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pinklady1967

DARKNESS..A.R.R..

There's something mysterious..but magical about darkness..the birds glide back to there coups..most creatures sleep..most creatures except me..out come the stars..gone are the clouds..just listen to the crickets wide eyed and schreeching with glee..sounding so proud..in this darkness..down goes the moon away from the hills..but..most of all..i love the darkness..no cteature sees or feels my totured soul and sadness..no creature but me..Written By robyn bashford..
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Posted: Aug 2012
About this poem:
TO DARKNESS..
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pinklady1967

MY WISH..A.R.R..

I wish i had loving angels to guide me through the day..i would happily pay them a penny each then merrily be on my way..i need these sweet little angels to save me from this internal war..i guess for now i'll have to fight with all my strength to achieve what i'm searching for..i know my loving angels will suddenly appear some day to guide me through my troubled world then no longer will i live in saddness and fear..so..dear illusive angels do answer my prayers..don't leave me here in this world alone frightened and despaired..so..once again sweet angels..help me ! guide me ! let me be me !..yes ! i want to be internally free..that's all i wish to ever be..free ! free ! free !..Written By robyn bashford..A.R.R.
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Posted: Aug 2012
About this poem:
DEDICATED TO THOSE THAT ARE TROUBLED..
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Dementia

The Tragedy

Woke up to a thought
That never crossed my mind before
You and me, we finally
Even up the final score
So many ways to break up
That you no longer try anymore
In the moonlight I saw you cry
Like so many times before

And I wonder now
If I could've saved you somehow

But can't you see, it wasn't me
I never meant to hurt you this way
In the park with a broken heart
I'll never forget the day
The tragedy that wasn't meant to be
Unfolded before my very eyes
Stubborn hopes only kept you afloat
And you never even said goodbye

Now days go by so slow
And all I can do now is think
Even ships, solidly built
Can crash and suddenly sink
We must have been so blind
Not to see the missing link
We all have addictions
But you never would give up the drink

And I wonder now
If I could've saved you somehow

But can't you see it wasn't me
I never meant to hurt you this way
In the park with a broken heart
I'll never forget the day
The tragedy that wasn't meant to be
Unfolded before my very eyes
Stubborn hopes only kept you afloat
And you never even said goodbye

And the tragedy
Is that you wouldn't believe...
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Posted: Nov 2012
About this poem:
One of my songs I wrote
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Unknown

I don't wanna get serious

I don't wanna get serious
if I did you'd be the one
I just wanna go out
and have some fun

I've been hurt more than once
I couldn't stand it again
I just want to go out
and have some fun
I don't wanna talk about love
I don't wanna talk about love

I don't wanna get serious
if I did you'd be the one
I just wanna go out
and have some fun

Baby you're mighty tempting
it's hard to turn to stone
I just want to go out
and have some fun
I don't wanna talk about love
I don't wanna talk about love

I don't wanna get serious
if I did you'd be the one
I just wanna go out
and have some fun

© 2012 Marcus Goodman
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Posted: Jan 2012
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Will1991

Phrase of haze

In the end it receeded, the feelings he needed
it all stayed inside, bitter but warm
The creature resided in a dead girl delightful,
of the uprising and changing of minds

Converging on zero her light off the mirror
refracted with caution and bowed through the rain.
A world of unkowing, lifeless and growing,
a spawn so abnormal it holds grudges aside.

Re-forming past glory, building authority
conception has only begun...
Anatomys deformed, contorted by the will
of one which feeds on the need to belong.
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Posted: Apr 2012
About this poem:
this is the first 'poem' that i wrote. Its not really about any one thing in particular. It expresses the fog which hangs around in my head when things get hard and I struggle to make a decision.
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kerry555

andromdeda

our love is far more greater than andromeda
and all the milky way
together forever our love will always be this way
your beautiful like andromeda far out in space
your my heaven here on earth

when i kiss you i drift along the milky way
and through the universe
when we make love the orbits of the planets
shoot quickly to reverse
your beautiful like andromeda
far out in space
your my heaven here on earth

our love will always be together
like clusters deep in space
your beauty's far more greater than any other girl
in the human race
your beautiful like andromeda far out in space
your my heaven here on earth
repeat last two lines
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Posted: Feb 2012
About this poem:
I wrote this for a dream girl i have never met to hear the song
youtube (kerry hodge andromeda
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Unknown

Hold me Hold me baby

All the stars in the sky
aren't as pretty As the ones in your eyes
All the stars in the sky
aren't as pretty As the ones in your eyes
And the way you make me feel
Like I found heaven on this earth

The oceans mighty pretty
But just doesn't compare to you
The oceans mighty pretty
But just doesn't compare to you
And the way you make me feel
Like I found heaven on this earth

Hold me Hold me baby all night long
Hold me Hold me baby all night long



© 2012 Marcus Goodman
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Posted: Jan 2012
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lorentz

my D day lady

anonymous was my life..
and you came,
gathering me
the flower of your charm..
you,my D letter;
D loved like a promised delight,
D lake a dream,
D my secret drama..
ablazing you,
in the flow of my arms,
discretly,stealing,your lips,
a kiss..
I feel you confused,
maybe...
conquered...
lets have,love,
a long walk beyond the daybreak...
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Posted: Aug 2011
About this poem:
my lady from saigon requested me a poem..
sorry..you,lonesome armadillo tatooed ohio trucker..
drive a pint on..
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Unknown

black country girl song

tight jeans
white tank
tell me baby what does it say
red lips ,perfume
probly sweat it out in a min or two
i know, it's hot
sun goin down lust comeing out at dawn
c u watching me baby
walking this dirty oh street lookin sexy

yeah i hear them haters talkin quietly
jealous they dont got what i got see
who's cares lets go
let me show u somthing your woman needs to learn
they say that i want prey
their right let me tell ya wat i 'm goin to do
so here we go 1,2
(chours)
i'm a lay you in my sheets cause right now u look so sweet
i'm a tie to the bed cuz they say i rope the best
i'm a swing that rope around you and play that country music

i'm a get you where i want you
i'm a take you how i need you
i'm a show you what your missing
i'm a give you a good kissing
i'm a black country girl
and i'm gonna rock your world
so shut up and listen to a black girls
country lessons

i'm a lay you in my sheets cause right now u look so sweet
i'm tie to the bed cuz they say i rope the best
i'm a swing that rope around you and play that country music

i'm a black country girl
and i'm gonna rock your world............

i'm a take you how i need you
i'm a show you what your missing
i'm a give you a good kissing
i'm a black country girl
and i'm gonna rock your world
so shut up and listen to a black girls
country lessons

i'm a black country girl
and i'm gonna rock your world............
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Posted: Aug 2011
About this poem:
late night didle dabbing
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Unknown

what propels u to me?...

Her fate calls out my name; & i breathe into her mouth the words ive kept since her finding..."Ur hair smells of an orchid aside a towering waterfall.. almost springtime.. a sensual compilimg. Envision this growl swells within my soul..as I rest my fingers now upon what makes me whole.. these vacant grand piano keys..so.. just so..that from within this shell..people will tell of a breeze propels u to me. PDP
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Posted: Jun 2011
About this poem:
I dare to believe in fate... a crossing of gravitational-pull as far as land reaches.. this has misic to it... dave matthews could deliver.. pretty hot should see video... there's more.
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