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Flame82

Heartbreak

How I feel is hard to explain,
causes me too much pain.
I choke up, my throat throbs,
If I speak, then I'll sob.

I don't want to go over,
what happened back then.
I don't want to remember,
what happened back then.

I don't want to think,
and I don't want to ache.
Or I just might sink,
after trauma makes me shake.

I was literally driven insane,
days and days of being crazed.
You treated my love as only mundane,
You'd hear me cry and never be fazed.

T'was better we went our separate ways,
the love we shared turned to pure hate.
In a grave is where our memories should lay,
Not a long enough life for our hate to abate.

Nope, not enough time for mistakes to fade,
not enough magic for those days to be unmade.
And after so many years...
It's still too soon to feel okay,
and still too soon to love again.
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Posted: Feb 2017
About this poem:
How heartbreak felt to me.
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Unknown

Take Me By My Beard!

So the beard is a badge of trust worthiness,manliness,wealth,honor
more than hair to resist,the right one can take me by my beard for an holy KISS!
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Posted: Aug 2016
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Unknown

To Your Good Comfort & Joy!

Though it may seem only judgment in psychology
I'm really assisting The "Body" in it's assimilation of "nutrients"
in THE SPIRIT,you see.
The rational thought process;opening our attunement to the influence of our divine nature
Being on "the wheel" in THE WILL,
with my rewarding honorable Harp gift
you can see the ripple effects are working out a cure as we all experience the Last Days' shift!
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Posted: Sep 2016
About this poem:
In a season of special preparation for some High Holy days to come,reconciliation,reestablishing for a new awakening is needful
for new mercies & new favor!
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givemelove

"Empty Mirrors"

Years have been passing me by
After a painful silence and undesirable hindsights
Who has taken you so far from me?
Surely you keep your excuses...

Longing to meet you even if i am still lost
No compass, nor North
Floating in the dark
Frosty summertime...

Starting over again, but afraid and shy
Growing older, chasing fireflies and firelights
Genuine feelings... Shall it be so! Shall it be!
Hurt before and so that preventing abuses

You know i have done my utmost
However, there are renewed vows from now and so forth
Wish hope for both of us... A forgiver spark
Please set us free, inspiring rhyme!
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Posted: Dec 2016
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Unknown

Fear Not My Experience!

NEW REVOLUTION
NEW Year,a few here loving
Kindness drew
2017 now to shine out, give
Light
turning things upside down
working for the good,yet upsets
as we circle around!
So,this offering is my prayer
Please give RELIEF our FATHER
GOD,
Help those who try from You to hide
to realize You have children imitating You
to bring clarity from inside
It's not the person they see
in their mind,it's You they try to
ignore & push behind.
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Posted: Jan 2017
About this poem:
This means so many,I may reach out to are not where I am & yet they imagine the very things I So freely offer (as JESUS does & did!).I feel so many
turning away,missing their blessing because it
doesn't appear as they crave it.Feeling tearful for the many who bear the wait & for the ones delaying their own fulfillment!
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misfit203

Young and Sorry

My heart is slain
Surrendered beneath the fangs of my thoughts
That night I changed
There is nothing in this world that remains the same
Except we all bleed in time
The truth explained
Uncertainty, the permanent stain
temptation gains
It was only for a moment that I did wane
All to make me happy

The crack on your looking door
You can blame it on me
The dream that became a sore
You can blame it on me
The love you were looking for
I'm young and I'm sorry
I'M YOUNG and I'M SORRY
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Posted: Jan 2017
About this poem:
At the time of this writing, I was feeling very remorseful to a young woman I was in communications with. The poem may sound misleading as if I had been unfaithful but that wasn't what I was trying for. I was not trusting enough when I was speaking with this young woman, and I realized how accusatory my words chosen were. I was uncertain of her honesty, and I lost her favor. I wrote this as an apology.
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K_Ann_70

Meager Reason ND

I took a trip to Meager Reason, ND
A place where the gold shore meets the pale Tasman sea
There the deep ocean fills with synergy
And tides crest just for me
Until the edges of the beach are left foaming.

In this great place of Meager Reason, ND,
Melodies played and all the dances were free.
Eager punters shouted "Five on the three!"
Lazy days began and ended happily -
Born of greetings, smiles and spontaneity.

Not really a place, but a space, between we
Of like-mindedness, shared interests (so far, three)
I'm waitin everyday to see if you and me
Can go back to the place, can get back in that space
Oh! Meager Reason ND.

Mmm, Mmmm oh where can you be?
Can the weeks you've been gone be an eternity?
I know you're real - Google searches told me
Of the times you were a boy, drummin, banging keys
And that song that you sung? My smile is all teeth!
I've got the giggles...'cause I loved it.

So, when's the next trip to Meager Reason ND?
Space in your mind, for a time, just for we
You know it will do until I can come see
If those eyes are true green,
And those lips that look sweet,
Are all that I hope they can be
Say soon! Meager Reason ND.
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Posted: Aug 2017
About this poem:
An anagramic melody...because you made such an incredible impression on me.
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K_Ann_70

Oh Summer, Oh Sunshine

I put my feet on the floor and it's cold in here
Look outside, seems sunny and clear
Lay my head against the window, huff out a big breath
The glass got all foggy so I drew a Hyacinth
It was simple and plain - a reminder just the same
That soon summertime will be coming

Slipped on my coat - what's the temp in this place?
Grabbed my socks and some boots after I washed my face
Kicked the radiator, put the kettle on for tea
It's heatin up fast, I warm my hands with the steam
While I try to remember where I last saw my beanie
And I'm praying hard that summer gets here

Oh summer, oh sunshine chase this darkness away
Dry up this rain and lengthen the days
Make all my nights steamy so I don't have to sleep
I ask for only two wishes: a couple of smiles
One for my face and one for my heart
Oh summer, oh sunshine hurry with your mercy today

This tea's no problem-solver all my gear must have holes
Not gettin any warmer, still I'm so cold
This calls for drastic measures, think I'll step out the door
Bring a scarf and my gloves, get the keys out the bowl
I hear bustling outside and I have to decide
Is the hustle because summer is coming?

Step out on the stoop - what can this madness be?
Is he wearin shorts? Is that a string bikini?
Are these people crazy? Or could it be me?
Is it cold inside because I'm so lonely?
I see children at play, in the park there's a heyday
And I'm thinking summer just might be coming

A walk down the street doesn't take much convincing
Barbies are smokin and there's ice cream cone-licking
The succulent fruits are so ripe, fresh and fine
The day is so hot, not a cloud in the sky
And I'm strippin my clothes off as I take it all in
It feels good to know that summer is here

Oh summer, oh sunshine the darkness is gone
You dried up the rain and my days are long
My nights will be steamy and I won't have to sleep
You granted only two wishes: a couple of smiles
One for my face and one for my heart
Oh summer, oh sunshine I thank you for coming!
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Posted: Aug 2017
About this poem:
Step out into the sunshine!
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yuri29

hottest Girl

Verse 1

All I got is this bottle of you and a liquor of you

Do you need this I want this can’t touch bare with me

throw it to the cancer of you shit im ordinary

It kills me I can’t do anything anymore not anymore can’t lie

I see ghost through a looking glass

She said did you love me never new it was you

All I got is whispers was it true or was it me


Chorus 1


She’s Got the hottest girl in the world,

Now she’s coming over and i dont know what to do,

now she out of the shower,

And she just got it for free,

please don't apologize you know you want this,

Cause I got this feeling? do you do it ? I do it with you,

please don't apologize you know you want this,


Chorus 1

She’s Got the hottest girl in the world,

Now she’s comming over and i dont know what to do,

now she out of the shower,

And she just got it for free,

please don't apologize you know you want this,

Cause I got this feeling? do you do it I do it with you,

please don't apologize you know you want this,


Verse

All I got is this bottle of you and a liquor of you

Do you need this I want this can’t touch bare with me

throw it to the cancer of you shit I'm ordinary

It kills me I can’t do anything anymore not anymore can’t lie

I see ghost through a looking glass



Bride


I can't be that savior anymore No more upper kisses no more in bed

No no more can’t vision you with out a fogy mind of your’s

But those scary thoughts of you its something maybe i love you.




Verse 3


In the nights and outside thirsty and give me a smoke and break the ashtray

Good sex was it the best. dam those memories are my nightmares

never met a girl like you shit you hate me

never met a girl like you shit you hate me

Babe girl did you like me or am I a wast of your love life

I ware my heart in the bed were I left you at our first place

Doors slammed and your face was just you and me

Eyes never shut body hurts rough times tears up

When it was the end.
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Posted: Dec 2017
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Ronnie779

CORINNA

CORINNA

Oh my Corinna

When she makes love to me
Her fingers so gentle
Upon my chest
Awakening feelings in me
Reminding an old man
Of things he's forgot
And times he thought
He never again would see

Oh My Corinna
A woman so dear to me
Not listless but free
When she pleasures me
And takes her needs just from me

And then in awhile
We lie
Both in twine
And the warmth then casts
Loving arms about me


And I offer my heart
On a silver tray
And she gladly takes it from me
Puts it in a locket
To wear near her breast
To keep it safe
And she knows i'm hers
For as long as it beats


Oh my Corinna
A woman so dear to me
Not listless but free
When she pleasures me
And takes her needs just from me...
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Posted: Apr 2018
About this poem:
A love song in the style of the late great Leonard Cohen..hope you enjoy it-had to write it down at once when the muse struck- song my copyright, etc etc...
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