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Crying4U

Got no star in my
Sky
Am still looking
For you
With a desparate
Desire
Am looking in that
Dew

Some water from the
Cloudes
Am waiting for
You
I have desparetly
Cried
Am still crying for
You
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Posted: Feb 2013
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Yankee4youonline today!

Still On My Own

Late one night, a hollow moon
Dances so light, across the sky
Hear the coyotes cry
On the ridge, when passing by
Falling stars, I wish upon
See my troubles gone

Fast to sleep, a dreamy night
Running so hard, against the wild
Frightened horses smiled
In the meadow, through waving grass
Nothing lasts, to remember
But still September

Far to go, ‘till morning comes
Washes the sea, crashing the waves
How crazy life behaves
Out my window, across the bay
Sailing fast, I ride alone
Still on my own
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Posted: Sep 2013
About this poem:
An abstract poem about dreaming on a lonely night.
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HuggerMan4U

I'm So Tired

I'm so tired,
And here's the reason why.
We hiked and played all day,
Up and down, and all around,
And that's why I'm tired today!

(C) Copyright 2013, Faith Times Ministry
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Posted: Feb 2014
About this poem:
This is a song to the tune of I'm So Happy, a Gospel song. I wrote it after a long hike with some members of my walking group, in which we went up and down some steep hills. I was worn out afterward, and this song perfectly illustrates how I felt after the hike.
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Beath

Pink Rose

Just as I looked my Stuff I found Pink Rose..

And for once, I told myself..whoever can give me even just a single piece, probably, He's the one. . . (twas a sign that I've been asking for..A pink Rose)

Then he came. ..
Things went smooth...
A happy moments with him. . .
Then one day, He left. ..
I was about to tell him everything. . .
How he means to me. . .
But it was too late..
Something happen...
An accident.. .
I was really hurt when I heard the news..
He will not come back anymore. . .
That's the only words in my head. . .
I blamed my self. . .
I did even asked God for a Bargain. . .
And that, if the only thing that could bring you back...
Is to stay away from you, I would rather do. . .
Thing's not that easy. . .
I know, whatever I do, It'll not bring the old You. . .
I cried too much. ..
Til I run out of tears. . .
Days by. . .
Months runs. . .
Years passed. . .

Still, longing for his care. . .
For his LOVE. ..
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Posted: Feb 2014
About this poem:
For the guy that I lost literally :'(
Wherever you are, I just hope you were happy..
Still missing you here. .
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sexxmagick74

"DEMONESS" 9/17/2014

BURY DEEP, MY HEART IN THE DEPTHS OF MY FLESH.
FOREVER, IT SEEMED I HAD WEPT, THROUGH BURIED DREAMS, I LAY DEAD.
MY HEART IS STILLED, EVER AFTER, HATES REVEALED.
FROM UNDER THE SHROUD, MY SHADOW'S UNVEILLED, BENEATH THE SKIES OF EVIL...

MY SCREAMS ARE STAINED WITHIN MY BLOODY LUNGS.
I AM, SO DRAINED BY HER DECIEVING TONGUE.
HER ESSENCE KILLED MY VERY PRESENCE, EMBRACING OUR DEMONS WITHIN.
AS I WHISPER FOR HELP UPON A NIGHT OF SIN, THE LIGHT HAD DIED BENEATH MY SKIN...

UNHOLY MOMENTS LAY ENDLESS AND HEARTS ARE BLED IN VEIN.
UNSEALING TRUTHS OF VENGEANCE MASKED UNDER SORROW AND PAIN.
WOE ENHANCES HER GLORY, AS THE STORY OF LOVES LIE WILL TELL.
I FELL INSIDE, THE TRAP SHE HIDES, SO WELL I RESIDE, FROM UNDER HER SPELL...

OH, DEMONESS... DRAPED IN THE ROBES OF BLACK.
I CALL OUT YOUR UNHOLY NAME THROUGH FEIGNED REALITIES, EMBRACING YOUR PATH.
OH, DEMONESSS... DRAPED IN THE ROBES OF BLACK.
I WITNESS THE DEMON WHOM BEARS YOUR FACE, THOUGH TEARS OF DISGRACE, I HEAR YOUR LAUGH...
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Posted: Sep 2014
About this poem:
This is also on the album "SOWING THE SEEDS OF TORMENT"
I really dont know what to say about this one...:(
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Unknown

Death Dealer

Wait a minute, where did the path go,
u stepped off the trail,
for a moment now its gone.
You're lost, the woods close around you,
It'is gettn dark can it be evening already.
What was that noise that rustling sound,
that growl, its not so nice out here anymore,
perhaps u think you shouldnt have come here,
there's things in the dark,
things that wait to grab and eat you.
chorus
I've watched this world
from shadows afar,
contributed fetishes, moots
and kaerns,
despoiled justice for things i ve done,
silhouettes of zombies come.
verse
Dark glow of the new moon,
inks shadows on the street,
meandering visages slither before succumbing,
To my dark gaze, grinning happily,
Darkness blurs them now,
they walk with respect, around me how,
treading lightly fearing the rage of my howl.
repeat chorus
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Posted: Nov 2011
About this poem:
unfinised song lol
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Unknown

Momma do you remember (Alzheimer's)

Momma do you remember the day I was born
late in December when winter
takes away the warm
Momma do you remember
Momma do you remember

Momma do you remember when I was in my teens
with long curly hair
and bell bottom jeans
Momma do you remember
Momma do you remember

Momma it wasn't long ago
you where working in your yard
planting fresh flowers
you use to work so hard
now you can't make your flowers grow
OH no Oh no
Momma do you remember


Momma do you remember the day I was wed
let no man put asunder
is what the preacher said
Momma do you remember
Momma do you remember

Momma do you remember my one and only son
born one day after your birthday
that's when his life begun
Momma do you remember
Momma do you remember

Momma do you remember, Me?
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Posted: Feb 2012
About this poem:
I wrote this about a year before my Mom died of Alzheimer's
wondering I guess what might jog her memory when she forgot me
thinking if I reminded her of important things in my life that are considered mile stones of my life.
My Mom passed in July 2011 not knowing me.
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akpauly

the truth

an original song by p. bruns. written in 2008, and recored in a little studio outside san angelo texas. on the c.d. titled 'simple'. thanks for reading.

I'm up late again.
feels like the sun went down 20 years ago.
it's like I'm waiting for someone.
I'm waiting for someone that I don't know.

I haven't met you yet, and I can't wait...

a sleepless night again
and the t.v. spews out noise - chaotic.
it's like I'm lookin for something
when I find it again I'll know I got it

I haven't found it yet, and I can't wait...

We'll go on and on. the world will fade.
time will pass, I'll serenade.
the flowers will bloom before our eyes
we'll daydream under moonlit skies.
on and on, and we'll have fun.
you'll be my girl, I'l tell everyone
someday we'll look back and see
the truth about the world
the truth about .... you and me.

I'm shaving the last 2 verses off. artistic lisence. :)
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Posted: Aug 2012
About this poem:
this was written for 'that girl' ya know. obvious. it kinda goes with the bottle of wine that my sis-in-law gave to me 7 years ago. 'save this for 'that girl' she said. I still have it. :)
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Unknown

Broken Dreams

Fears that i know will never show.
My burdons will die with me.
My heart will stay hidden, ripped at the seems.

Im a broken man
A shattered shell
Of what im meant to be.

Vacant
Black
Drowning amongst ignorence & selfishness
with no shore in sight.
Just sounds of yes and no
in oceans of maybe's.

Im a broken man
A shattered soul
Of what it use to be.

Broken promises
A life filled with pain.
I now know that the only
certainty in life, is death.
I am nothing
No one
Empty
Hollow
Forgetful
Forgotten

Im a broken man
A shattered shell
Of what im meant to be.

No longer will you fill these thoughts
Of torn apart, broken dreams
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Posted: May 2012
About this poem:
The first song i ever wrote for my band. I "borrowed" one of the lines from Sir Mike Patton "just the sounds of yes and no in oceans of maybe" .... I appolagise for my plagiarism.. I was young but i still wanted to share this with you all...
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Lookingglass1

gotta change it

I lost myself in youre heart and drift away and those are the days I want to rembemer... all the good times and not the bad.... I just want to feel my heart beat again... so please let those bad dreams fade away from me... please just fade away... because I know tommarow will be a better day so just let me fade out this day and change in my own way oh i need to just look at myself in the mirror and be ok with it all.
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Posted: May 2012
About this poem:
I wrote this when i was Listen to bleed by Cold FT. Arron Lewis of staind.
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