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Mizzy4

Moonbeams. (Sonnet) Paloma Challenge.

If we were stars in cosmogyral space,
Lost apart in nacreous endless blue,
To seek, I would like gossamer embrace,
Upon a moonbeam, destination....you.

In reminiscence of your twinkling light,
I'd fall for your aeolian warm rays,
Our fusion to ignite the lonesome night,
As showers of stardust calm our fiery blaze.

Together we could disappear through time,
To float in ataraxial deep love,
Like poets entwined in pure celestial rhyme,
In Heavens reverence 'mid stars above.

Drifting through soft moonlight psiturism,
Forever lost in dazzling starry prism.
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Posted: Sep 2014
About this poem:
A Cosmic challenge Paloma.
Hope you like it !
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weemick1960

Eternal Breath.

Thy eternal breath

Sweet Rose of youth
Cut off in thy fullest bloom
Thy blood tears flowing with mine own
Alas two hearts cry a river in anguish
Art this now the end?
No my precious Love
This be but a new spring for us
Before the ending an earthly Rose doth wilt
Yet thy spirit doth grow in its magnitude
Thy Love be eternal in its divinity
Come unto me and breathe into me
Thy most precious eternal breath
Thy Rose then eternal shall be
Forever shalt thou bloom in Heavens majesty
God's brightest star and most beautiful Angel
Still thou shalt always be with thy Love
Your earthly life now dwells within my heart and Soul
Thou shalt come and claim thy eternal breath
Night or day it awaits thy glory my eternal Rose
That thou shalt walk again with thy Love
Never to part the true Lovers
Hold my hand forever in Love's midnight dream
When thou dost wish to be with me in this reality
Take back thy eternal breath
Remember to return it before thou doth leave me
Thou art my sun that rises in the morning
Thou art the moon that lights up my night
Forever beats the heart of Love eternal
Eternal be the Love that comes from thee
Let never this beloved of hearts
Be but a desolate wasteland
This heart forever shines with glory
A garden of beauty supreme
For thy Rose doth shine in wonder at its heart
There was but one moment for the agony of parting
Now eternal joy does fill my core
Thou art with me in thy divine glory
Thou didst give me thine own eternal breath
My Soul thy Soul one Soul
My heart thy heart one heart
The river of Love ever dost run
The timeless sea awaits and Love eternal
Never are we parted my most precious Love
All this for I hold thy eternal breath

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Posted: Aug 2014
About this poem:
This poem was written 38 years ago after my Love had died In the States. I would have taken her eternal breath Into me and she would have dwelt within me always. This was not to be. Maybe It Is the curse of one such as myself to walk his many lifetimes alone. Not likely, this Is me we're talking about. As you see, always have to lighten the mood when thinking of this lady. My thinking here, If I go back to an older corner, where I belong, why not make my first write an old write that means much to me. The poem tells the way It should have been.
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Poetnumber1

The Time Say Goodbye Is Hardest

The idea of forever is kind of ridiculous, which is unfortunate because it's kind of a nice thing to say, you know. I think it softens the blow of mortality and having to say goodbye to everything you know and everyone you love and all that kind of thing. Quote - Conor Oberst



The time to say goodbye is hardest
When countless strength expires
And hours fades into nothingness
You're left in a womb of pain
At the realm of hope's decrease.
The shadows loom above the ceiling
The sun wafts in its last light
The hands of death parades the room
From the vacant isles pulsed with silence
The sirens echoes from the distant
The death bells like a heron sounds
This unimaginable pain leaves me breathless
The windows quivers, iced up with dew
Slow - breath replays , in constant days of dread
I've longed for peace in the darkness
Thro' pain's increase, memories recite
The dead yesterdays of joys sweet.

The time to say goodbye is hardest
I long to smell the ever green grass again
And to hear the language of the seas
Once more in the mezmerizing moment, of the
Ever changeless sun on the realm of heaven
To breathe the free mist of the mystic flowers
To run with the winds, and to feel its warm pulse
In all the earth aglowed with spring
This feeling overwhelms me
To hear my father's voice again, across
The deep quietude of the ever dreamy river.

The time to say goodbye is hardest
The battling days are long
The nights grow cold and weary
Nothing matters but this one necessity
To breathe free again
Oh to breathe free again
The sweet air undisturbed
To be liberated from this long drawn pain
This flourishing sickness unabated
That has graced me for so long.

The time to say goodbye is hardest
The colour of the room is soft
Soft as the song bird's sweet cheer
Perhaps my thoughts draws me back
To the voice of violins and entralling
Blisses 'neath moon's silk hush to breath's delight
To think that I'd favor here than home
Death than the splendor of life
Is but a sordid insanity.
A freshly home cooked meal
Times spent with friends and family
The joyful laughters
The hugs , the endless kisses
Its sobriety enskies
this languid heart of mines.

The time to say goodbye is hardest
My eyes are wet with fresh remorse
The drips are coursing thro' my veins
The injection leaves me weary
I'm a soldier in this war
How often have I died
How often have I clung
To a strand of breath and hope
But as I look back
On the splendor of all my life
My heart would spring
A ceaseless smile
Thro' the valleys of my pain
Whilst my fervent prayers ascend
To a distant sky, relinquished
Of its glow, then so suddenly
I'm at peace in life's carousel.

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Posted: Feb 2015
About this poem:
A near death experience hospitalised has inspired this poem. A pretty tough way to start the year uh. Ive met up with some incredible persons in there who was kind enough to share their experiences with me. One of them unfortunately passed away. The point is when you think that your problems in life is terrible theres always someone out there to top yours. So cherish and appreciate your blessings as small as they may be and live life to the full because one day you may never get that second chance.
Thanks for perusing my poem.
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godsprincessonline today!

More than the Stars

Bigger than all the stars in the sky
More than sand grains on the shore
The mystery has always been why
Love is always and forever more

Dreaming of a love this great
A love that is faithful, true and real
Not just pretend and harshly fake
But a real love that one can feel

A love that's felt in your heart
Not just physical games and fun
But a real love from the start
So that you know it’s the one

It spans all time as though standing still
Feelings never grow old and die
Real and forever it cannot be killed
It lives on forever and never says goodbye


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Posted: Jun 2016
About this poem:
A poem about real love
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boyshchrm6

To Forgive

To forgive is sublime.
Bordering on devine.
Make the climb.
Perhaps it's time!
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Posted: Oct 2009
About this poem:
Forgiveness
Inspired by jazzy
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thesunandthesea

^_^ I-LOVE-YOU-ALL ^_^

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I wish I could write a sonnet tonight.
I wish I could make it sweet for you.
I wish I could make it rhyme and right.
I wish I could though I don’t know how to.
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I know I can never write a sonnet.
I know a sonnet is so hard for me.
I know that I am not a good poet.
I know I’m only ‘the sun and the sea’
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So, how could I let you know that I care?
How could I show you what I feel inside?
I'd love to take away all your nightmare.
I’d love to shed every tear when you cried.
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I wish the angels could give me more time,
So that, I’d say “I LOVE YOU ALL” in rhyme.

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Posted: Apr 2011
About this poem:
I would like to say, I LOVE YOU ALL, really!!! I don't know why I really do. Most of ppl here love me like I am one of your family. I really am happy. hug I wish I had more time tonight so that I could write a better poem. blushing

Now I can only write this one for tonight. Have a Good Night ALL))) i LOVE yoU)))) i DO!
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boyshchrm6

Sweet gentle beauty

Sweet gentle beauty
What pain behind those eyes
You treat your sorrow as a duty
With a forced smile that never lies
Why does God test us so
Why is faith often betrayed
We walk the road given though
Hurting as we feel so frayed
Walking numb at times hoping
The constant tears can be delayed
Ever worrying and deteriorating
Trying to foretell the cards played
Even if the burden is unimagineable
We go on for other's sake
Keeping our composure tangible
Hoping life will give us a break
Oh sweet gentle beauty
My arms surround and caress you
Enabling you to finally see
The pleasure you once knew
And was always meant to be
Not Plagued by all this sorrow
That refuses to set you free
I prey there is a God tomorrow
I prey there is divine sympathy
To ease your pain and wounds
Give you the life that never seems to be
And can never come to soon
Oh sweet gentle beauty
You deserve your turn at happiness
Sorrow is not your natural state
You are not deserving of this stress
You were meant to shine and enjoy
This is not destined to be your fate
Please then let us attempt to destroy
The pain that keeps you caged of late
And restrains your natural joy
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Posted: Apr 2011
About this poem:
For someone who has had
more than their share of
adversity.
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jazzy75

meet us in poets corner

hurry. . .not to dither
perhaps you’ll discover
laughter, another
warm heart or shoulder
perhaps far greater
deep under water
reflected back
a figure
intrinsic
in nature
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Posted: Oct 2009
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QuietStormF

There's No Always In Forever..

Not even going to say that I'm not sad
The time we spent together was the best I ever had.
I still feel your kisses ,I still feel your touch..
Yeh im gonna miss you, gonna miss you oh so much
Not even going to say, that i wont cry..
If i said I didn't still want you, well it'd be a lie,
But life goes on.. and baby so must we.
Guess that some things ,well they just arent meant to be.
Because there's no always in forever
And theres no solace in goodbye,
You cant stop the rain from falling down...
Even the roses have to die
And there's no happily ever after,
Not for most of us anyway..
And wishing upon the first star you see at night,
Is just not going to make them stay
So just go on,and move forward..
Try and move on..
And be thankful for the time that you had
Even though it's gone..
And though it seems that your whole world is falling apart...
Some day you'll look back on it without a broken heart..
Because there's no always in Forever..
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Posted: Jul 2009
About this poem:
I originally wrote this as a song, but alas I can't write music.. so although I have it in my head.. lol..
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trurorob

For we are Legion

We march, for we are many legion
We care not for the pains of death or season
Our intent has but one single solitary mission
To bend you all to our inevitable submission

Do not dare to fight, or stand in our relentless path
We put out the coals in your life’s pathetic hearth
We are fearless, our quest never undiminished
For what we start we will surely always finish

We have no single mind for we are a collective
We have no friends we remain non selective
Our only aim is to secure our future young
We saviour your retreat once we have begun

We are not cruel we treat all the same
Death to everything that it is our only aim
Can you not hear us, feel our numbing sting
To us your cries of demise are a hollow ring

Do not dare resist in any way, to live, take flight
For you are mere fodder, we protect our right
We do not hear your deathly screams or rants
For we are legion, for we are soldier ants
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Posted: Mar 2010
About this poem:
Just a realistic viewpoint!!
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