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extendededdie

Happy Birthday to one who left me

Take me back to first day you said you love me
To that wonderful feeling you given to me then
Even now you cheated and betrayed that love
You still my heart everyday with an aching pain

You always knew and how I loved you forever
I saw your eyes and never knew they were fake
Although you're now left me for another
You be happy with your new other

All I wanted to love you more than yesterday
But now I just dying in loving you everyday
knowing you not with me now as you did now
So I wish you two happiness as its two years
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Posted: Jun 2021
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Didi7

My Sweetie Pie.

She glares at me with warm brown eyes;
Her posture, firm and unyielding.
I glance from my laptop to her face,
And she sighs, impatiently…still waiting.

I think I know what she wants;
But is it time? No, not yet.
I glance upward at my clock.
So what does she want me to get?

She changes her posture and lays down on the bed;
She rests a front paw on my wrist.
She’s annoyed with me now and makes a low growl,
In hopes that I’ll get the gist.

I’m not very good at reading dog signs,
So I have to guess at her need.
It’s either she’s bored and wants to play catch,
Or maybe it’s time for her feed.

How would I live without her in my life;
And how did I manage before?
She lights up my days and keeps me in tune,
She’s my life-saver for sure.

Few things I have with me can give my life joy,
Like the joy she inspires in me.
Sweetie’s well-named; she’s a ‘sweet-tempered’ soul,
And a gift that keeps giving sweetly.
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Posted: Aug 2022
About this poem:
My sister and ex-sister-in-law often say that my dog, Sweetie Pie, behaves much like a real person. They describe as being “a whole human”. She amazes us.
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extendededdie

Until we meet again

My love my love
My sweetest love
I will never say goodbye
Sea may rise
Sky may fall
My love for you
Will never die
My angel my angel
My lying angel
All the tears I've cried
On all you lied
I may not hate
As you all i loved
Go on go on
Go happily on
As your smile all I want
Be happier more
Be honest more
As now I wait
Until we meet again.
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Posted: Jun 2021
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DiggableHippy49

Game Of Death

A game of death - Hey, I am good for!,
Just tell me where to play?,
Well, I finally got my invite!,
On a cold winter day, -
In my mind demons were warring,
Has my Angel, she started to lose feathers from her wings,
Begging me to hold on!,
"This is not ah, The DiggableHippy's thing!" --

So, I sold my soul that night,
Just so, I could go ahead and die,
The deal was fairly simple,
I won't have to live another life, -
The figures in the shadows,
I saw, one of them smile!,
I could hear the wind outside my head,
Blowing a thousand miles! --

Game of death (x2)

I looked down at my body,
After a convulsive rage,
I saw a light outside my door,
That slammed in my face!, -
At this point nothing happened,
Just felt a little cold,
Until I suddenly realized,
My soul had turn to stone!, --

My Angel that warned me,
Was looking into my eyes,
She said, "I can simply free you!",
"But you know there is a price?!", -
"A Game of Death you wanted",
"Your soul is up for grabs!",
"If you want your freedom?",
"Serve me a fallen Angels head!?", --

Game of death (x2)

I found myself alone,
Walking a crooked path,
A shadow flew above me!,
Then I heard a wicked laugh!, -
Shades of light grew darker,
Until I could barely see!,
But I knew if it could make a sound....,
It could surely bleed, --

The shadow withdrew it's sword,
That slashed into my head!,
But that cut was into a side of me,
That has long been dead!, -
Well, I picked up the shadow's blade,
Before it could be retrieved!,
I struck one hard blow!,
That brought it to it's knees!, --

Game of death (x2)

From the darkness before me,
I was blinded from the light,
Just to see a burning Angel,
Dancing with delight!, -
"Which one was your enemy?",
"You just couldn't tell?",
"And with the head of the Angel losing her wings from above!",
"You have a special place in Hell! lol" , --

Before I could say anything!,
Electric shock brought me back to life,
From the f*cking rescue team,
That responded from my ex-wife, -
In pain, here I go again!,
Never shall I rest!,
Has I wait patiently,
For another Game Of Death!, --

Game of death (x2)
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Posted: Oct 2022
About this poem:
I wrote this 11-25-2010. Thinking some ghosts, ghouls, goblins, headbangers, and hippies may get a kick out of this one! lol Have a happy and safe Halloween, folks! Until then...
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Unknown

I am "who"!

From the birth wanted to discover
who am I and what I am here for!
Now I am coming to fifty one
yet my question has found answer none!

Everything is changing all the time
me, you and all of the existence!
by the time i feel I know, who I am!
second later life becomes magicle pretence!

lIfe is a journey that never stop....
gives you an idea as you are the "boss'
yet keep going away from your own hands
in the end nothing remains...
turns in to sands!
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Posted: Jul 2011
About this poem:
its about journey of life, just one truth came in to my mind. At the time I wrote this I was in trans in serching the question "who" I am?
this is not about life confusion, its about spiritual realisation!
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Mountainous69

Mountains of love

y love is like the sky it could take you high,high,high. It feels so good to have love in your corner. Someone who loves you from your head to your toes. Know matter the season is the reason. Poems is love for the soul. It's here to help you grow,sometimes to help you let go of all the pain and sorrow to help you feel again to mend thee.Hurts in your heart,body and soul,with Love Love Love?
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Posted: Feb 2012
About this poem:
Holidays, Friendship, Lost Love.
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duggsilver2013

The Hopeless Hopeful

Today an old couple kissed in the middle of the street.
Time ceased in mid traffic as their pothole became their retreat.
Thats when I knew I had to find you
Heaven knows my humble plea. Even if it takes eternity,
I'd search the concrete jungle to the congo deep.
A thousand hurricane Sandy's couldn't keep you from me.
Tomorrow will be sweeter with you right beside me.
Today's the day I met you because yesterday's dream woke me.
Alone at the bar in a club full of people eye to eye the scenery,
90 proofing what's bottled up inside until they're stress free.
It's singles night and where could you be,
possibly hidden in cupid's cliche'd fray waiting for yours truly?
As someday permeates through a few stoic faced hopefuls
and the DJ contiues to play through a few stolen moments
where are you? I'll find you. Your out there,flesh of my flesh and bone of my bone until the next chapter.

written by duggsilver2013
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Posted: Nov 2012
About this poem:
This poem is a snapshot of a hopeful hopeless romantic. This goes out to all those single who beleive there is someone out there for them in the name of love.
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scottishjohn

short but sweet

loving life for life is loving
to smile and sing and dance about to walk and run
to breath and feel to see and touch
to wish then have to give and get
"will you forget?"
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Posted: Sep 2012
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nayden0

Kiss me

I feel you laying close to me,
but who are you, my gentle dream?
Your beauty seems to be
the gorgeous I`ve ever seen...

I beg you, wake me with a kiss
in the early hours of this rainy day!
I know that happiness exist
and I hope it is here to stay...
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Posted: Jul 2012
About this poem:
Life is short. Forgive quickly, kiss slowly, love truly, laugh uncontrollably and never regret anything that made you smile !
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Unknown

Dont ever question that

Don't ever question that

Enough to hold you to the brightest of lights,
to place you dangerously close to that sun,
enough to acknowledge the flaws you can't ignore
and recognize the cause of what's done is done,
more than enough to put my name behind my ideals,
and neglect my logic twice daily.
enough to keep me looking for my lucy in the sky with gems,
when I remember how you used to call me baby,
enough to look in my mirror with detest for every tear you shed regardless of
why you wept,
enough to curse any man who can't appreciate the depth of the ocean i swam
till i ran out of breath.

I love you, don't ever question that,
that's why we'll probably never get along.
if I was better at finding the right words to say, I wouldn't need to write
these songs.

Riding the public transit,
I study the blank stares to answer my questions of how and why I got so many
grey hairs. I take care of the nervous that runs through my extension cord,
and I reflect on that reoccurring dream where we met the Lord.
single file lines, to give her a pound one at a time but when i faced her-
I attempted to embrace her, she looked so fine,
I awoke from my sleep before her bodyguard had a chance to beat me to
submission and I still walk with my religion.
I watched the children scurry in circles around a two-way mirror,
worrying about which side of the glass projects the reflection clearer.
hear the whispers of the wind trying to get me to grin,
gassing' me up about the love that I plucked and I've been stuck within,
for every eclipse that stares at me from the other side of a paper cup of
espresso-
I light a match beneath a kettle,
and for ever set of lips that become attached and equipped with that program
to seek success, i bleed my ethics out a slow drip.
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I used to know a man who met a woman, dont remember where,
big beautiful eyes and light brown hair,
she was from the burbs, he was from the south side of the city,
this was back when Franklin avenue was still pretty.
two different worlds apart, but the world is just a small town-
we all know how people like to get down.
here we go, aquarius, pisces,
feel the flow of the fluid as I swim through it to free my soul.
bush shoved the cane without the glove numbed the pain.
the magic from up above what it does for the brain,
make the love, paint the picture, write the song, the player met a virgin
made a virgo named him sean.
make the love, paint the picture, write the song, the player met a virgin
made a virgo named him sean.
make the love, paint the picture and write that song till the break of dawn.
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Posted: Jan 2011
About this poem:
(this is not a poem, i get alot of my poetic influence from musicians and alot of people miss out on good stuff because there not into a certain genre of music so enjoy ill be posting more in the future. If you have any questions as to the artist or would like more references id be glad to answer.)
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