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Unknown

Three Days in May

Sun, moon and stars Light years away

Downward spiral,..World in decay,..


Virgin forest, Mountain flower,.

Heartshaped leaf, Untapped desire,.


Two hearts born pure Yet miles away

Where brought together Those three days in May


An artist, woman, Romantic,.. a child

Wispers of strength,.Her eyes,....her smile,.


Yet fate alone Brought together to stay

Just two lonly hearts Those three days in May
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Posted: Jan 2010
About this poem:
This poem is to my sweetheart, we met here. Talked for a while.
Then we met, we went for a long walk,..... and fell in love!
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aware3

WORDS

Speak gentle words, so others will incline their ear
to better hear, the words you have to say.
Speak harsh or unkind words,
then surely, they will only turn away.

Please don't aim your words like arrows,
the sort, that so often wound the soul.
For words can make a loving, warm heart,
turn into one, that's icy cold.

For once words tumble off the tongue,
you can never, call them back.
Now just as deadly missiles,
they're launched only, to attack.

You can't control the words, that others may say,
but the words you speak, are always up to you.
Pray,that you choose each one wisely,
asking if it's good or harm, that your words will do ?

For words can either build a body up,
or tear a body, slowly down.
Cracking and crumbling the foundation of a life,
that once stood so firm, on solid ground.
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Posted: Aug 2009
About this poem:
Words like our thoughts, carry a strong energy ! I wrote this poem, as a reminder to myself-to always remember... just how powerful words truly are. In particular, those that we speak, to our selves !
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Unknown

Mail From a Friend

The mailbox lights up shiny red,
Some someone wants to talk to me!
I clicked the button, scrolled and read,
It's from a friend who's very sweet.

She tells me of her house and town,
And all about what's going on.
She asks me if I'm feeling down,
Or if I'm happy with the dawn.

I am delighted to receive,
Each small detail is like a gem.
And her concerns make me believe,
She cares, or wouldn't ask me them.

My reply will start with thanks,
For such sweet words she thought to send.
So happy makes me want to dance,
To get an email from a friend.
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Posted: Jul 2010
About this poem:
Isn't it exciting when that Mailbox or Flowerbox button lights up?
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Unknown

Sweet Release

When things are going badly,
And you're feeling down and blue,
The whole world seems against you,
Here is something you can do.

Find a quiet, private place,
Where nobody will intrude.
Lock the door and draw the blinds,
To ensure your solitude.

Take a moment to relax,
Let your mind and thoughts run free.
Remove restrictive clothing,
And indulge your fantasies.

Dim all lights except your screen,
Play some music nice and low.
Now don't get in a hurry,
'Cause it's best to take it slow.

There's nothing wrong or sinful,
In composing poetry.
Just wash your hands when finished,
And don't read that cr@p to me.
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Posted: Jul 2010
About this poem:
Just for fun... :D
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Unknown

On Lonliness

Alone doesn't always mean lonely,
Sometimes solitude is just fine.
And lonliness can be just only,
A matter of your state of mind.

You have to be comf'trable living,
Within your owm skin first of all.
And then you can think about giving,
Some other lone spirit a call.

Perhaps you may then meet a kindred,
A yang to match up to your yin,
Some someone to catch your intentions,
Who's been to the place that you're in.

Don't worry there's somebody out there,
So til the right one comes along,
Just hold your head up like you don't care,
And greet each new day with a song.
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Posted: Jul 2010
About this poem:
Was feelin' a little lonely, so I wrote it away. :D
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sabeel

unforgetable

i cannot forget that flower,
which gave me something to remember !
it was so beautiful
and smiling to the world
with the rose petals.
it was so shy, when i seen her,
trying to hide its face from me
with the help of wind!
it failed and gave me a good smile .
i tried to kiss her, but never allowed
it never wants to be used but to be fresh !
so i have to leave it
and to search other one to fill
my dreams..
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Posted: Jun 2009
About this poem:
every time we have to understand others felings too..
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Unknown

People, who can be trusted

People, who can be trusted are very important,
It’s so difficult – being reliable person in life.
Always those who are kind have to go through discomfort,
But without them world wouldn’t be light and bright.
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Posted: May 2012
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aware3

The Queen Of Queens

Submerged in shame in a sea of flames, she hears her people cries
As an angry sun rises up each day, against her blackened skies
A stunned world watches in disbelief, none believin' what is seen
All asking how could this happen, to that most beloved queen ?

In a watery grave around her, she waits now in grim despair
How will anybody save her ?, somehow we all should care
But she will rise again someday, like a phoenix through the fire
In a fortress befitting for a queen, built up strong and higher

For she will always be the queen of queens
Our lady fair, our New Orleans
Our precious home, sweet precious home
Oh mon Dieu... save our queen, Save our home, our New Orleans
Save our queen, our precious queen...our New Orleans
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Posted: Mar 2011
About this poem:
This poem is the closest to my heart, since this was happening to my city, my home. It was written during hurricane Katrina 2005.
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Unknown

The Whole Package

I want it all in one so sweet,
From flowing hair to dainty feet.
That one who'll be my closest friend,
To be with me until the end.

She'll be my lover too, of course,
Be truly wild with no remorse.
And love me with a love so true,
To lift me up when I feel blue.

We will be partners, even up,
Rejoicing as we share each cup.
And if we fight I will concede,
To never hurt this one I need.

Together, ev'rything we'll do,
The things she likes and I do too.
And when we go to bed at night,
We'll hold each other oh so tight.

To find this one I'll do my best,
I'll search and search and never rest.
I'll keep on looking til I see,
The one who's really right for me.
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Posted: Sep 2010
About this poem:
I'm determined...
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QuietStormF

I love you more..

Sometimes it's hard for me to say to you..
All of the things that I want to
And it's not that I don't care..
Because you know I do..
Sometimes, I hold back
maybe out of fear.
But then I guess .. sometimes,
Maybe we all do.



And I want for you to know,
That I am always here for you..
I'm as close as the telephone,
And if you needed me,
Well I want for you to know,

That I'd come running
Straight to you...
There's nothing, and no one,.
Could ever keep us apart..
Because you have my heart..
You have my soul..
And I just wanted you to know.

That no matter what happens, down the road..
Ill always love you more
Than life itself,
Such a love as ours
Can only grow..

We can't always predict what
life's journey will inflict..
But I can promise you this..
When you say you love me,
I want you to know..
I love you more.

I love you more..
Than the cherry blossoms in the Springtime..
More than the sunshine when it warms my body
On a sunny July day..
I love you more than than I love the first rose
of the summer
That I so painatakingly
choose for my bouquet..

I guess what I am trying to say,
Is no matter,
How much you say that you love me..
I love you more.

There's never been anyone whose smile..
Could warm my day..
Or make me feel quite the way..that you do..
And I know that when I look into your eyes..
No matter what..
I love you so much...
And everthing is just going to be ok..

So when you say that you love me
and you miss me..
And you're not sure just what
it is I'm feeling..
I just want for you to know...
that I do love you so..

And I always will..
And no matter how much you say you love me..
Till time stands still,
And for all eternity..
I want for you to know..
That I do love you so..
And I want for you to know..

I'll always love you so.
I love you more..
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Posted: Nov 2009
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