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tennesseejudy

When I think of you

When the darkness turns to gray with the sun's first soft ray making all the world look new ,it is then I think of you.

When the dew kissed rose I see, birds singing from the trees to welcome day as they do ,it is then I think of you.

When soft winds arouse the trees with a gentle summer breeze drying off the morning dew, it is then I think of you.

When the sun glides across the sky settling into its mid day high with cotton clouds against the blue, it is then I think of you.

When there's afternoon thundershowers lasting for a few dark hours and then the raindrops cease to few, it is then I think of you.

When the rainbow then appears erasing all the storms dark fears, the sky again is baby blue, it is then I think of you.

When I see the orange sunset reminding me how we first met and then the sun sinks out of view, it is then I think of you.

When the evening shadows fall starts the crickets lonely call giving the fireflies their cue, it is then I think of you.

When twinkling stars adorn the night accompanied by the moon's pale light, beams dancing on the distant hue, it is then I think of you.

When in my dreams I often see fantasies of you and me and I know my love is true, it is then I think of you.
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Posted: Jan 2010
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ecm1013

My Tragedy Girl

Be my crash
I'll be your mistake
Fall with me
So we both can break
Break my heart
Give me things to fear
Cloud my head
Until my thoughts aren't clear

Be my tragedy
And you'll never be affraid

So crash with me
Let's go down and burn
Fall with me
So we both get hurt
Hold my hand
Let me feel your heart
How can it end
If we don't let it start

Be my tragedy
And you'll never be affraid

Be my crash
I'll be your mistake
Fall with me
So we both can break
Break our hearts
Give us things to fear
Cloud our heads
Until our thoughts aren't clear

Be my tragedy
And you'll never be affraid
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Posted: Nov 2009
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Gligeen

The road travelled.

I call danger, and you hear wolf.
Both our fates lie in your dismissive hand.
Your steps are mine, we will share the dark.
And you, like me - will lament in silence.

I call danger, and you hear danger.
Both our fates lie in your heed of cry.
Your steps are mine, we will shed the dark.
Then you and me will sing in chorus.
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Posted: Jun 2019
About this poem:
It is about the differing results of how we react to a warning.
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madtat29

Pain is my friend

Seems like Pain,
Pain is my only friend,
Yeah, Me and Pain are lonely old friends,
I said "Hello, How are you?, How you been?",
When Pain came and seen me again,
See She's a Pain I'm still caught up in,
A Pain I don't think ever ends,
Maybe Baby made a hole I can't mend,
When pain came to see me,
Earlier this evening,
Pain came and seen me again...
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Posted: May 2019
About this poem:
Song...
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madtat29

No place

It was Dallas, Texas,
San Antone, or Idaho,
Maybe in New Mexico,
I don't know...,
Some time ago...,
I met a leather man out on the road,
Crease and fold,
Bent and old,
Had the saddest story ever told,
Chill your soul,
Cut the bone,
He said "I been on a roll,
On the road,
I been on a roll for so long,
It's so wrong...,
He said "What's left of me is cold,
Bought and sold,
Had no one to hold for so long,
It's so wrong...",
He said "No place feels like home,
No, No place feels like home...,
No place has felt like home for so long",
Saddest story ever told...,
"This path is one I chose",
On he goes,
"Up and down the oceans coast,
On a boat,
With nothing of my own,
All alone,
In Alaska where its cold,
With freezing snows,
Spent some time in Mexico,
Way down below,
But no matter where I go,
I know that everywhere I roam,
No place feels like home...,
Something's always off,
Drifter move along,
Black sheep of the fold..."
The man had the saddest story ever told.
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Posted: Jun 2019
About this poem:
Wandering and Lost
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Herzmann40

If I Was Your Man

If I was your man
I would help you stand
I would hold you up and pull you out your sinking sands
And I know its hard for you to trust a man
But if I'm anyone, I'm the one you truly can
I know you got your walls
And girl, I understand
You take em all down, let yourself fall
Get your heart broke all over again
Don't take em down for me
Cause I want to break em
I wanna prove to you I'm not the bricks that made them

I'd be your best friend
A shoulder you could cry on
I'd be there til the end
My heart you could rely on
I'd never let you down
Cause I am not a clown
In my kingdom I'm a peasant
And you're the one who wears the crown

If I was your man
You'd never have to feel alone
You'd never have to worry that I had some other women on the phone
Yeah I've made some mistakes
You live and you learn
I've always felt that every fallen leaf deserved another turn
And it was you that flipped me over
You're my saving grace
In a deck that's full of jokers
I could be your winning ace

I'd be your best friend
A shoulder you could cry on
I'd be there til the end
My heart you could rely on
I'd never let you down
Cause I am not a clown
In my kingdom I'm a peasant
And you're the one who wears the crown
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Posted: May 2021
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ManicCC

NEVER SET ME FREE

Wanna put my arms around you
Gathering you in
Till I can feel your heartbeat
Pressed against my skin

I will draw you even closer
Never letting go,
So forever feel me holding
My arms around your soul.

(Chorus)
I can hear you now
I can see you smile (Lighting up the darkness)
I can feel you oh so close to me (so close, oh so close yeah)
I am caught now
(Never let me go)
my hearts your prisoner
Never wana be (ee ee ee)
Ever set free.

Tell you that I need you
Tell me you want me to
An eternity together
Where all love’s dreams can come true

(Chorus)
I still hear your voice
I still see your smile (Shinning full of love-light)
I still feel you holding on to me (hold me, Hold tight darling)
I am caught now
(I would never let you go)
My hearts your prisoner
Don't ever wana be (ee ee ee)
(Never ever)
Never wana be (ee ee ee)
(your's forever)
An I never wana be (Oh oh yeah eh )
Never ever set me free

(Chorus (repeat to fade out))
II still hear your voice
I still see your smile (Shinning full of love-light)
I still feel you holding on to me (hold me, Hold tight darling)
I am caught now
(I would never let you go)
My hearts your prisoner
Don't ever wana be (ee ee ee)
(Never ever)
Never wana be (ee ee ee)
(your's forever)
An I never wana be (Oh oh yeah eh )
Never ever set me free
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Posted: Oct 2019
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DiggableHippy49

Playing the Loners Game

I'm alone and I guess that's okay,
She said she didn't want me anymore,
So, I moved away,
My biggest mistake,--
Playing the loners game

A possible dream becomes a nightmare,
And as that nightmare becomes a fact,
And as the clouds clear from last nights storm in your mind,
You place down the bottle- to watch another sunrise,
Just to damn yourself; no way to justify, you can't go back

You go to bed, lay there,
You can't sleep,
You haven't ate nothing for days, you don't care,
Yet, you know this isn't me,--
Endlessly wondering what to do now?
Which way to present yourself how?
How to wear a smile behind this frown?--

I'm on my own now and I guess that's okay,
She said she doesn't love me anymore,
So, I'm moving farther and farther away,
Yet, knowing I'm not the only fool to blame--
Playing the Loners Game


DiggableHippy 10/8/19
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Posted: Oct 2019
About this poem:
The poem/song I wrote is complicated, yet; understandable. I grew up in the Army traveling from one state to the next, so by the time I hit my teenage years I came to realize that I was/am a loner! I really never belonged or fit in anywhere. The girls liked me and the boys wanted to fight me!! lol Til one day in December of 1988, I met this girl, she was 16 and I was 18; and from that point on life gave purpose! The word loner no longer existed. Unfortunatly, over the span of 30 years being together our love lost it's luster. A little over a year ago she told me she no longer loved, nor; wanted me anymore and that she's felt that way for a long time. When I talked of future travels out of state and perhaps living there for awhile, her thought of travels are to the mailbox! lol
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RadiantFirefly

The Definition Of Insanity - 06/18/19

I am the definition of insanity
My Love for you keeps throwing me into the flames yet I keep running back into your arms, hoping something has changed ....
Nothing Ever Changes, We continue to run around in this endless circle,

Me: Lost & Confused, Hurting inside, tears on the outside, running down my face
You: Laughing, telling jokes, happy in your love, clueless that I'm in pain, caused by you.... Can't seem to explain....

Here we are, so many years later, so many tears I've cried, so much my heart has been through.... All For You and You have no clue that I've died!!! You swear you love me but Only in words!!! Only in Your words!!!!

How can you say you love me when all I do, upsets you
How can you say you love me and say such mean and hateful Words??? Your Love is insanity.... That is so clear to me..... And Yet...

I've made excuses, so many excuses for the way You've been treating me.... Excuses as to why I return to allow more pain to come from you....

You have broken my Dreams of You, of Us .... You've broken me. I was already broken when you met me, swore you'd fix me..... I was the one trying so hard, dying so hard to fix You...

Insanity, The Definition Of insanity is Me here now, still hurting as I try to keep my distance from you, while finding myself falling for it All, All over again.... Over again

So tired of feeling broken and dead watching you live like nothing has ever happened.... Listening as You Tell me you love me!!!! Swearing I've hurt you just as much as you have me!!!
If that were so true, Why am I always the one with tears in my eyes and scars on my heart..... Tell me.... Why am I the one with tears in my eyes and scars on my heart and you seem to prance around careless and free....

That's what insanity is.... Insanity is this crazy little dance you & I seem to share .... I give you my all and you take everything ..

I Am The Definition Of Insanity!!! Over and over and over again
I am the definition of Insanity...
Insanity is Me.....

*Fireless Firefly*
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Posted: Oct 2019
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Gligeen

What we might know.

Let your heart tell your mind what it knows, and see the world for the first time.
Step from dark, become a light to surround.
Trade all fear for love.
Begin to see yourself in others, and them in you - safe from harm and free as birds in full flight, choosing their own course.

Their storm is your storm.
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Posted: Feb 2019
About this poem:
Operating from love instead of fear.
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