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Flame82

Because Of You

You took me to a paddock, and the darkness swelled,
you told me not to panic, and then you showed me hell.
I wanted to run away but, where could I go?
Felt like time never ends, I felt my fear grow.

My mum, made me, cry, and cry.
My dad, he'd fight, he'd fight, because of that night.

You think you gave the child I was some love,
but it wasn't!
You messed me up and so I locked myself,
in my own prison!
I was an outcast when I went to school,
because of you!
Crazy, smoking dope, alcohol, short fuse,
because of you!

Would I have turned out different, no stolen innocence?
If you never took me away, would I be a bit more sane?
Fare better in a crowd, could I stand being held?
Would this broken shell have grown up to take on the world?

I can't let go of it, let go of the past,
Did ya know the damage you did, was going to last.
I take tablets now, so I don't go psycho,
It's why I'm so run down, I just can't let go.
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Posted: Feb 2017
About this poem:
I haven't put any of my lyrics in verses, bridges, etc. because I didn't think people would really want to read the same part over and over again. Each of my lyrics I post is basically the two verses; the bridge/break, pre-chorus, post-chorus and the chorus each once.

I see I've turned into a bit of a serial poster so I'll give it a rest after this one.
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theredvet

Underneath

Letters and songs I wrote them. Poems that go on and on again,
but my heart still breaks.
Showed them what I can and can't handle, so they used me like a candle, they let me burn away.
But I can't fight for this, cause this does not exist, and I know why...


Your too damned to see, the pain that lies beneath me.
You won't even dare to try, and see what's really underneath!


The innocence gone and reborn, into a statue so cold and frozen,
But I like it this way.
Scar on my back is still there, faded and worn but lies in layers,
But I love the pain.
And I can't fight for this, if this does not exist, but I know why...


Your too damned to see, the pain that lies beneath me.
You won't even dare to try, and see what's really underneath!


The love I had in my head is now lost,
words hold no meaning anymore in my heart…
I know now, the demon sleeps inside. Breathing yet I still feel dead.
Holding all that's left, drowning in you. No longer mine.
No longer alive!


Your too damned to see, the pain that lies beneath me.
You won't even dare to try, and see what's really underneath!


I'm too damned to be, loved not caged and set free.
And I don't care to try, and heal the pain that's underneath!
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Posted: Jul 2016
About this poem:
Something I wrote long ago for a friend in need. Now I think anyone who's been going through a rough relationship could use this as insight to self. I hope you like & I welcome feedback.
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Oceanzest

Salute to Harry

You catch the smell of trouble
like a festering stew
and a good cop knows
the way Harry Callahan knew
that when the low-life breed
there's only one recourse
polish that badge
and apply Magnum Force
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Posted: Aug 2021
About this poem:
ah the years of Dirty Harry...
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madtat29

Sheeple

Listen to me...,
We have to keep them asleep,
So we stay elite and they stay under our feet,
Keep them asleep,
Week after week,
Slaving like dummies,
They'll be chasing that money,
It'll be funny,
Buddy,
It'll be sweet,
Barely a bleat,
The sheep are easy to fleece,
If we just keep them asleep,
We need hypnotic suggestions,
Mass broadcast the messages,
Through phones and T.V.'s,
Control the whole population,
Subliminally,
No-one will believe,
Though it's hard not to see,
We will call them conspiracies,
Downplay their theories,
We're Illuminati,
Listen to me...,
We have to keep them asleep,
So we stay elite and they stay under our feet,
Barely a "Baa" or a bleat,
The sheep are easy to fleece,
If we just keep them asleep...
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Posted: Jun 2019
About this poem:
Song I wrote...I can see the 1%er's in a board meeting somewhere discussing their fiendish plan...
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ManicCC

Fuming Scales

Dragon fire casting spells,
Piercing fumes, a haze compels,
Toxic breath, it's hard to breathe,
Fiery wings set free.

Unleashing fury of the flame,
From ember to inferno it came,
A dragon's rage, a sight to fear,
Its fuming scales, all too clear.

A beast so mighty, free to roam,
In darkness, it calls home,
Its power knows no bounds,
And with a breath, all falls down.

Fuming scales, sharp as knives,
With roaring bellows, it thrives,
A predator, a primal force,
A dragon's power has no remorse
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Posted: Jul 2023
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DiggableHippy49online today!

Neighbors (part 2) Only The Birds Understand

King Doobie and his psychedelic band we call Funk,
Dig, all of them were hippies,
Except of the monk,-
Lonesome lovers and their lustful needs,
All married bourbon and their children were weed,-
Forgotten moments flow out our minds,
As we gathered in a tepee and smoked us some kind,-
The Doobie King became one of those stars (roar of the crowd),
The peyote seemed to blow him that far!,
(Wow, that's far out, man!),
Yeah, far out into space,
His eyes glowed!- He had no face!,-
The medicine man spoke of his dreams,
But, only the birds understood,
As they sang it in the trees,--

Heartfelt moments in our inner warfare scene,
Tarot cards and fine machines,-
A mental disturbance at the local lunatic house,
Between a lonely man and this hot looking nurse (ugh),-
Stranger sounds from padded walls,
But, only the birds above can hear their calls,-
Warlocks and witches,
Dressed in white,
Frolic the halls in the dead of night?!,
Could that be more frightening,
Than the Orange Sunshine?,
The LSD took it's flight,-
The voodoo woman spoke of their dreams,
Only the birds understand,
As they sing it in the trees,--

(The sounds of birds are singing in the background diminishing as the sound of a cuckoo bird raises higher, then fades)
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Posted: Nov 2021
About this poem:
Written 3-9-1997, before Neighbors, I found that this would be a good conclusion to it by a two-part song. Part one, hard and heavy metal style and part two, more "acid" rock, mellow style with more different instruments involved. Perhaps like a portrait painting with an abstract psychedelic background. Did works like that back in college majoring in art. Blew some people's minds! lol
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ManicCC

The Drow's Demise/ A song for the Black Archers

In the depths of the Underdark
Evil drow lurk, waiting to embark
On a journey of malevolence and spite
But we'll stop them dead tonight

With our blades and arrows, we'll cut through their ranks
We won't falter, we won't give thanks
For this is our mission, our calling, our fate
To rid the Underdark of their hate

The darkness consumes us, but we press on
Not seek rest till every drow is done
Our minds mayhap weary, our bodies mayhap weak
But we'll keep fighting till their total defeat

The Drow's Demise, it's what we seek
To bring an end to thier world, so very bleak
With vengence in our hearts minds and souls
We fight on till we reach our righteous goal

So let us sing a song of victory
For this battle won't be some mystery
Our hearts are pure, our cause is just
And with our music, we'll crush the drow As we must
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Posted: Jul 2023
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ManicCC

Sleep In my Embrace

In quiet of the night, my love, you softly doze,
Your head upon my shoulder, in peaceful repose.
As you breathe so gently, my simple joy is redefined
Our heartbeats together, my love, our bodies intertwined.

Sleep in my embrace, my dear
let every worry fade and disappear.
I find my sweetest ease dear, with your arm across my chest,
Sleeping in your embrace, my dear, I feel my soul refresh

moonbeams gently dance my love upon your skin,
I softly stroke your back, a touch so tender within.
In this moment, you're an angel, in peaceful slumber
As I hold you close, your dreams, my love, I'll always remember.

Sleep in my embrace, my dear
let every worry fade and disappear.
I find my sweetest ease dear, with your arm across my chest,
Sleeping in your embrace, my dear, I feel my soul refresh

In this quiet sanctuary, my love peaceful and sublime,
love's silent voice echoes on, as we drift on through time.
Forever in this moment, forever in your arms,
we'll dream together here my love, far from all the world's alarms.

Sleep in my embrace, my dear
let every worry fade and disappear.
I find my sweetest ease dear, with your arm across my chest,
Sleeping in your embrace, my dear, I feel my soul refresh

As morning light awakes, my love. our dreams gently shift,
But have no fear the love we share, will always uplift.
Here laid in each others arms, our hearts forever reside,
Sleeping in your embrace, my love, forever by your side.
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Posted: Aug 2023
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8Dreamsonline today!

Welcome to the lake

on this particularly warm, windy summer day
with varied cloud formations,
which is why no sun-worshipers sizzle around,
give reason to enjoy peace and quiet
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Sounds under water,
which dodge movements,
resistance gives support to the d~r~ive;
Waving seaweed and grey fish stare with big eyes

welcome you in their element
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crawl back onto land like a frog

Sun dissolved the clouds,
sunbathers´ greetings remind of cruel humanity
long for return to antediluvian
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Posted: Jul 2023
About this poem:
love relaxed swimming in the natural lake
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ManicCC

Dreaming in Silence

I had a dream, a beautiful melody
But now it's gone, just a distant memory
It filled my soul, gave me wings to fly
But now the silence, just echoes in my mind

The music's gone, lost without a sound
The rhythm's stopped, it's buried underground
The notes have vanished, into thin air
But the melody's still there, it's everywhere

I close my eyes, try to picture the scene
I see the stage, I feel the madolin in between
My fingers move, I feel the music flow
I hear the crowd, as the rhythm starts to grow

The music's gone, lost without a sound
The rhythm's stopped, it's buried underground
The notes have vanished, into thin air
But the melody's still there, it's everywhere

Oh, why did it have to end this way?
Why did the music have to fade away?
I'll keep dreaming, and someday I will Find
The melody will return, The music in my mind

The music's gone, lost without a sound
The rhythm's stopped, it's buried underground
The notes have vanished, into thin air
But the melody's still there, it's everywhere

I'll keep searching, for that lost tune
I won't give up, I'll count every moon
I'll find the rhythm, and let it flow
The music will return, and my soul will know.
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Posted: Jul 2023
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