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darkhorse555

Snow White

Oh darling
you have become an angel
floating into dreams
so beautiful they sing

Pure petal wings flutter
dressed in the color of snow
They dance inside warm love melts
shining a faraway star
winking in the night sky

Whom embraces the outer body sweetly
I open four chambers to you
holding all keys out
My queen warmly holds the soul

One kiss from you
smitten I would say smiling
I will always smile in loves grace
Wishing that I was holding you right now

Wow what a dream baby
out off this world
you're so beautiful in these eyes
dazzling mirror reflections blinding
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Posted: Dec 2014
About this poem:
mirror mirror
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candykid

The Birth of Our Savior

It's quite interesting how we mortals are limited by time...
Blind with false notions, blind in our minds...
I can clearly recall that day in the spirit world...
The kindness of Angels....the kind that shines fine...

Armies of Angels with soft-spoken words...
Flying with golden silk feathers like birds...
Ready to witness the most important event in all of eternity...
The birth of Our Savior, my eyes were then blurred...

I knelt before Angels....I listened and heard...
I felt I should speak, but there were no words...
It was in Your infinite wisdom to not let me see...
The birth of Our Savior....Ruler of worlds...

You did not withhold all from me however...
Through feathers of Angels, I probably never...
Have seen such cries from such heavenly skies...
As liquid stars dripped from Your heavenly eyes...

For You knew the importance of what had just taken place...
And had orchestrated this concert through time and through space...
It indeed was for me and all of the inhabitants of the earth...
The birth of Our Savior...Oh Sweet Child's Birth......
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Posted: Dec 2014
About this poem:
I truly wish each and every one of you blessings this holiday season.
Please forgive the modern spelling of 'Savior' over the probably much preferred traditional spelling 'Saviour'....
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Abby1963

Wild flowers

What a beautiful spring day,
I just had to go out and play I stumbled upon a field of wild flowers.
Flowers bring much delight to me.No two flowers are alike
So many scents coming my way, they tickle and make my nose twitch all day
What a beautiful day I could stand in this field forever and a day
Their colors so brite I wonder if you can see them at night ?
The different shades of pink,purple and blue make me feel new
By the end of the day I wound up with a beautiful bouquet !
Those beautiful flowers made my day!
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Posted: Feb 2015
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Mizzy4

< Raw Meet >

The scent of her warm flesh teased my nose,
Her exotic beauty made my heart swell,
She stood before me in elegant pose,
Irresistible her pungent smell.
 
The taste of ruby wine off her tongue,
Her lipstick how it smeared my face,
Oh! We were wild, so sexy and young,
Our touching now at frantic pace.
 
The candlelight flickered on her long raven mane,
Her hypnotic shadow danced on the wall,
She teased and taunted me insane,
Her frenzied dancing - did stall.
 
Her parted lips begged with pleading moan!
Her hunger growing at desperate speed,
The throb in my loins caused me to groan,
Eager to please her yearning need.
 
Bodies meet, begging for release,
Eager for sweet consummation,
In times oldest dance, whose joys never cease,
Came endless euphoric elation.

Then together we lay there gasping for air,
Our Love bed in a tangled heap,
Inseparable now soft kisses we share,
As we drift off to blissful sleep.
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Posted: Aug 2014
About this poem:
This poem was conjointly written
by Lady Odette and myself.
May I say it was just pure Heaven
to work with such an eminent
Poeress and such a sexy Lady also.
It is my wish that Christina receives
all the plaudits for this one.

Thanks again dear, being your
Poet friend has enriched my life !

Kindest regards Mick. xxx
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Girlygirl196349

I Love You

To the man that I love
Together we fit like a glove
It's so nice to be in love
You flood me with so much love
I thank God from up above
For sending you
The man that I love
You have the most beautiful
Soulful brown eyes
They Tell me no lies
Your lips ever so soft
If I had it my way
I would kiss them all day
The dimple on your chin
Sets my head a spin
Your height just right
Your arms so long and strong
In between them is where I belong
Tonight will be making love the whole night through
I can't wait to be with you
Sending all my love
To the man that I love!
XX
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Posted: Sep 2014
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Mizzy4

Infidelity.

In the cold light of day, love's price I must pay,
As she bows to her handsome new master,
Now his easy lay, our future betray,
While it lies in ruin and disaster.

Her untrusting word, like the edge of a sword,
From my heart draws a trickle of blood,
My speech became slurred, my vision all blurred,
As I fall to my knees in the mud.

'Mid the lines of this verse, an invisible hearse,
To bury the remains of my sorrow,
In sad tears immersed, harm can't be reversed,
To pay for her sins, I now borrow.

My memory long dead, banished from her head,
As she stares at the ceiling above 'er,
Thoughts of pleasure instead, as bare she lies spread,
'Neath the gyrating hips of her lover.

But someday yet, there'll be haunting regret,
As their sins they'll be forced to expel,
With red-hot sweat, to repay Satan's debt,
For eternity in the furnace of Hell !
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Posted: Jul 2014
About this poem:
Thankfully I have no personal experience
of this subject.....my ex wife and I were loyal
for 26 years. I'm just trying to imagine the
emotions involved.
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Girlygirl196349

I STAYED FOR YOU

I want you both to know
I'd hit an all time low
I felt like it was time for me to go
I didnt want to go on with the show

I stayed for you
Because I love you
I never wanted to hurt you
I live for the two of you

Trying to keep us together
Never did I think it would be so tough
Things got a bit rough
Everyone was in a huff
We had all had enough

Tears rained down my face
Then I saw the tears rolling down your face
I wished I could have taken his place
I'm sorry he left in such a haste

I wanted to be all you need
Today I see it just can't be
I'm on bended knee
Pleading please don't go

You cried for you Dad
And your sisters feeling blue
I don't know what to do
I just can't fill Daddy's shoes

I watch my baby being emotionally abused
I beg her leave him
Come
Move in With me
He's of No use
She yells
Mom
I don't know what to do
You see I learned this from you
My son says
Yes this he agrees
Now I'm really feeling blue
I stayed with Daddy
For the two of you
I knew he and I were through
I thought it better to pretend
Then to let it all end

You see mommy stayed
For the two of you
Because I love you
It came back to bite me
Now I'm thinking my kids
Don't like me
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Posted: Aug 2014
About this poem:
You can love someone and not like them I know my kids love me . I wonder do they Iike me .
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darkhorse555

walk of love

sounds of
one lamb bleating
then the mothers calls
carried upon
a swirling breeze
lifting a spirit
such peace
playing in
nature's song

pure as
the driven snow
sweet the birds singing
enchanting heavenly bliss
with angel feelings
butterflies dancing
on currents
upon swirling
warm winds
rising then falling

standing alone
dog at my side
staring across
windswept mountains
such a beautiful vision
blooms an oasis
fills up in thoughts
patting him
on the head

i kneel down
warmly picking
a handful
of daisies
smiling golden treasures
making a ring
inside magically
this mind

love is
all around us
breathing whispers
silently upon
the heart
one worshiping soul
of regal beauty
crowning emotions

jewels when
i look into
your eyes
to see
the deep ocean
our dreams
erasing one
thousand nightmares
finding you
my best mate

to eternity
we will walk
together hand
in hand
through the gates
heaven a lifetime
with a dream
on a mixed cauldron
of vast pleasure
magic spells
out you
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2014
About this poem:
alone with the sounds
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fjamesj9701

Cemetery Dreams

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Would you show me how you sleep so sweetly
Or could you teach me how not to dream
Mine have been deliberately consuming
Considerately they've been killing me
With reoccurring nightmares
Of creaking cemetery gates
The silent screams among the undead
As they lay me down within my grave
My heart beats restlessly inside of panic
Anticipating this hell I've never met
But it promised me that it missed me
Through all the nights I never slept
Its fingers grip tightly around my throat
The other hand covers my eyes
It hated that I believed in God
And all of His softly unspoken lies
Then I awake within a deeper panic
I still feel the impressions of its hands
Lord how many nights must I be pulled under
Before your heavens will take me back

~JJF ~
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Posted: May 2014
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Mizzy4

Lines From A Lonely Place.

Hark ! In the distance, a begrudging sneer,
A prying eye spies my falling tear,
Crashing on the page, this verse to smear,
If only they knew my plight !

In this wretched space so lost and alone,
Soft heart transformend to hardened stone,
A seeping wound much deeper than bone,
Draining my will to fight !

My head bent low with dolor profound,
Scolding tears to stain the ground,
Nature my second love, gathers around,
I could kiss a tree this night !

For now, love's future destitute,
Sympathetic gestures I will refute,
Thoughts of her, this pain dilute,
Pitch darkness with a sprinkle of bright !

Just take me away to a tearful place,
'Neath a willow to share her weeping space,
Whose drooping limbs will me encase,
And hide my grief from sight !

A loveless mess, I fall distraught,
No lesson learned, yet harshly taught,
For her I'd once again get caught,
I hold not grudge nor spite !

I know I'll quell this relentless pain,
Self pity to hold no earthly gain,
My self belief I pray regain,
God please ! Send me some respite !
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2014
About this poem:
I don't enjoy posting sad verse........
There is some good news, this is old,
and I'm sorted now.
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