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Happygolucky4u

No Drink Left For Me

You leave a trail of tears where ever you go.
Of a love not meant to be.
You are closed..... no way in.
There will be no changes in how you feel.
You say this love is holding you against your will.
But it's you that's holding on.
With a heart that's turning to stone.
I would like to reach and take you out.
Show you what true love is all about.
But all the signs say closed........and there is no way in.
You can't see me through the pain.
So I will pass you by.
It is such a shame.
To watch you miss what was a lie.
I could set you free.
Show you what you have missed.
But that will not be.
For I don't want to tread upon the stones.
Of what use to be your heart.
So I will leave you alone.
Maybe one day your living will start.
But it want be with me.
For I can't drink from a cup.
That seems to be empty.
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Posted: Mar 2011
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Happygolucky4u

Happy!

I've been searching for you

While you're searching for me

Taken my time

Taken it all so easy

Hoping you don't pass by

I've been lookin in the mirror

To see what I could see

The truth staring back at me

There will be no more lies

For I am set free

It is one step backwards

Two steps forward

I am on board

Life is for the living

And that's where I will be

There will be times of happiness

And times of tears

Life don't change

Because you walk without fear

It's not in what you say

But what you do

Please don't pass me by

I am searching for you

I had to do some rearranging

A bit of a thing called changing

I'm in no hurry

Just taking my time

Might not look like I'm seeking

But I will be hoping to find

Life is for the living

I will be living mine
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Posted: Dec 2013
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sabeel

distance between us..!

The distance between you and me is very deep
Because, we are strangers now
If we like to stand near and to be dear
We have to reduce our distance between us
So we need to talk more and write more
Until we can understand each other as well
Some times we will connect easily
But it may not be a long one
If we fail to feel good each other...
And my question is how long the distance you
Wish to keep between us?
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Posted: Aug 2009
About this poem:
it is the first thing between relationships.
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sabeel

I NEVER ASK ..!

I am here to share my girl friend’s questions and my answers
Gf; what you think about you?
I; a face cannot hide a lie
Gf; your first words to me?
I; let me to share anything
Gf; what are your best features?
I; my lips
Gf; your turns offs?
I; my hair
Gf; what about your past relationship?
I; I cannot live without memories…
Gf; what are the five things you cannot live without?
I; dreams, smile, mirror, friends and a bike
Gf; what is your idea about our first date?
I; travel on a bike to confirm “the world is not enough” to fulfill our love-dreams
Gf; what you fix first in your bed room?
I; a mirror, which helps me to confirm, who I am!
At last she waited for my questions,
But I have only one thing to do. say goodbye
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Posted: Aug 2009
About this poem:
ITS ALL ABOUT MY GIRL FRIEND....
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yaspark

A grown-up kid

You swallow a year
And then you grow
Not very fast
And not too slow

You grow your teeth
You grow your feet
And then you become
A grown-up kid

The time flies forward
Or backward sometimes
At times too slow
Or way too fast

You wander through life
And one day recognize
How to stretch your shoulders
And spread your wings
And fly high into the sky
Into the bubble of happiness
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Posted: May 2019
About this poem:
This was first written for my son and keeps changing
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madtat29

Sweet nothings

If "somedays" were sprinkles and cherry toppings,
And 'probably" was icing on cake,
Then I'd spend everyday just stuffing my face,
Gorging my worries away,
If "if's" and "but's" were candy and nuts,
And "maybe's" were peaches on cream,
If every "almost" was cinnamon toast,
Oh what a world it would be...
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Posted: May 2019
About this poem:
Just a little fanciful confection for consideration
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Didi7

I’m not ready…yet.

Betwixt and between,
The future – unseen –
I dare not believe it could be.
Should I go, should I stay?
Not sure what to say.
He doesn’t know aught about me.

I do, and I don’t,
I will, but I won’t.
What shall become of me then?
There’s no use denying;
I’d only be lying
If I said I was ready again.

I‘m good on my own.
But to not be alone
Would be my ideal remedy.
A friend who’s just right
Would be a delight.
But my wavering mind foils me.
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Posted: Nov 2022
About this poem:
I want to date, and then I don't...Will it happen?
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Dementia

Porcelain Doll

As the moon casts its shadow on fate
This twilight dims my expectations
And as the daring sun, approaches
The mirror reveals that this is not my reflection
I've grown into someone I fear
My past must suddenly be revealed
And as I wear this cloak of shame
I realize suddenly just how I feel

I want to dive into oblivion
Want to wash my mouth of disgust
And if I had wings I'd fly
Into the times of just us

So don't let your memories fade
For mine are carved in stone
And I know your heart is as easily broken
As the face of a porcelain doll

Is it too late to be forgiven
Can I cast these daggers from my eyes
It feels that I'm headed on a path of destruction
And the only thing left to do is die
With all these tears I've formed an ocean
And was washed ashore by the tital wave
And with your fear I've been stranded
But with your love I could be saved

I want to dive into oblivion
Want to wash my mouth of disgust
And if I had wings I'd fly
Into the times of just us

So don't let your memories fade
For mine are carved in stone
And I know your heart is as easily broken
As the face of a porcelain doll
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Posted: Nov 2009
About this poem:
this is one of my favorite songs that i've written
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sabeel

CARING AND SHARING

we search for caring
and loves more caring
we need sharing
but fails,more to share
caring and sharing is the true love
anyone wish to share more
he can care more
then he should be cared and shared more...
but it is not easy to care and share
until we understand each-other
if we fails to share, no one will care !
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Posted: Feb 2010
About this poem:
if we fails to share, no one will care..
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Unknown

Pretty Fine Day

Verse I

Woke up this mornin',
And that's always a plus.
Still up on top of,
The ashes and the dust.
No indications,
That I have woke up dead.
Guess it's okay to,
Get on up out of bed.


Chorus

It's a pretty fine day,
When I'm not feelin' too sad.
It's a pretty fine day,
When the pain is not too bad.
It's a pretty fine day,
When the wolves are all at bay.
Overall I gotta say,
That this is a pretty fine day.


Verse II

Up on my feet, yeah,
Both legs still workin' too.
Head to the kitchen,
I got coffee to brew.
Not on the street and,
There's plenty food to eat,
Just count my blessings,
I'm not yet in defeat.


Verse III

Got through the day with,
No new catastrophies.
No wants or warrants,
So I'm still runnin' free.
And if I'm sinkin',
The hole is not that deep.
No worries now as,
I drift on off to sleep.
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Posted: Jul 2010
About this poem:
Hope springs eternal...
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