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joe08234

"CAN I LOVE YOU?"

You won't let me love you,
It's ashame, so sad yet true,
Tell me now what do I do?
Tell me how will I get through?

If you knew what you meant to me,
You would know we were meant to be,
But maybe I am wrong, unfortunately,
Not good enough, all along I couldn't see.

I only wanted to gain your trust,
But obviously, it wasn't enough,
What I wouldn't do, to feel your touch,
One more time, I miss you so much!

I did all I could, to keep you near,
I gave it my all, blood, sweat and tear,
Why you left me, still isn't clear,
A life without you, I truly fear!

You made me smile, and made me complete,
Only for awhile, but your loving was sweet,
It wasn't long, before you swept me off my feet,
With you I belong, without you I am beat.

You called me a cheater and a liar,
Eventhough you are my only desire,
You are my heart, my soul, my fire,
I love you to death, until I expire.

You won't let me love you,
It's ashame, so sad yet true,
Tell me now what do I do?
Tell me how will I get through?

I tell you time and time again,
But I don't think you comprehend,
What I am feeling deep within,
And what I mean, it's a no-win.

I wish you would open your eyes,
Instead of feeding into men's lies,
I'm not like them, when will you realize?
Your heart I can mend, you'd be surprised!

I never hurt you, and never will,
But do I deserve you? I doubt it still,
The hole in your heart, I can refill,
Give me the okay, I'll start, real deal.

To take your hand in marriage,
Is my ideal life, living life lavish,
To make you my wife, all the rest I'd salvage,
Cause being with you, is all that matters!

I miss our talks,
I miss our walks,
Your presence still stalks,
My mind like the hawks.

You won't let me love you,
It's ashame, so sad yet true,
Tell me now what do I do?
Tell me how will I get through?

Without you I'm nothing,
But with you I'm something,
No matter your assumptions,
Case closed, end of discussion.

You tell me you love me and care,
But I'm over here, and you're there,
I could shed a tear, this life unfair,
All I want is my dear, this life we shared.

Driving down this one-way road,
No turning back, I'm losing control,
I just want you back, that's all I know,
With each day that subtracts, another day untold.

Of what my future may hold,
Us together, growing old?
Us forever, or should I fold?
Leave you, never, you are my gold!

You are my treasure,
You are my pleasure,
And my endeavor,
Together life will get better.

But you won't let me love you,
It is ashame, so sad yet true,
Tell me now what do I do?
Tell me how will I get through?

Can I love you?
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Posted: Jun 2012
About this poem:
LOVE POEM
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Unknown

Home

There's a a place that I know
Outside of town
Theres a place that I go
Outside of town.
Over the mountain
Down a dusty ol' road
Under shade of tall trees
I drive real slow
To catch the cool breeze
And begin to unload
The cares of the day
Cuz I know that soon
Not far up the road
Is the pretty little place
That I call my home
There's a place that I know
Outside of town
There's a place that I go
Outside of town
Over the mountain
Down a dusty ole road
My sweetheart's a waitin
At the top of the hill
At the pretty little place
That I call my home
When I see her blue eyes
My heart goes to meltin
As I hold her and kiss her
And tell her I love her
She asks how my day went
I say alright I guess
But when I'm at home
Its always the best
Cuz there's a place that I know
Outside of town
There's a place that I go
Outside of town
Over the mountain
Down a dusty ole road
Is a pretty little place
That I call my home
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Posted: Jul 2012
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My lost love

I miss my heart when i walk on the road we walked, i kiss my pain when i hear your voice, i wish i was a cloud over your head atleast to follow you till dawn, and wish my day is just till dawn..
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Posted: Dec 2011
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misplaced

So when do I find what I'am looking for
caught in a haze of promises, can't feel what's real or not
Promise me anything, and thats a lie
Don't even know what it is I want
So why should I even try


It's all so misplaced
How long will it take
When the dreams are all gone
How long till you wake

Don't know how I came to this
Just try n' figure out what to do
my hunt and search for greed
you think that I am lost
In a state of mind games, it seems like a check mate
None of us will win
And don't think that I can't wait


It's all so misplaced
How long will it take
When my dreams are all gone
How long till I wake

Bridge XA! It's all so misplaced


It's all so misplaced
How long will it take
When my dreams are all gone
How long till I wake

How long till you wake
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Posted: Nov 2011
About this poem:
why me why cant i be normal
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Unknown

Don't Remember Me

I don't want you to remember,
My Name!
Remember in September,
It won't be the Same!

I don't want to be remembered,
For the things I did
I want to be remembered,
For the things I hid!

You keep saying you wanna die,
Well every night I wanna cry
We keep saying we should try
Well listen baby I won't lie,

I love you more and don't know why,
How I wish I could cry,
God how I don't want you to Die!
People say we should try!

My heart is broken,
My love is a token,
On your wall,
It makes me feel so small,

It is written in a different language,
how it seems like baggage,
how a memory is like footage
this has caused so much damage,

My heart is ripped,
I am torn,
My mind has flipped,
I feel like I am reborn,

I feel like I don't know what to do!
Oh I feel so Blue,
I don't know who,
Listen close, I'm almost though!

I love you more then you'll ever know,
Give me a chance,
An it will show,
Leave me be while I am in your trance,
Listen close this is out last chance,

After this year,
I won't shed a tear,
I don't not fear,
So listen hear,

To this one last thing I have to say
Since I won't Stay!



I don't want you to remember,
My Name!
Just remember next September,
It won't be the same!

I don't want to be remembered,
for the things I did!
I want to be remembered,
For the things I hid...
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Posted: Feb 2012
About this poem:
this poem/song is all about me and my ex and never wanting her to remember me, for I gave her everything that meant a lot to me and she through it all away for our relationship, the thing I keep using about next september is cause on sept 15th 2012 I will be graduating from bootcamp of the USMC. I hope you enjoyed reading my song/poem.
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Unknown

Nightmare In Me

Like a shattered mirror that fell to the floor,
My hearts been broken, ripped and left torn,
The blood pours out, my soul quivers from pain,
My tears fall with the mention of your name,

Your memory has become a nightmare,
Day in and day out its haunting me,
Theres nothing left of us so why do i care,
Its time to walk away and leave you be,

Everytime i go somewhere, your there too,
It used to be so easy, never had anything to lose,
Looking for answers has gotten me nowhere at all,
It just drains my energy, leaving me to crawl,

Your memory has become a nightmare,
Day in and day out its haunting me,
Theres nothing left of us so why do i care,
Its time to walk away and leave you be,

The past is the past, im gunna leave it there to rot,
Im the winner now, your the one with the loss,
Goodbye has never sounded so sweet on my tongue,
Im finally gunna move on in a dead on run,

Your memory has been lost, and cannot be found,
I cant remember anything from what we once had,
Life cant get any better from what it is now,
My dreams are waitin, i just need to reach out and grab...
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Posted: Mar 2012
About this poem:
self explanitory
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Unknown

You and Me

You are stuck in my heart
and we can go anywhere
whatever the reason you are
so stuck in my heart
like counting a million stars
for that many reasons you are
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Posted: Feb 2011
About this poem:
When we met our first love something like that going to happen
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Unknown

I Knew

Maybe it's intuition
But some things you just don't question
Like in your eyes
I see my future in an instant
And there it goes
I think I've found my best friend
I know that it might sound more than a little crazy
But I believe

I knew I loved you before I met you
I think I dreamed you into life
I knew I loved you before I met you
I have been waiting all my life
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Posted: Feb 2011
About this poem:
For that special one
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Unknown

Your Ghost

Six O'clock in the mornin',I haven't stopped thinkin''bout you yet.
Because this empty whiskey bottle by my head couldn't help me to
forget.Your lipstick stained cigarettes still in the ashtray by the bed,unleash my tear stained memories of you to spin around in my head.
I put my feet down on the floor,where you stood and told me goodbye.
And I just hang my head in confusion,I don't know if I should laugh or
if I should cry.

'Cause baby when you walked out that door,
I told myself i'd be ok.
But that was all before I started,
wakin' up with your ghost everyday.

I drink my cup of coffee in the kitchen every mornin',and i'll see your empty chair right there and the tears they always start without
warning.Your old pair of flip flops,still sit by the backdoor.And I
don't know why I leave them there,I know you won't be back to wear
them no more.The sand dollars we found in Destin,collect dust up on
the mantle,and i've tried to take them down a thousand times but there
just so hard to handle.

'Cause baby when you walked out that door,
I told myself i'd be ok.
But that was all before I started,
wakin up with your ghost everyday.

I wonder what i'll do (tell me what am I gonna do)
Now that your gone.
Lord it's been so hard to move on.

All the flowers that you planted,over time have died away.To see them
only reminds me of the love that I could not save.I lay down in our
bed,where you used to hold me tight.I put that bottle to my lips and
pray I don't have another sleepless night.I turn out all the lights
and I wish your ghost away,but I know when tomorrow comes you'll be
here to haunt me one more day.

'Cause baby when you walked out that door,
I told myself i'd be ok.
But that was all before I started,
wakin' up with your ghost everyday.
That was all before I started wakin up with your ghost everyday.
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Posted: Feb 2011
About this poem:
Lost Love Can Haunt Us All.
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Unknown

American Sons

Tommy was 18 when he joined the Corps
Just like his brother and his daddy before
He went and signed the papers, the day after
nine one one
Just another proud american son
Eight weeks of boot,out at Paris Island
Then off to train for the infantry
When he got the word they were going to
Afghanistan
He told his momma and daddy don't ya
worry 'bout me
Three weeks in country,on a cold and
starry night
It was the month of september when
Tommy lost his life
His Sergeant wrote a letter to his
parents,out in Abilene
He wrote,"I want to tell you about
your son"
"We were on patrol,it was 3a.m."
"When we got ambushed by twenty guns"
"The first Marine that fell,Tommy was
by his side"
"Draggin' him to safety,screaming
"Don't you die"
"He took a bullet in the shoulder,
but he kept right on fightin'"
"Runnin' back to help another fallen
Marine"
"He used his body as a shield,to pull
him to safety"
"It was the bravest thing I had ever seen"
"I want you to know that Tommy saved
two lives"
"Don't want you thinkin' that he died
in vain"
"And tho were sending him home, a
a decorated hero"
"Our hearts go out to you,for your loss
and your pain"
So say a prayer tonight for the fallen
For each and every one
Our Proud American Sons
Then say a prayer for those still
over there
Volunteers each and every one
Our Proud American Sons
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Posted: Mar 2011
About this poem:
I would hope that people would put politics aside and pray for the safety and the safe return of all the military personal,from every country who has commited troops to the various conflicts around the globe.Our American military personal are all volunteers.I don't know of anyone who is "for" war,but the men and woman who serve do so willingly and are following orders.God Bless them ALL.
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