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Welcome Sun

The sun is lifting
Heavy burdens off my mind
My thoughts are drifting
Back a moment in time
Where sands are sifting
Back and forth with the tide
I am still searching
Where clues of life abides
My heart is open
Maybe for the first time
And all that I’m hoping
Watching my shadow mime
Dreams that are coming
Trying and keeping up
Letting things go
So the weight will fade away
Drift with the wind so
Off my shoulders behind me
Then I will know
How wonderful is life
The flowering blossoms
Opens up like a prize
Something so awesome
Right before my eyes
And my mood softens
Glancing into blue skies
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Posted: Mar 2019
About this poem:
After days and days of clouds and snow and rain, the sun comes out.
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Unknown

Just a bit of silliness, really

It's beginning to look a lot like EMO, everywhere you go
Tis the season for crying
the season for lying
on yer bed, alone

It's beginning to look a lot like EMO, everywhere you go
suicide's not an option
just wait, yer adoption
to a tribe's, in tow

© October 15, 2018, L. Karriem
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Posted: Oct 2018
About this poem:
I was feeling suicidal a few hours ago, and these lyrics just popped in my head.

It made me smile, so I jotted them down
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sabeel

hope about future..

We think, we are very famous here,
In our family and friends,
And we making a wall between everything,
And fails to understand that,
We are strangers here,
May some one can realize us
But more of them not.
We are very proud about relationships but,
that we have done
We couldn’t get it, perfectly.
if we show our heart, they doubt it
We used to say, we are fine and o.k.
but forget what really happened,
We have a role in a drama,
and waiting a good future everytime...
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Posted: Jul 2009
About this poem:
human life in this earth is not predictable.
happening strange things evry day..
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sabeel

one who loved me so much

I remember one who loved me so much
She was so caring and loving
I loved her chattering habit
And she was very warm when I need,
We spent more moments each other
Those never forget
She loved to travel to a snowy area
And prepared to go there,
And some incidents came in her family
That we cannot solve properly
And I knew she have to leave me
Or she will loose her family
I never forced her to leave family for me
B’caz I loved her so much
I liked her to live as a queen,
If she came with me,
She has to suffer more things those
She never experienced yet.
I don’t wants to make her sad and hurt in any way
So, that’s why I am alone here
With warm memories of my love,
Who, I never seen a girl like her...
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Posted: Jul 2009
About this poem:
with my girl friends memories...
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Unknown

Waves of Fear

In the hour of my darkest need,
I can call your name.
And you`d appear on a fiery steed,
To steal away my pain.
But now you`re not here,
And you can`t be found.
Under waves of fear,
I`ll surely drown.

Throw me a line,
Pull me out my love.
I`m reaching for heaven,
Not the air above.
Your touch is my savior.
For your love I long.
Your innocence to savor.
Your will so strong.
Throw me a line,
Pull me out my love.
I`m reaching salvation,
In the waves below.

There`s no concious need for reason,
In the paths you choose.
Fly away on wings of the season,
My piece of mind is yours.
So can you hear it now,
The crashing of the waves?
On the restless bow,
Of my ship, the sea craves.

Throw me a line,
Pull me out my love.
I`m reaching for heaven,
Not the air above.
Your touch is my savior.
For your love I long.
Your innocence to savor.
Your will so strong.
Throw me a line,
Pull me out my love.
I`m reaching salvation,
In the waves below.

In the hour of my darkest want,
I can feel your love.
Behind your freshest front,
From the depths below.
So now I need you most,
Tell me where are you?
I`ve searched from coast to coast,
Beyond the oceans blue.

Throw me a line,
Pull me out my love.
I`m reaching for heaven,
Not the air above.
Your touch is my savior.
For your love I long.
Your innocence to savor.
Your will so strong.
Throw me a line,
Pull me out my love.
I`m reaching salvation,
In the waves below.
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Posted: Jun 2009
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sabeel

FOR OUR POET FRIEND-PINKPOETRESS

The way to this site, we found just a while
Not planned before and hoped to get
We met here, and wrote something special
Someone is great, but others not much
And we never hesitated to greet them like others,
And we know our PINKy got something bad
It is usual in human life
We sure she is a great poet and with kind hearted
She will write more and more
About life, nature and true love
Many times she gave us tears and smile
We never forget her kind comments and care
We know if we seen a photo of her in the raw
There should be a best poem
We all wish our PINKy to get well soon
And to come back soon
And she will give us a peerless smile
We have ever seen before...
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Posted: Feb 2010
About this poem:
Its for our friend pinkpoetress
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Unknown

My Sweet Little Baby

Verse I

My life was a shambles, but I didn't know.
Thought love was a myth but, it just goes to show.
I thought I'd found love but, it all crumbled down.
I gave up on looking, and then I was found.


Chorus

My sweet little baby,
I love you so much.
I long for the day when,
I feel your sweet touch.
My sweet little baby,
I love you so much.


Verse II

You are my life now, I can't think beyond..
Without you my darling, I could not go on.
I never believed that, I could be this way.
I just know I love you, more every day.


Verse III

It's simply amazing, how close we've become.
Though we are afar dear, yet still we are one.
Though waiting is torture, it's well worth the pain.
We'll soon be together, and so will remain.
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Posted: Apr 2010
About this poem:
How I feel
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mcradloff

Rudolph the Regular-nosed Reindeer

You know Dasher and Dancer
And Prancer and Vixen
Comet and Cupid
And Donner and Blitzen
But do you recall
Another reindeer
Rudolph the reindeer!
Had a nose!
And if you ever saw it
You would say nothing!
All of the other reindeer
Used to accept Rudolph completely!
They never let Rudolph
Lift anything on his own!
Then one foggy Christmas eve
Santa came to say
Rudolph you can't help!
Christmas is ruined!
Then how the other reindeer
Had unfair unexplained expectations of Rudolph!
And they cried!
Rudolph the reindeer!
You're the same as any other reindeer!
(Rudolph) I don't know why, but I'm sorry!
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Posted: Dec 2013
About this poem:
This is a parody of Rudolph the Red-nosed Reindeer by Elephant Larry. This is my favorite new Christmas parody song. It is from a show I used to listen to back in the 80's, the Dr. Demento Show.
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agoodguy2have

them lines

steel-blued rails
or tarred lane miles
cables or fables
we're layin' the lines

vapored sky lines
Internet bylines
those bar scene
come on lines

we're all layin' lines
making trails
refinin' our designs
plantin' our mines

layin' down our lines
innocence seen benign
overhead or underground
pushing straight to realign

down the lines
some lines are down
sparks on the ground
hot wired intertwines

line ahead a minus sign
heard before that ol' line
just useless goin' on
tossin' towel in to resign

bifurcate to recombine
futures seen to redefine
no talkin' on a party line
lines are down on cloud nine

© agoodguy2have 2011-06-15
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Posted: Jun 2011
About this poem:
dem lines, dem lines...
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fjamesj9701

Separate

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Im not sure that I have been myself
Oh well now what do I do?
When I look in the mirror and I see my face
I see you were never there for me
23 years have passed, but now that time has gone
You were who I believed in
Now look what youve done to me
Realize what youve done to US!

Well now that I think about it
It has always been you, about you
Now its just F*#k you!
Exit my mind as I feel my life come shivering
all through out my body.
My walls have been crumbling, tearing out everything
Its my fault I made this
Now I can destroy this
I can kill you!
The bull sh%#@ter, the lower denominator
Thorn in my spine, I uplift my eyes
As I stumble upon this new life Im finding
Your walls have been crumbling,I'm tearing down everything
Your broken machine helped destroyed this
Now I must rebuild it
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Posted: Aug 2011
About this poem:
Something from a more adolescent time Im 34 now.losing a daughter lead to drinking, drugging ,and anger that lead to growing up.I wrote this not sure if Id post it, but why not? May not be Hotel California but these were my own demons and devices I had to overcome.
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