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Tryin' Everything I Can

I'm gonna open all the widows, I smell the rain a comin'
Said i'm gonna open all the widows, gonna be a storm today
Yeah i'm gonna open all the windows, try to wash these blues away

I'm gonna turn on all the lights, cast out all the shadows
Yeah i'm gonna turn on all the lights, make it bright as day
Said i'm gonna turn on all the lights, try to scare these blues away

I'm tryin' everyting I can now baby,just to get over you
Ever since you walked out that door, an ran away with him
Been tryin' everything I can,an come tomorrow i'll try all over again

I'm gonna open up this bottle, swim down to the bottom
Said i'm gonna open up this bottle, don't care if it takes all day
I'm gonna open up this bottle, try to drink my blues away

I'm gonna dust off that ol' six string, sittin in the corner
Yeah i'm gonna pick up that ol' six string, see what she has to say
Said i'm gonna strum on that ol' six string, try to play my blues away

I'm tryin' everything I can now woman, just to get over you
Said i'm tryin' everything I can, just to get rid of these blues
I guess i'll keep on tryin', aint nothin' else that I can do
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Posted: Mar 2011
About this poem:
Just an "authentic" blues number in the Key of E
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HuggerMan4U

Empty Promises

"Empty Promises" (Written for, and dedicated to, Dharma)
"Empty Promises"

Empty promises, that's all I get.
You'd think I was just a pet.
They come, and they just go.
Seems like it's just for show.

So empty promises is all I get.
I'm tired of just being your pet.

So make it happen, or let me go.
Don't make me wait, or go slow.
'Cause empty promises are all I've got.
And all you do is stir the pot.

Empty promises, that''s all I get,
And I'm tired of just being a pet.

Empty promises, that's all I get,
And I'm tired of just being a pet.

(C) Copyright 2009 Lowell Brandon, Faith Times Ministry
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Posted: Aug 2011
About this poem:
A friend on another site was having problems with a guy who wouldn't commit. I wrote this song for her because I am empathetic and was feeling her pain. I'm sure many of you can identify with this song, especially if you are familiar with the song, "You Should Have Put A Ring On It".
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Unknown

Live,Love,Learn,and Be True!! Ha

You living life to the fullest,
Everydays a journey, full of tests, interests
and true conquests
Invest in life!
That's what I'm gettin at
coincide wit ya habit
Think before you act
Before you get trapped
Life is full of trials
and tribulations
situations, and temptations u facing
u steady pacin
waitin for a sign...
to tell you where you are in life,
you need to wake up
and getta glimpse of what we call...
"Real-Life"
Cuz it pains me to see
a would be
could be
cuz you livin life
in a fantasy
You settin yaself up
for self-destruction
Sufferin, from your allusions,confusions,pollutions
of an illegal substance
And you steady cussin
thinkin
Everybody owes you somethin
But you got anutha thing comin
Whaattt??(You say!!)
You runnin from the law
Like you runnin from ya life
and the only thing that follows
is pain, hurt and strife
you needa wake up and see the light,
and like a bomb
let ya mind ignite
because if ya dont
ya mind will be stuck in twilight
and the end will come as fast as a
Snakebite!!!
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Posted: Sep 2011
About this poem:
Life
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sexxmagick74

"UPON BLACK THOUGHTS OF MISERY" 5/5/2014

DEEP WITHIN ALL OF MY DREAMS...
DEEP WITHIN THE NIGHTMARISH DREAD...
I'M DWELLING UPON BLACK THOUGHTS OF MISERY...
FOR THE FORLORN IS OF THAT WHICH I WAS BLED...

DIGGING DEEP WITHIN THE GROUND...
THE SUN BEATS DOWN, HARD UPON MY BACK...
AND, THERE, I JUST DIG A HOLE SO DEEP.
WHILE THINKING ABOUT THE DARKENING, OF THE BLOOD OF MY PAST...

OH, HOW I'M REMEMBERING THE BLOOD OF MY DARKENING...
FOR HER ESSENCE I ONCE KNEW, IS LURKING INSIDE MY MIND...
AND OH, HOW MY HEART WAS TORN APART, INTO MY EYES WAS THAT WICKED SMILE...
WHILE, MY SOUL WAS STRIPPED AWAY FROM LIFE, AS DEATH DECIEVED MY LIGHT, SO VILE...

UPON BLACK THOUGHTS OF MISERY...
UPON BLACK THOUGHTS OF MISETY...
UPON BLACK THOUGHTS OF MISERY...
UPON BLACK THOUGHTS PF MISERY...
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Posted: Oct 2014
About this poem:
This song and actually the whole album is based on the pain i went through from my last gf who thought it was funny to rip out my heart.. the album is called
"THE DARKENING" just remember Theresa, REVENGE IS SWEET, ... hahahahahahaha. ....
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sexxmagick74

"THE CARNATION OF SUFFERING" 9/11/2012

ENDULGING IN THE SUFFERING.
BURIED DEEP IN SIN.
PLEDGING IT'S DARK BAPTISM.
BECOMING ONE WITHIN...

ADULTERATED...
POLLUTED WITHIN A DOCTRINE OF DAMNATION...
INCARCERATED...
IN THE BONDAGE ENGRAVED THROUGH THE GLEAMING ESSENCE OF AN ABOMINATION...

AN EVIL INCLINATION BESTOWS THOSE VISIONS THROUGH DREAMS OF NOTHINGNESS.
INSCRIBING IT'S CHAOS SO CLEAR WITHIN, YOUR TEMPLE IS TWISTED IN THE FLOW OF MADNESS...

EXHILERATIONS OF INTIMATE PLEASURES.
CONFIRMED PERIODIC AROMA OF REPITITIOUS PAIN.
ESTABLISHED DEEP INSIDE THE ARENA, BEHOLD! A GALLERY OF SIN.
ANGEL ASSASSINS ARE THE EXPLORORS OF DAMNATION'S DOMAIN...

... IT'S THE CARNATION OF SUFFERING...

THE RADIANCE... OF THE FIRES LUMINOSITY...
ECLIPSING... THE DYING LIGHT THROUGH ANIMOSITY...

ALIGHNED BY THE HATRED OF SHAPES, FORMED BY INTERSECTING PLANES...
THIS INDIGNATION OF DEMONIC EVIL FULFILLS THE DARKNESS WITHIN THE GRAVE...

... IT'S THE CARNATION OF SUFFERING...

DAEMONS, DEMONS, AND DEVILS OF THE PIT, KILL IN THE NAME OF THE MADNESS...
THESE ANCIENT ONES ARE THE MASTERS OF HELL...
KILLING IN VEIN, FULFILLING THE STAINED, AND BURNING WITH THEM IN THE BLACKNESS...

DAEMON...
YOU ARE FEASTING ON THE FLESH TONIGHT...
WHERE DEMONS ARE SPAWNED...
UPON THE SHORES OF STYX, BATHING IN INSANITY...

ECLIPSED BY LIES AND DECIET, HEAR THOSE TWISTED SCREAMS...
UNLESHING THE HORROR, OPENING THE DOOR, THROUGH POSSESSIONS UNFOLDING IN TIME...

... IT'S THE CARNATION OF SUFFERING...
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Posted: Oct 2014
About this poem:
REINCARNATION= you died, then you were reborn into a new body.

INCARNATION= you haven't had the luxery of being reborn yet, basically. you are a new soul and this was your first birth...

CARNATION= has 2 meanings, 1~a flower... 2~Its something, someone, or whatever that was never born, had never died, for it had just always been...

think about it deeply and maybe you will understand what I'm truly speaking of...
i had this piece written 1 year before i came up with the title...

This song will be on the album i call...

"THE DIVINE SPIRIT OF DAMNATION" hope u like this one...
i welcome all ur comments. and anythjng thou wisheth to speaketh of.. ~~~~ Bobby
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sexxmagick74

"OF DOOR AND DEMON" 6/28/2011

DEMON... DEMON... I SAY YOUR NAME...
GREET ME AT THE GATES OF DEATH...
AND OPEN UP THE DOOR SO WIDE...
LET YOUR EVIL ABIDE BY THE LAWS YOU HAVE SET...
DEMON... DEMON... COME UNTO ME...
LET YOUR INFLUENCE STAIN MY WICKED SOUL...
I CAN FEEL THE POWER OF YOUR DEMON SEED...
I KNOW THE PAIN, FROM WHICH THE BLOOD DID FLOW...

THE DARKENED PASSAGE AWAITS...
I WALK IT'S BURNING HALL...
IS THIS MY DESTINY OR MY FATE?...
I FEEL THE MAGICK, TO ME IT CALLS...

DEMON... DEMON... IT'S YOU I SEE...
AS I LOOK AT MYSELF IN THE MIRROR...
GAZING TO DARK REFLECTIONS OF ME...
THAT FLOWS THROUGH THE ENDLESS HALLS OF DESPAIR...
DEMON... DEMON... POSSESSION UNFOLDS...
UNVEILING THE FACE OF THE ONE WHO DON'T HIDE...
FOR, IT LIES INSIDE ANCIENT EVIL BESTOWED...
SO HEAR THE CALLING, IT'S WHAT WE WILL FIND...

THE DARKENED PASSAGE AWAITS...
I WALK IT'S BURNING HALL...
IS THIS MY DESTINY OR MY FATE?...
I HEAR THE VOICES, TO ME THEY CALL...

"YOU ALONE ARE THE MASTER OF THE KEY...
A SERVANT FOR MY DESTINY...
SO, OPEN THE DOOR AND LET ME IN...
LET MY SOUL BURN FOR ALL ETERNITY..."

OF DOOR AND DEMON...
TAKE MY SOUL AWAY...
OF DOOR AND DEMON...
I'M NOW REBORN BEYOND THE GRAVE...

DEMON... DEMON... YOU BECKON ME...
TO THE ENDLESS DEPTHS OF ANCIENT EVIL...
FOR COUNTLESS CENTURIES, THROUGH ENDLESS DREAMS...
YOU HAVE BEEN SOUGHT FROM BEYOND THE VEIL...
DEMON... DEMON... THE BLOOD THAT FLOWS...
IS OF THE PATH I PAVED STRAIGHT INTO HELL...
I FEEL YOUR DARKNESD, IT BURNS SO COLD...
THE DOOR WAS OPENED WHERE YOU STILL DWELL...

THE DARKENED PASSAGE AWAITS...
I WALK IT'S BURNING HALL...
IS THIS MY DESTINY OF MY FATE?...
I HEAR THE DEVIL, TO ME IT CALLS...
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Posted: Oct 2014
About this poem:
I really don't have much to say about this one except that it is the title of it's own album...

"OF DOOR AND DEMON"
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sexxmagick74

"...AND AS I LAY DYING" 5/17/2014

LYING UPON THE FLOOR, TOUCHING DARKNESS...
I... AM BLEEDING AWAY...
BATHING DEEP, THE THICK FLOW OF BLOOD...
A... CRIMSON SPILT NECTOR...
GAZING UP AT THE CEILING...
WHILE MY SIGHT... FADES AWAY...
AM I TRUELY GOING TO DIE THIS WAY?...
FOR, I SEEM TO BE WAKING UP TO A NIGHTMARE...

I FEEL THE STING... ALL MY PAIN...
COVETING... MY ETERNAL BEING...
SO DEEP WITHIN... THIS VIVID SETTING...
I'M EMBRACING A SCARY UNKNOWN...
I'VE TRIED REACHING OUT TO TOUCH HER HAND...
BUT... OH, FU*K, SHE'S NEVER THERE...
FOR...THE REALITY LIES WITHIN UNCARING PEOPLE...
WHO HELPED CREATE MY HELL... WHICH WILL NOW UNFOLD...

...AND AS I LAY DYING...
I'M SEARCHING TO TOUCH MY ESSENCE, WITHIN MY LOST SOUL...
GAZING AT LOST HOPE...
THE COMING DEATH... OH, ITS BESTOWED...

SHATTERED WITHIN... MY SUFFERING...
FEELING MY HEART TURNING COLD..
UNFOLDING ENTITIES DROP ON BY...
FOR SHAPING THE GREAT UNKNOWN...
ENDLESS DESPAIR... UNENDING FEARS...
COURSE DEEP INSIDE MY HAUNTED DEPTHS...
I'M CALLING OUT TO SEE... DOES SHE COME?...
OH NO... TO HER, I MAY AS WELL BE FOREVER DEAD...

UPON STORMY NIGHTS, I SAT ALONE...
WATCHING... AS THE RAIN CAME POURING STRAIGHT DOWN...
WHILE DWELLING INSIDE... TO AWAKEN MY THOUGHTS...
THOSE DARK WHISPERS INSIDE WERE SO LOUD...

FOR, THE PAIN IN ME... IS WHAT I'VE FOUND...
AND... NEVER DID SHE RETURN TO ME UPON THAT NIGHT...
AND, IN TEARS... I JUST WEPT... FOR I KNEW...
WHERE SHE LAY... I'VE SEEN IT THROUGH MY VERY EYES...

...AHHH... WITHIN MY MIND...

...AND AS I LAY DYING...
DEATH WHISPERS TO ME UPON THIS DARKENING NIGHT...
...AND AS I LAY DYING...
I'LL SOON BE DEAD BENEATH THE DARKENING SKY...

HA... HA... HA... HA... HA... HA... HA...
HA... HA... HA... HA... HA... HA... HA...
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Posted: Oct 2014
About this poem:
This song is on the album i call

"DARK INTIMACY" another one of my epic concept album about Dark Desires & Dark Passions.... for abstract s*xual apitites of sinful delight...

hope u enjoy this one... its about me dying... its the 1st song uppn the album...
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sexxmagick74

"SUFFERING" 11/28/2011

I AM IN THE SUFFERING...

THE PAIN IS DEEP, CLEAR AS CAN BE.
EMOTIONS ARE LOST IN TORMENT, THE LIGHT CAN NOT BE SEEN.
A LIVING HELL DESCENDS, THIS MUST BE MY FATE.
A BATTERED SOUL IN ANGUISH, MY PAIN IS STAINED WITH ALL I HATE...

A DEMON'S FANTASY... SHE CRAVES MY BLOOD...
LOST WITHIN DARKNESS... ALONE, WITH NO ONE...

I AM IN THE SUFFERING...
I AM IN THE SUFFERING...

MY LIFE IS FLOWING WITH A DEEP, DARK PAIN.
I CRY OUT FOR PEACE, BUT ONLY DESPAIR REMAINS.
MY SOUL IS SCREAMING FOR SOMETHING I CAN'T HAVE.
I DIE THE SAME EVERY NIGHT, MY SOUL IS TURNING BLACK..

A TWISTED REALITY... SHE CRAVES MY DEATH...
ALONE IN THE PAIN I DWELL... SADNESS HAS CREPT...

I AM IN THE SUFFERING...
I AM IN THE SUFFERING...

I AM F**KED UP IN MY BRAIN.
HAVE I GONE COMPLETELY INSANE?
SHE HAS STOLEN WHATS LEFT OF MY WILL.
IT'S MY HEART THATS BEATEN AND MAIMED...

I HAD NOW BECOME THE DEMON OF MY DARKNESS.
I'VE BEEN BAPTISED IN THE FLAMES OF BLACKNESS.
A WH*RE FROM THE VERY BOWELS OF HELL, FEEDING ON THE EVIL.
MY OLD LIFE WAS RIPPED APART, AND THE CHAOS IS UNVEILED...

BROKEN DREAMS CORRUPT MY MIND, TO LOVE AND LIGHT I AM BLIND.
STAINED BY THE AGONY OF THIS PAIN, I CRUMBLE AND FALL WITHIN THIS GAME.
BURIED IN THE PASSIONS OF HATE, IS HER DEVIL THAT CALLED ME TO MY GRAVE.
I DREAM OF PEACE I ONCE HAD, BUT SAD EMOTIONS TOOK IT'S PLACE...

SHATTERED WORLDS... REFLECTIONS OF DISGRACE..
THE SUFFERING BESTOWS WHAT IS DUE... THE SUFFERING WAS EMBRACED...

I AM IN THE SUFFERING...
I AM IN THE SUFFERING...
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Posted: Oct 2014
About this poem:
This song will be on my album i call. "THE HOST"
I was in a lot of pain when i wrote this one...
Me and my wife(ex) got together in 1998... we got married in 1999... she left me for a man 20yrs older than me in november of 2004... i got into things after that that landed me in a federal penitentury... i divorced her in 2008. it was final in november of 2008... in 2011 We got back together. and she ripped my heart out once again with another man. so i wrote this song for her. then decided to give her one last chance. infebrurary of 2012. an artery exploded in a lung and she died in my arms. this story is true and its the basis for the pain i felt inside... enjoy...
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sexxmagick74

"THE BECOMING" 11/3/2005

"ON A WARM MIDSUMMERS NIGHT.
THE STARS FILL THE DEEP, CLEAR SKY.
FOR THE MOON UP ABOVE IS SO WHOLE & WHITE.
AND THE SOFT, TENDER BREEZE FLOWS FREELY BY..."

"SO DEEP WITHIN THIS PEACEFUL SCENE.
I AM FEELING THE PASSIONS OF LIFE, SO COMFORTING.
FOR THE GOODNESS OF ALL ETERNITY.
IS SPARKLING SO BEAUTIFULLY AND ENDLESSLY..."

"IT IS LIKE IM LIVING WITHIN AN EVERFLOWING DREAM.
WHERE ALL THE MAGICK IS GLISTENING, WHERE THE LULLABYES ARE SWEET.
HER WISDOM IS SO DEEPLY EMBRACING THE LIFEFORCE OF SENTIENT BEINGS
AND UPON HER ANCIENT POWERS LIES THE BECOMING OF ALL INFINITY..."
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Posted: Sep 2014
About this poem:
This poam was written by me. 11/3/2005
Im a singer/songwriter. ive been writing since 1987. and i write this song for the pagan goddess "Diana" As a smudge of light in the darkness. it Will be on the album titled "DIVINE EVIL" It will have 13 songs on it of which i will sing when i get another band together. i usually zrite dark poetry, but i thought u readers would like this one, And i believe ill post many more lyrics on this site. Enjoy.
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mcradloff

I Thought I Found A Job

Where Where
Are You Tonight
Why did you leave me here all alone
I searched the world over
And thought I found a job
You found another
And "PPTTT"
You were gone
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Posted: Feb 2013
About this poem:
This is a parody of a HeeHaw song. It was a country comedy and musical show that was on when I was a kid back in the 70's. With all the people out looking for work in this new economy, I thought this would be a good song for them to sing.
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