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darkhorse555

lost love

come all you knights and maidens
a gathering for you in the jungles of life
travelling to the centre of our world
to you all i hail
take me to this other land
showing me magic spells
like the warlock of old
you give me portions of love
in the land of milk and honey
dreams become reality
with all the emotions
a man or a woman possess
vanishing in the bermuda triangle
the triangle of emotions
like mosses the sea parts
paradise lost hidden in the storm
tossing me every which way
spiralling around in circles
in whirpool of air my breath laboured
crushing like the great boa
to breathe no more
pain and suffering pass us by
all of a sudden i am there
a mystical land beautiful flowers everwhere
smells of paradise
flowers of many colours everywhere
a wonder to the beholder
beauty as far as the eyes can see
bards with magical words
turns a desert to paradise
the land of giants
amongst giants who raise me up
with magic words you walk on water
waterfalls fountains of forever young
the departed never age
youth forever love
standing tall i am in paradise
in my hand a quill
we stand giants blown away each breath
we speak of dreams of love
happiness in a fairytale ending
stories of pain and suffering
of good fortune and woe
dreamers a circle of poets
with a pen they take you to the door
come dine with me at this table
we are knights and maidens
lost in this magical realm
created from love
emotions from our hearts
hate the burning emotion of love
in the sunset of our mind paradise
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Posted: May 2013
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darkhorse555

black rose

To you black rose
Look deep into the centre
The very inner depth
colourless beauty

From a pack of lies
Left with the thorns,
scratching my inner body
In agony
I howl

Killing me slowly
Eating the soul in me
coloured
dark lies
Shades inner beauty

In the depth
my heart cold
From the inner you,
my dungeon hell
No fury

My rose,
for you black
Left on this page
The heart's colour

With a kiss
Goodbye black,
Magic with love
Turns colours
beautiful
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Posted: Jul 2013
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darkhorse555

Happy Birthday Jesus

Oh Lord and mighty Savior
I sing in your name praise be
In honor to you King of Israel
who takes away the sins of this world

Star of all stars Bethlehem
shining salvation loves light
purity in the scriptures fulfilled
proclaiming him blessed Holy One

A messenger singing Heavenly
an angel in praise to king of kings
In peace and good deeds God's only son
Blessed born his Immaculate heart

Conceived of the Holy Spirit Lord
Almighty Holiness in your council
one of understanding happy birthday
Our shepherd born salvation leads his flock

Faraway in the distance
three wise kings following sign
A diamond star they followed
light of truth born shone in a manger

As they entered bowing bearing gifts
Gold worshiping the Almighty king
Myrrh most precious bitter herb of the east
Frankincense to perfume our Holy One

The shepherds came as an angel sang out
Heavenly song in gentle melody
singing born today is our savior child
praise eternities revelations tune

O most Gracious Lord Jesus
I bow humble inside meek
happy birthday oh master
our savior Almighty King
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Posted: Dec 2014
About this poem:
seventh heaven 7
cloud nine 9 in the heavens
perfect ten 10
ending in a heavenly note

syllables 7/7/9/9 repeat
9/9/9/9
9./9/10/10
10/10/10/10
7/7/7/7
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orientalkoru

Farewell and Thank You Dear Poets!

Thank you everyone!
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Posted: Dec 2014
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godsprincessonline today!

TRUE LOVE

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What and where is true love
It comes from God above
No one can exist or live apart
From Him as He is in our heart

Whether we want to admit it or not
Even though we think we have forgot
He never leaves our heart alone
He never leaves as He is our home

If we find someone to share our love
He is right there with you as God Is Love
A union without God and love cannot survive
For without Him love will wither and die

True love is a beautiful thing
Two become one through the exchange of a ring
The symbol of eternal love of two
Joined and with God all their life through
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Posted: May 2015
About this poem:
That is how I feel about a true love
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madtat29

Thinkin and Drinkin

Well I done a bunch of thinkin,
And a whole lotta drinkin,
Tryin to get over you,
Yeah tryin to get over you,
Then I put a thought in my mind,
I should leave it all behind,
I should just say goodbye,
And move on with my life,
Instead I'm sittin here thinkin,
Doin a whole lotta drinkin,
Tryin to get over you,
Yeah tryin to get over you,
One day I hope it's soon,
I'll finally be over you...
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Posted: Apr 2014
About this poem:
We all have our problems and ways of coping...
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darkhorse555

cool babe

chilling to
the air
blood flowing
to the brain
i fly away
to the stars
looking at
a moon
lonely so sadly

each night
i look
at her face
an angel shines
dreaming in
the clouds
floating in
their mist

i loose air
when i breathe
enchanting night sky
chanting seagulls cry
magically across
many oceans
i feel
so much love
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Posted: Mar 2014
About this poem:
smiling in a dream thinking about love
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123whisper

Making temple in Thee

You call to me
Or is it only breeze whispering in my dreams
Wakening sleeping soul with the fair light
You call to me
Travelling across ocean with the Compass
Thy heart rowing in the Sea
Dissolved in my pampered swells vanes
to wan passion for you
Making temple in Thee
Thy sweets joy made our bed with the spreading roses
Waiting for you with candle - light that carries
Heavenly visions of romances
And as the wiled bird spreding wings to fly
I am looking to the sky
Blessing the Universe that drown me in
To love you with all delightful mystery of Thy dreams
And do not ask me
Why I love you
Honour of your sword wears the nameless grace
And Angels bends above you
Who's pure heart love is innocent
Dispite all past life dust and dark
Hail and rain morn of spirit deceive
Shuddering fears
Betrayels
Bleeding
I pray for you and me
Oh dear pity's forget to weep for old griefs
Let the kiss of new love be placed on aching chest
And with childhood's faith raise again with smiles
With joyful tears
Greet Thee with Angels faith
Screem from the top of the hill to mountains
I am alive and can love again - passionatly wild as lion's roar
Laughing higher at a fall
Falling in your arms I dream of every day
With love that stole my heart away
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Posted: May 2014
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fjamesj9701

My Melody

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Her body glistens in the light
I've longed to play with her all night
I pick her up and hold her steady
Take a deep breath, we're both ready
Anticipation grows to show her what I've learned
From deep within my heart my passion burns
I gently grab her neck and pull her near
My right hand on her body the time is here
As I trace her curves with my fingers
The smell of sweat begins to linger
Slowly now I plug it in
A moment of silence as we begin
I hold her steady, we both are ready
I begin to sing she begins breathing heavy
The sounds and feelings grow more immense
The movements become more intense.
She screams and screams from love in motion
When my heart stops as the door swings opens
My mom walks in and with a frown
Says, "Your guitar is too loud, please turn it down"
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Posted: May 2014
About this poem:
The twentieth anniversary of Only one of the coolest bands ever "Weezer". They were a big influence for me then and now with my music playing- writing, and poetry.The song below always reminds me of good times because Ive been playing in my garage since I was ten. Wow twenty years, I never really accepted I was getting older until I heard Pearl Jam followed by Led Zeppelin on the classic rock stations.cheers

"In The Garage"
I've got the Dungeon Master's Guide.
I've got a 12-sided die.
I've got Kitty Pryde
And Nightcrawler too
Waiting there for me.
Yes I do, I do.

I've got posters on the wall,
My favorite rock group, KISS.
I've got Ace Frehley.
I've got Peter Criss
Waiting there for me.
Yes I do, I do

In the garage, I feel safe.
No one cares about my ways.
In the garage where I belong.
No one hears me sing this song.
In the garage.

I've got an electric guitar.
I play my stupid songs.
I write these stupid words
And I love every one
Waiting there for me.
Yes I do, I do.

In the garage, I feel safe.
No one laughs about my ways.
In the garage where I belong.
No one hears me

No one hears me sing this song.
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darkhorse555

a touching treasure

a spirit gasps
swimming passion
in your
mere presence
flowing golden
each breath
inside desires
breathtaking looking
upon one treasure

the soul dances
awestruck by beauty
rocking senses
dazzling reflections
shine within
these eyes
whispering ever
so softly
carried upon
a silent
breathless air

priceless feelings
skipping heartbeats
sparkling diamond emotions
with treasured joy
sweetly warm happiness
sings within
a song

caressing love waves
leaving your soft
gentle footprints
touching sweeps
inside over
deep sands

brushing currents
in an ocean
paradise i found
a dream inside
the heart
your golden beautiful
my queen
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Posted: May 2014
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