit
Smeared in blood from the thick of it
I don't owe you a goddamn thing
My life never had to begin
I don't wanna be immortal or legend or anything
But the longer I'm alive, the better off you'll be
Get ready for epitome, come on and pity me...
Will you kill me if I say please?
Now...
Frustration turning, turning everything i see around
Ships moving in fleets, purging as they run aground
All the barriers i have built unbound
here comes the marching, your lives cannot be found
Now...
Motivation comes from beyond
Purity like the unborn
Riding the storms
The storms
Enter hate
Deeper and deeper in every way
Enslaved to wait
Penetrates the wound again
Enter the sorrow
Deep and deeper everyday
Enter pain
Penetrates the wound again
Smeared in blood from the thick of it
I don't owe you a goddamn thing
My life never had to begin
I don't wanna be immortal or legend or anything
But the longer I'm alive, the better off you'll be
Get ready for epitome, come on and pity me...
Will you kill me if I say please?
Now...
Frustration turning, turning everything i see around
Ships moving in fleets, purging as they run aground
All the barriers i have built unbound
here comes the marching, your lives cannot be found
Now...
Motivation comes from beyond
Purity like the unborn
Riding the storms
The storms
Enter hate
Deeper and deeper in every way
Enslaved to wait
Penetrates the wound again
Enter the sorrow
Deep and deeper everyday
Enter pain
Penetrates the wound again
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Posted: Nov 2011
About this poem:
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