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New start

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The weight that once held me down,
Now lifted, I'm no longer bound,
The pain that once consumed my heart,
Has faded, and I have a new start.

The memories that once brought me pain,
Are now just echoes in my brain,
The love that once seemed so ideal,
Is now a distant memory that's real.

The heartache that I thought would last,
Has vanished, and I'm free at last,
The tears that once fell from my eyes,
Are gone, and I'm no longer living lies.

Heartache is gone, and I'm moving on,
With a heart that's mended and strong,
The future that once seemed so bleak,
Is now full of promise, and I'll seek.

The love that I thought was lost,
Is now within my reach at any cost,
Heartache is gone, and I'll embrace,
A new love that I'll never replace.
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Posted: Feb 2023
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mcradloff

Birdie

I got a treat of free golf with a golf cart yesterday
It was at a golf course I used to be a member at in 1994 around May
It was hole number 16 that sits about 150 yards from my parking spot
I connected with a six iron and the ball flew up and hot
Sticking on the green about three feet away
Telling myself to sink the putt there would be nothing my head would say
Clear your mind of all the junk
And into the hole the ball went with a plunk
I had golfed this hole about 100 times before
But since it is rare for me to edit my thoughts, the good shots went out the door
So like in life if you can clear your mind of the bad
You can do things that will make you glad
I'm still working on this as I am 52
So I can enjoy my life till it is through
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Posted: Sep 2021
About this poem:
One of my favorite golf shots happened long ago with my brother. It was a par 3, first shot off tee went into a bunker, second shot stayed in the bunker, third shot rolled onto the green and into the hole, a par.
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pjatheart

Why Ask Why.

Why has our love left us so soon
Not unlike a driving summer rain
Having once been perfectly in tune
We are now learning to refrain
Why has our love left us so soon
Recently I run into old friend
Full of unsolisited advice
Lately it's been somewhat of a trend
Then suddenly I came to realize
Why has our love left us so soon
Free again to choose and to belong
Thinking it is best if we forget
Only now and then they'll play our song
Causing fleeting moment of regret
Why has our love left us so soon
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Posted: Apr 2015
About this poem:
A short blues. Almost done with music part.
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pjatheart

The Perfect Pick

Would you like to hear a song
I just finished it today
It is such a lovely song
Grab a chair while I play

It's been hidden for a while
Waiting shrouded in a haze
It may even help you smile
When entangled in a maze

It won't hit you like a gong
In a land of broken deals
Where they sell you for a song
In the name of empty thrills

It won't send you running wild
Trying each and every way
It will soothe your inner child
And is mild for every day

Would you like to hear my song
It will help you win the race
It will keep you going strong
'Til you reach a better place

Would you like to hear this song.
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Posted: Apr 2015
About this poem:
First published some years ago on a major poetry site,
this little piece made their representative book/cd set
for that year. A slow,bluesy tune goes with it
when it's performed.
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Korey2hall

Island of misfit boys

I love to sleep because i pretend that i'm dead, but i hate waking up, 'cause it's hard to forget that i've lost all control of this life that i've held so dear. I wait for the bus but i'm not on the bench. I'm just spread across the ground making friends with cement. hoping that the bus won't miss me when it comes my way.
Well i made a few jokes and they said they weren't funny. i tried to force a smile but they said it was ugly. i tried to make a friend but no one was a friend to me. Poured my heart to a girl and it went on the floor, and i asked her what she wanted, and she said she wanted more. i tried to find a lover, all i found was an enemy.

Well i stand in front of the mirror and look at myself and i don't make a sound but my eyes scream out help. and i start to struggle to hold myself back from thrusting my heart straight through the f*cking glass. and im tired of falling for girls that don't care, and breaking my back just to make them aware that i'm more than depressed, and their time won't be wasted, But i am just a broken boy that no one wants to play with.

Now i'm lost in this hole and i'm sure i am stuck, and i cant run away 'cause i'm lazy as f*ck. And i sit on the floor as i gather my thoughts, and their full of broken promises that only piss me off. Well i lost control when i was only a boy. The world taught me angst when i deserved joy. Now im breaking down as i struggle to breathe, 'cause i believe in a God that won't believe in me.
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Posted: Nov 2014
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sexxmagick74

"ARISTARCHUS EUDOXUS~THE INFERNAL MIRACLE"6/18/09

WALK UPON THE PATHWAY TO EVIL.
BENEATH THE VEIL OF DARKNESS.
CRUCIFIED ON AN INVERTED CROSS.
INTO A VOID OF BLACKNESS...
ON THE WINGS OF A DEMON.
TRUE SPIRITS ARE DEEP IN AGONY.
SO, MAKE WAY FOR DAMNATION.
DEFINED BY DARK REALITIES...

ARISTATCHUS EUDOXUS...
IS DESIGNED FOR THE END...
THIS INFERNAL MIRACLE...
IS OF THE SWEET CHAOS IT REPRESENTS...

HEAR THOSE DEEP, DARK WHISPERS OF HADES.
THEIR LEGIONS OF MINIONS ASCEND.
"COME TO US, OUR CHOSEN PREY."
"COME TO US, THE DARKNESS DEMANDS..."
WHERE THE BLOODBIRTHED DEMONS ARE SPAWNED.
THRILLS AND CHILLS OF HORROR.
DYING SOULS OF THE UNDERWORLD.
SPILL BLOOD UNDER GORE DRENCHED TERROR...

ARISTARCHUS EUDOXUS...
IS DESIGNED FOR THE END...
THIS INFERNAL MIRACLE...
IS OF THE SWEET CHAOS IT REPRESENTS...

CAN YOU NOT FEEL THEM HIDING IN THE SHADOWS?...
CAN YOU NOT FEEL THEIR UNHOLY EYES WATCHING YOU?...

THOSE CREATURES FROM BEYOND IMAGINATION...
SECRET AND FOREVER BLACK ...
IN THE SHADOWY CONCEPTIONS OF A NEW WORLD ..
THE EVIL WITHIN WILL FOREVER LAST...

WE ALL MUST EMBRACE THE DARKNESS ALONE.
GAZING THROUGH THE WINDOW OF MANY COLOURS .
CASTING DEMONS THROUGH THE BURNING DEPTHS OF EVIL.
MINIONS OF LUCIFER DEVOURS...
THE DOMINION HAS RISEN, THOSE FORMLESS SHAPES.
THE EVIL WILL NOW POSSESS THE FLESH.
THE FLAMES OF HELL WILL BE FACED.
EMBRACING THE DARKNESS OF IT'S DEPTHS ...

ARISARCHUS EUDOXUS...
IS DESIGNED FOR THE END...
THIS INFERNAL MIRACLE...
IS OF THE SWEET CHAOS IT REPRESENTS...
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Posted: Oct 2014
About this poem:
This is the title track of its own album i wrote while i was in prison. "Leavenworth Kansas"
"ARISTARCHUS EUDOXUS~THE INFERNAL MIRACLE"
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Gligeen

ELSEW-here.

Lose your footing.
Reach out to find 'there's nothing to stop you from falling.
The ground just gives way, though you are sitting still.

Emotions shift like time-lapsed seasons caught in a seamless loop, but are forms of winter collapsing inwards - though you are sitting still.

You're in two places at once, though you are sitting still.
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Posted: Feb 2019
About this poem:
It is about having OCD. Always being split between it, and the rest of reality.
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Gligeen

Freeze frame.

It's morning and the street lights are still on.
The road is resting it's back while the cars sleep in their driveways.

Foot-free footpaths mirror the road.
Unlike them, I'm wide awake - but I share in their peace.
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Posted: May 2019
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madtat29

Elephant {never forgets}

I remember,
In my dreams,
I remember,
Everything,
I remember,
I can't forget,
I remember,
Happiness,
Yes I remember the time,
When we fell in love,
And I remember a time,
You couldn't get enough,
I remember your face,
The way you laughed,
I remember sometimes,
The times we had,
Babe, I remember...,
But, I remember,
I can't forget,
I remember,
Emptiness,
I remember the day,
The day you left,
I remember the words,
The words you said,
I remember the tears,
The tears I cried,
I remember the day,
The day I died...,
I remember that time...,
I remember,
In my dreams,
Over and over,
I see every scene,
Yes, I remember,
Everything...
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Posted: Jun 2019
About this poem:
Song...
Sometimes... longing for a love that was,
You forget all the bad and only remember the good...
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madtat29

We're In Trouble...

We're all in Trouble,
All in Trouble,
When The Lord Returns We're All In Trouble,
We follow devils,
And worship Idols,
My library alone has 13 Bibles!,
13 Bibles...!,
13 Bibles...!,
My library at home holds 13 Bibles!,
Confusing virgins, {versions},
Men put their words in,
Ask Jesus Christ why's human life so worthless,
I search for purpose,
But follow devils,
That worship Idols,
My library at home holds 13 Bibles!,
It's scurry hurry,
This funny running,
And nobody can get enough of money,
It's disgusting,
How we follow devils,
And worship Idols,
My Library at home holds 13 Bibles!,
13 Bibles,
12 disciples,
What cursed Lord would fill his words with Riddles?,
The truth is simple,
We follow devils,
That worship Idols,
My library alone has 13 Bibles!,
From everything I read we're all in trouble,
Its easy to see,
We're all in trouble,
Yeah...,It's plain to me,
We're all in trouble,
Ye..., Apparently we're all in trouble,
Whatever you believe we're all in trouble,
Alien or not,
Maybe pagan ancient gods,
No matter what they want,
We're all in trouble...,
All in Trouble...,
If Anyone Returns...,
We're all in Trouble...,
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Posted: Jun 2019
About this poem:
Song...
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