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iluvisis1

Lesson Learned

I'm sad
my heart has
lost its
beat.
I cried
my eyes look
like my feet.
I blew my
nose and
sniffed abit,
and called myself
a real
nitwit.
I just don't
get it maybe
I'm dumb.
I'm not but
but wish to stay
so numb.
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Posted: May 2011
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Unknown

it's over

sittin in my room
all by myself and i
wonder why i'm all alone
please tell me why
i'm all fed up
oh
i think it's time to go
get dressed up
forget about you and i..........

no it's not my fault
that you chose to leave and i'm stil alive and out tonight
doin fine
don't even try
to lie
and say that i'm
your girl
to dis that guy
it aint goin to fly

so yeah

you figured out that
i was the one
but it's just to late so baby bounce
let me do me
(chours)
cause you know it's over
don't even try to say that i'm your girl
and your my guy
boy dont lie
cuz you know it's over
don't even try to justify
it was my fault
so bye bye bye
cuz you know it's over
don't even try to justify
it was my fault
so bye bye bye

sittin in my room
all by myself and i
wonder why i'm all alone
please tell me why
i'm all fed up
oh
i think it's time to go
get dressed up
forget about you and i..........

(chours)
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Posted: Aug 2011
About this poem:
late night thinkin thts all
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lorentz

connecting twitts

connect me mug
lust me after brunch
delete me deluded..
connect my head
net,net..
red light
my jolly siberian
my icy nigerian..
web scam today
my love is melt away
single me out,lol,
I'm such a lonatic..
gambling the pride of illusions
rate me,once again or twice
pretty rat player..
please good master tangle
deconnect my exhaust hate
make me virtual
I'm afraid to be real..
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Posted: Aug 2011
About this poem:
pure crackpot creation..in a dream I met the god machine game..
sorry guys Iam autistic,but the law recognize my right to subversion.
I love you all.
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Unknown

I breath for you

Silent like the night
you came into my life
then like thunder
You cast me under your spell
The electricity that surged
through my soul
I was half a man
then you made me whole
Now you're leaving
I need to let you know
Just let me say these words
before you go

I breathe for you
Yes,I breathe for you

Gasping and coughing
I need your fresh air
You just turn from me
as if you don't care

I breathe for you
Yes,I breathe for you

© 2012 Marcus Goodman
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Posted: Feb 2012
About this poem:
I wrote this like 20 years ago
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Unknown

Melinda Ray

She wakes me every morning
with a smile and kiss
when I'm away at work
I'm the one she'll miss
she's the one I wanted
she was made for me
my sweet Melinda Ray
the woman of my dreams

She's always been there when
I've been down on luck
when I need someone
she always picks me up
she's the one I wanted
she was made for me
my sweet Melinda Ray
the woman of my dreams

She is beautiful
I want her to know
she is beautiful
and I love her so

she's the one I wanted
she was made for me
my sweet Melinda Ray
the woman of my dreams

© 2012 Marcus Goodman
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Posted: Jan 2012
About this poem:
Song I wrote for someone long time ago the song outlasted her
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marilyn97

Gods Love

Gods love is so awesome, he forgives us when we do wrong, man leaves us when we makes mistakes, god covers us with unconditional love, man covers us with grief and hate, god gives joy man brings sorrow, a gift of god is his son , man give gifts and take them away, gods love is promise he keeps to never leave or forsakes us, man makes promise he know he want keep, gods love guides me when im lost,mans love guides me into darkness, gods love is grace and merecyful god love me and its true how i know the bible told me so.
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Posted: Feb 2012
About this poem:
when i wrote this poem, i wasfeelin loss of love feeling gods love and not man, talking of gods love for me and not man
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tryst

My Dormant Love

Love in the state of mortified sleep
would arise and upon you peep
but for the grace of God given will
i swallow the notion
a bitter pill

Love in dormancy
Love so true
Heart unrelenting
Forever loving you

Here i stand and watch you go
Feeling agony, feeling woe
To be with her instead of me
So God's will performed may be
His promises under my head
Ahh! sometimes a rocky bed


Love in dormancy
Love so true
Heart unrelenting
Forever loving you
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Posted: Jun 2012
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Will1991

Adapt or Starve

Give me the power to undermine the qualities that restrict the growth of self. Walk away, its over...here stands a new machine.

Endings are the only beginnings from now.
Time waits for no one but i will live forever.
Enter the void...

Everythings real, congruently relevant,
speak up and satisfy our minds.
Project the past, ingest the future,
convert your feelings until the sensation is right.

Everyone tells me i blew it but what they dont know is i knew it.
Two steps ahead of no one i am the king of the world unkown,
to you its a reality full of hostility.

Ive tasted it before and ill swallow it again.
You pushed me too far toward the end.
If theres no end then why do you fear it?

Its evident that your analysis is critical,
of the hypothesis, it never was ethical.
Sample the nerves of the system that keeps them at bay.
In the end youll conclude there will always be a way.

Keep your input open and your output shut.
Download all you need and severe the link......
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Posted: Apr 2012
About this poem:
This is about all the events in life that happen that are out of our control. If things didnt go your way then you have to take action to either adapt to the situation or take steps to rid yourself of the burden.

My original intention when i wrote this was to come off as aggressive and fed up, but ive learnt not to push too many powerful feelings across to the reader and let them substitute their own.
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phreeyomind

The Essence of Love

The Essence of Love
Lady when you come home
I'm gonna rub your back
No...you didn't even have to ask
You've been working hard all day long
Now it's time for you to relax

I heard it in your voice
That your day was heavy
Now...close your eyes
Shut your mind down
In a few minutes your bath water is ready

You see...it's exciting to keep
A woman happy with simplicity
Because when I love...love deeply
And it's organically grown

Just like my lyrics that don't
Miss from my dome because my mind
Is always on roam in stereo speaking...
With clarity...although you ain't trying to be
In your dreams you're gonna remember me

See the essence of love can be so
Hypnotic, symbolically I drop knowledge
Like graduates who never made it to college
And never got caught up with terms and perms...
Like poppin' collars

The essence of love
Should never be equated
With home many dollars are
Within a man's wallet!

The fact of the matter is this...
You have to appreciate what you've got
Can you all equal-stand what I'm saying
See...I'm a one woman's man
I cook up love so sweet that...
It's never bland
I want to make love near palm trees and golden sands
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Posted: Oct 2012
About this poem:
This poem is off the cd The Coldest Summer Ever. I've been inspired to write about love from the Most High. Hope you like it. Peace and blessings be unto you all.

Phreeyomind
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pinklady1967

CHILDS PLAY..A.R.R

A little boy wakes up with a love for life..full of mischief then gets into strife..he says..mummy..i love you..and gives her a cheeky big hug..in a distance mum watched him play..she is hoping what he builds will stay..what ever the little boy was building comes apart..then joined with a horrid display.and pouts..mummy comes along..its ok little love..she gives the toy a poke..click..then said to her little boy..now it should stay..the look of delight on the little boys face as he says thankyou mummy and continues to play..Written By..robyn bashford..
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Posted: Aug 2012
About this poem:
DEDICATED TO ALL MUMS..
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